Lets Beef - Battle Rap Forums - The League: TalkSick Vs Fiji Osa (16 Liner)

Just to make it easier to read.

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TalkSick

"Kiddo -_-...... Il crunch this TUCAN "FRUIT" THROUGH AND THROUGH widda mean 16 this DUDE HANDS YOU! Less face it!...Osa couldnt "handle bangin bars" in the BLUE MAN GROUP all rockin FU MANCHU'S! (Its just TOO DAMN TRUE!)/" ..

I didn't get it. I know who and what a Fu Manchu is and who the Blue Men are but I just didn't get the relation with the quoted handle bars unless u meant the moustache. In which case it wasnt really hitting. Anyway.

"*Clears throat* Fact is that no one knows who this "OSA" NOOBIE IS, Yall make me wanna FOLD THIS ROOKIE QUICK, I mean my "clips still good" like OLDER MOVIE SCRIPTS,"
good enough to "Open him up to expose his future" on some FORTUNE COOKIE SHIT!/...

Shit's too dated movie scripts/clips n fortune cookies/open up/future plus their not even flipped decently. Plus is had filler...

"If you "Flew/Flu in the military", You should know that "SICK'LL PUMP LEAD, kiddo you aint SPITTIN ROUGH TEXT! Idk i must have been SIPPIN ON HEN cause I "told ya you was sleepin at the top" like tha PRISON BUNK BEDS! (You know your SILLY DRUNK WHEN!! sheesh!)/"

...Meh...Sleeping on top/Bunk Beds.

"Just like a "pervert wit credit" il only SETTLE FOR "HOT-LINES" I mean my "readings are twisted" like da' DEVIL WIT COCKED EYES, so when the METAL AND GLOCKS FLY i could "chop the whole left side of you"....and youd still NEVA' BE "ALL RIGHT"! (Get it?))/"

.....Really?.... Never be all right. Because I chopped the left side... Get it?..Yeah I got it. Moving on.

"Famoose, the Dps "line up" sure as shit aint "DRAWN" TA' OSA, MY DUDE and if this Lizman-lookin fuck get close? Il PALM DA' TOASTA' TO SHOOT wit bullets that'll "straight touch this faggot", i call it da' JOHN TRAVOLTA MASSEUSE! (Seee ya)/" ...

Lmao... This was the best line. it was a fairly current flip, straight to the point and hit.

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Fiji

"Since he 'come in' w/ 'pussy lines' I'll pad-up this MENSTRUAL NOTATION! An this 'would be fine' but ya PENCIL ROTATION proves all you 'thought up' .. lacking MENTAL OVATION so if Talk think this a 'walk in the park' watch 'Trigga get held-up' and wasted in a CENTRAL LOCATION!"

What's a menstrual notation? I know what a MENSURAL notation is. is that what you meant. Though considering the quoted set up before it, I guess not.

Just to clear some things up. I get 'wood/would be fine' = 'pencil rotation' and 'thought up' instead of stands up = 'MENTAL ovation.' But it's all to vauge to really hit. It's like a slightly more coherent and subtle Lizman job. Stop the cheesy suggestive hint plays, their corney and don't hit.

"Why are you eager to meet the reaper? Don't 'lie there' like you not my cheerleader w/ ya STREAMERS BAND POM-POMS an STATE RALLIES BITCH its ok to act-sick but kill the 'black gig' cos what you 'expresso' CREAMER BRAND, GUAM BROMME an TASTE BADLY SHIT!"

^Wtf do you read the shit you say before you post?

"what you 'expresso' CREAMER BRAND, GUAM BROMME an TASTE BADLY SHIT!"

no hate but that's just a jumbled up tounge fuck of words no matter the play. Wording is far too poor for it to land a clean hit, atleast with me. Was the expresso a entendre for express so? if it was it just didn't work at all especially with the jumbled up Mess of words that came after it.

"Rhetorical question .. why is 'talk progressed to lead' but no PRODUCTION SHOWN? . Teach me 'Scripts' but what happens if I 'End Peace Talk' an INSTRUCTIONS THROWN which results to me BUSTING DOMES since yer 'Mount ta Fiji is Ashes' it's nature's design he had to get 'RUPTION ON' JUS FUCKING DON'T we see the 'F Bra/effort' but ya fillers 'B Cups' ya needa REDUCTION HOLMES butt Ver is good 'FA SUCKING BONES' an since her path stopped ima 'work her' afta i put the 'Barrel to ya side' no CONSTRUCTION ZONES!"

Meh it's all over the place making it a pain to read. Your wording is painful to read.

"Since you wanna be 'Remembered for dreaming' if i see KING, FIRING an BLAST SIR CROWN.. I rose early to sleep you w/ 'birdies n eagles' ensuring you surley 'below par' so ima put'T in the dirt' when i 'SWING IRON this MASTER ROUND!'"

Last bar even though the whole golf thing is Super played, weirdly enough it was your hardest hit. Looks like both of you out what was initially the first bars you thought of at the end if both ya verses to end strong.

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