can i get some feedback on a track?
 

Yeah this some new shit still working on my mixing this sounds low to me... vocals low.. wanna re-record just wanna get an idea on what i should fix... anything constructive appreciated

damn yo..... nothing?

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@RiGGA the end was inspired by u

lmfaooo son.... c'mon.. lol... this shit funny as hell tho

link not working for me yo

Me either.

@Ticket @khryme killz doesn't work???



lol ya'll fuckin with me try that weird

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@Ticket @khryme killz doesn't work???



lol ya'll fuckin with me try that weird

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http://snd.sc/IJ5rO8

This was nice man. Your Presence n (flow less so) was up and down (Probably the slow beat) but over all it was nice. Feeling the message. I enjoyed it. Liked the "No Palm can tell the future" line. Definitely had it's moments but from a personal view point I would have preferred it to be more concise. Over all nice though.

Flow was a bit choppy at times. Heard better from u tbh.

This is not my style of hip hop anyway probs thats why i didnt like it that much...all n all though it was a good effort