Audio cypher.
 

Uhm, this is only the third time I've rapped on a beat, or anything like that.
So, I would really like some feedback, and really blunt criticism, as harsh as possible.

http://www.letsbeef.com/cypher_detai...069&section=lb

PS, I recorded it with my built in mic on my laptop, so the quality really sucks. I posted the lyrics.

you need to get a real mic, man..hard to hear you...sounds like you've got a West Coast flow...actually...thats a nice lil flow you got there...lyrically hard to understand...good mic presence. some raw talent...i'd keep going with it

...This is C Teezy?

I own a condenser mic, but that's it. I don't have like a stand, or shock mount, or any of that stuff for it. And I never bothered to learn how to use mixing software, and stuff. I might do a little track on audacity, though, if I get some decent feed from this. I was standing up, also, so that really made it a lot harder to hear.

I know, it's a really big let down from the actual C Teezy.

wait...YOU are CTeezy?? lmfao...dude go away

whats a loon.. & how does balling like them get it poppin?? :high:

Loons are people who are crazy, and I'm not balling like them I'm referring to it as a generalization for a person, as in calling them a lunatick. Iunno. It wasn't even wordplay. So, why do you assume that it's wordplay? I already had this conversation with Jason. And I guess people who ball get it poppin? Iunno, I'm white, my slang isn't that good.

ok, loon :high:

You a straight loon, yo... Shout outs to Krhyme Killz. :rolleyes:

I understand how they might get the impression, but it's a wrong one. :S
You're just reading too much into it.

son this cat, J

The line was originally from a text cypher in the forums. Stop assuming it's wordplay.
You don't think I know what I mean when I write? That's fucking stupid.
You're acting like your perception of what I write is my fault.
You taking it the wrong way is on you. I know what I wrote, and the way I meant it when I wrote it.

Thats gotta be c teezy .. your a mark, you used that same ass line in one of them verses you kept postin in the forums & even put (balloon) in parentheses next to it.. :high:

Rupt Sure Uh Ball Loon, but he's never popping with crazy cash. < That is the line you're referring to. Which makes sense in text. But using Ball Loon as wordplay one time, in a tet battle, does not mean that I use it as wordplay everytime in everything I do. Lol. You know, people can say stuff without it being wordplay.

Also, it's not like it's a secret who I am. But, I bet you'd make a great detective. You could solve murders, and lock away criminals.

No You're Trying To Blame Your Slang (Defficiencies) On You Being 'White'? I Mean... C'MON SON... Who You Tryna Fool?? (Then Again You DID Fool About Everyone Except Me...)

Cool story, bro.

I may try another cypher later with the beat I use turned down a little bit. Cause this is basically the only mic I have to work with for now.

Good idea.

You Called Me Bro...

Must feel endearing, thinking I care about you at all.

No, Not Really
It's Just Weird To 'Hear' It From A White Person

says the lizard who's speaking english?

Oh, my bad brother man, I didn't know you saw me as one of those jive ass turkeys.

Slang(I Don't Even Understand), Again
Contradiction (Like Effin Always), Again

Different Worlds, Dude, Different Worlds

You See...
The Reason I Don't Tell You What The Real Meaning Of Lizman Is......
Is Becoming More Obvious To Everyone Else As You Keep Dissing Me