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Lizman 02-14-2012 06:48 PM

Pugz ft Lizman - Keep Moving
 


Appreciate Some Feedback On That Ish

My Verse:
Only One Chance To Defend What I Been Going, Through Amends With The Fangs In The Sheep Clothing, Deceit Holding The Men With Their Feet Soled In, Opposite The Trench That We're Against And We Keep Posing; And We Keep Moving, And We Keep Strolling, The Weight On Our Backs, The Respect And The Peeps Showing, Us The Love That We Need To Keep Fighting, To Keep Our Heads Up High, Right And To Keep Writing; I Was Raised Then I Was Chased To Receive Hiding, Until I Stood Up To The Night With A Fierce Lightning, This Knowledge Gave Me The Strength To Keep Grinding, Until I Fly Like A Kite And The Beats Dieing; This Is The Cornerstone, Lifes A Gain, Just Cause We Were Born Alone Doesnt Mean We Die The Same, Live Every Day Like The Last The Cast In Your Arms Will Spray, And Kill Me So I Wont Be Sad If Id Die Today

Lizman 02-15-2012 04:44 AM

B u m p

FreezyCT 02-15-2012 01:34 PM

not gonna lie, im feeling this - every aspect...great job on the beat liz - and Pugz you did your thing on the hook...both verses were up to par - Liz you went in on some deep shit...very good collab, both vibed well off one another

Lizman 02-18-2012 04:21 AM

Thanks Man
Keep It Coming

Lizman 02-19-2012 04:51 AM

B u m p i n g

Lizman 02-19-2012 08:02 PM

B u m p i n g

RED MYST 02-23-2012 01:31 PM

gotta admit i like this, beat, hook everything good work yall

Lizman 02-23-2012 07:28 PM

Noted.
Preciated.
Keep Em Comin.

sWORDz 02-23-2012 08:06 PM

I am impressed... Don't think I've peeped any other audio's by you... but this is dope homie.
Beats impressive, Chorus is cool. Pugz verse was cool. Your verse was on that deep shii.
I liked this alot.. Cool work !

Lizman 02-24-2012 05:31 AM

Greatly Appreciated
Keep Em Coming


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