the moment you get *writers* block and just type anything
 

fuck that shit, i invade like water attacking a sand pit, im back at cha grans crib, tucked up in a blanket, red riding hood, whers ya basket? fuck, fucking with me you'll get ya ass handed, to you, faster than the last did, cuz im spittin acid, the razors raised and your throat is slashed kid, so ill open the casket, guess thats the last bit:violent

Wack as hell no h8 but its nuthing except justa bunch of crap...nahmean..Drop something good ....not just anything u like...

YO...'BOUT ya FLOW...Im not sure where you were tryn ta GO... just thought you should
KNOW...
theres a serious lack of LYRICAL CONTENT...
grab a DICTIONARY JACKA your VOCABULARY barely meets MARGINAL CONSENT..
Anyone can run 'round and SPIT fuck you' fuck him' fuck her' and fuck IT....Thats not spittin rhyme
my man dats just talking SHIT...
Maybe TRANSMIT some of dat violent SHIT ta rhymin...and you'd SURVIVE
but for now i must ADMIT you just COMMITED MC SUICIDE..
Dont worry tho its not to LATE... you can still RECOVER and RECREATE..
Unless of course you chose ta Hate and my words you decide ta UNDERESTIMATE
In which CASE id have ta SAY.. would not be the Wisest choice ta MAKE but HEY
Its not rly my PLACE..im not da one tryn ta ESCAPE from da GRAVE..its ur MC career at STAKE
Its on you my FRIEND....I couldnt careless either WAY...
Well..
Thats all the free advice for TODAY.. but maybe we'll meet under different circumstances SOMEDAY

Well, I guess it's a start, but it wasn't great. Try writing out whole sentences about what you want to cover. The convert the concepts to rhyme form. Helps me.

Word to STEELO son.
Rhymes were valid... but baseless, set up an image with proper sentence structure and incorporate your rhyme into it. It will make for a much more proper read.

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whens the last time u think lil jon wrote something down for a proper read? js