Student vs Black-Book (Round 1) Black-Book wins.
 

Student vs Black-Book

House rules apply. Any questions, contact me.

Check ins are due Monday (March 5th) at 11.59PM EST
Verses are due Friday (March 9th) at 11.59PM EST

Voting Rubix
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Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

My charm & looks allow me to pull wool over the eyes of the people. Oh, how they fall into my trap not knowing the look in my eyes are deceitful.
I'm a monster, & I won't deny it. But I'll weave a story with words, so that if you buy it, you'll feel like you're being trampled by a riot.
I saw her out of my eye's corner, & booked her a trip to the coroner. She didn't know it, but her fate was already sealed & no one warned her.
I swept in & gained her trust in a matter of minutes. But it was a dog & pony show full of gimmicks.
She let her down her guard & didn't focus. But I nibbled so light at first she didn't even notice. Ah, it was too easy. She was hopeless.
Time progressed & my lies had yet been uncovered. So I moved in, & she should have felt smothered, but she didn't even tremble..never even shuddered.
That's when I bit in deep to bring an end of my deadly scheme. I sucked the life out of her; I took everything.
She's lost it all, & is barely holding on. She says I've ruined her..oh? She finally knows what's going on? But it's too late, I take the last gulp of blood & keep rolling on.
I escape into the night with no problem whatsoever, feeling so clever thinking my scheme couldn't go better.
She's left fading out. There's not even an escaping doubt.
Life has left her body, and she embarks off to the Godly land wondering if the Holy Creator had always had this oddly planned?

Now, do you see what I'm conveying? Do you get what I'm done saying?
I'm a monster of a conman always scheming to find an innocent victim dreaming of a life with meaning, & ruin those dreams in the darkest hours of the evening.
I'll take the clothes off their back, & choke them out of everything they own till they're asking where's the air at? & you ask how I can bare that?
Well, it's cuz I'm a heathen who feels no remorse. Satan showed me his path & I followed the course. So I escape into the night heartless, thoughtless... a corpse.

@Student check in by 11.59pm Monday 5th please

Checkin IN

@Student there will be an extension til 11.59PM on Sunday, please drop your verse by then

I Was Going To Drop Tonight I Thought The Cut-off Was Friday Tonight But Okay I'll Still Drop Soon.

@Student our friendship is over -_-

@Black-Book wins via no show! Thanks for submitting, the next round should be an all-showing round so look out for when it starts! I will PM you feedback on your verse so it's not completely wasted. Thanks!

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