cyph feedback
 

dont really do cyphers but what bout this so far?.....i go APE ON A CYPHER deadlier than aimin at the GREAT WALL OF CHINA after hidin NAPALM INSIDE A STRAY DOGS VAGINA with it TAPED ON THE SIDE OF A PLANE OR A GLIDER right after i PAID OFF THE DRIVER w/ JAEG BOMBS N CIDER!!im a big mouthed scottish dude w/ a WHOLE BIN OF CHARACTER,BOLD W/ THA GRAMMER N COLDER THAN CANADA the type to rain BLOWS WITH A HAMMER ON A GRANDMA TIL SHES OPEN N FRACTURED THEN hold her broken carcass as i POSE FOR THA CAMERA!!im SO MAD W/ THE PLOTS god musta been like ''OH DAMN THIS IS HOT'' while PROGRAMMIN THIS SCOT either that or i got my DOME CRACKED AS A TOT coz now im crazy enough to GO HAM AT THE MOSQUE n tie a MOHAMED IN KNOTS!!**

As i said on IM it's dope, i like it, just be careful you're not making the whole thing about punches, separate your writers mentality from your battle mentality