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Lizman 01-19-2012 09:32 PM

Deniro B Milk Breakdown
 
In His 64 Line Battle Versus Rule
Now I Dont Know Who He Is And (In The Smallest Minority) Don't Care
He's Verse Was Quite Creative (Prolly Wouldn't Have Been If I Watched Some More Verses Against Rule) And Well Written
However I Want Point Out A Number Of Crucial (Wordplay) Flaws In His Verse That If I Would Have Typed Them Out Every Faggotry Voter (I'm Looking At FVC You Faggits) Would Have Mentioned, Inflated And Put In Front Of The Actual Verse To Give Me A Low Vote

Now...

"Some penis/Subpeonas" Doesn't Sound The Same
[Some Peeniss] Doesn't Sound Like [Supeanah]

jewelry/jury" Doesn't Completely Sound The Same

"man delay babes/mandalay bay" Doesn't Sound The Same

You Know What.... EVERY SINGLE WORDPLAY Except "ROULETTE/RULE LET" Doesn't Work/Go Together



While I'm At It
Why Not A Couple From Rule Too

"Conquer/Concur" Doesn't Sound The Same [[KongKahr] == Up Down Speech Effect] While [[cuncoer] == Down Up Speech Effect]

"Decant/ De Cant" Don't Sound The Same; NO MATTER If Its The Modified De Cant Or The Rightful "De Chant Pour Blood" As The 'De' In Front Of It Sounds Different In The Two Languages

"M Be Seal/Imbecile" Don't Sound The Same; Again No Matter The Different Pronunciations Used As The First Cons Is Different 'M/Im'

"Ero Dead/Eroded" Don't Sound The Same; Same Issue As Above

sWORDz 01-19-2012 09:35 PM

I don't think your in the position to be critisizing anothers wordplay. :o

Lizman 01-19-2012 09:37 PM

Yes I Am
I Am Able To Break Down Anybodys Verse
No Matter If I Might Be Worse Than Either In That Battle

Óðinn 01-19-2012 11:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by _Lizman_ (Post 742153)
In His 64 Line Battle Versus Rule
Now I Dont Know Who He Is And (In The Smallest Minority) Don't Care
He's Verse Was Quite Creative (Prolly Wouldn't Have Been If I Watched Some More Verses Against Rule) And Well Written
However I Want Point Out A Number Of Crucial (Wordplay) Flaws In His Verse That If I Would Have Typed Them Out Every Faggotry Voter (I'm Looking At FVC You Faggits) Would Have Mentioned, Inflated And Put In Front Of The Actual Verse To Give Me A Low Vote

Now...

"Some penis/Subpeonas" Doesn't Sound The Same
[Some Peeniss] Doesn't Sound Like [Supeanah]

jewelry/jury" Doesn't Completely Sound The Same

"man delay babes/mandalay bay" Doesn't Sound The Same

You Know What.... EVERY SINGLE WORDPLAY Except "ROULETTE/RULE LET" Doesn't Work/Go Together



While I'm At It
Why Not A Couple From Rule Too

"Conquer/Concur" Doesn't Sound The Same [[KongKahr] == Up Down Speech Effect] While [[cuncoer] == Down Up Speech Effect]

"Decant/ De Cant" Don't Sound The Same; NO MATTER If Its The Modified De Cant Or The Rightful "De Chant Pour Blood" As The 'De' In Front Of It Sounds Different In The Two Languages

"M Be Seal/Imbecile" Don't Sound The Same; Again No Matter The Different Pronunciations Used As The First Cons Is Different 'M/Im'

"Ero Dead/Eroded" Don't Sound The Same; Same Issue As Above

Ya know what lizzy, your right.... i actually agree with ya, your not one to talk at all with wordplay, but your right... noticed rule's wordplay dipped a bit recently, (he use to be bang on with it, think he tryin so much to get new wp that he forcing it lol) & DeNiro's ones you've quoted there dont work/go together.... there vey poor infact.... i've still to peep this battle, but liz in future if your gonna break someones bars down in the forums/slander them, at least have the respect to wait till the battles over....

EJT 01-20-2012 01:34 AM

co-sign
the lizard himself

Streetz De Hood 01-20-2012 04:24 AM

yeah for some reason when it comes to these big name vets a lot of people kinda purposely overlook the things they would normally use as their reason for not voting for someone...idk if its outta fear or what but it happens

Lizman 01-20-2012 08:29 AM

Thats What We Call Appropriate Swaying.... Anybody?
And I Can Do Proper Wordplay Most Of The Time; I Just Don't Bother

IV 01-20-2012 08:48 AM

concur and conquer sound identical

IV 01-20-2012 08:50 AM

But saying that, i do agree with streetz... some people dont point out faults in vets verses (although RULE is FAR from a vet) in fear most probably. I overlook wordplay most the time anyway and don't use it myself

Óðinn 01-20-2012 10:27 AM

im still in shock that i actually agree with you lizman haha... this is the first time i've agreed with you on something in regards to Text Battling... lol haha


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