EJT's first track in 2 years
 

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Amethyst is on first verse,
i'm on second verse

THATS why u got exclusive hahaha!

Peepin now...

aiiight E, I can tell you don't do tracks too much and you can definitely improve on the mic presence, projection & style/swagger but thats how it is for everyone..

one or two more tracks and you'll find a certain medium.. this shit was dope tho IMO..

I'm hoping your the second dude.. lmao

nah the 2nd dude was nice, but the first had better content which is why I thought it was you.. "Like Bob Marley and Lennon before they passed away" ... uh!, hells yes

Just yes^

Mark said it all.

actually it makes sense that your the second dude cuz he had waay batter multis..

but I enjoyed the first verse more.. probably cuz he had 2x the bars lmao

Flow could be a little better, but that's just the inexperience. Aswell as the delivery, and pressence. Be more fluent, and comfortable while you're spitting, and you should start to zero in on what you're trying to do.

you should change this thread to:

Track Therapy with....... SV

haha, big thanks mark,

check out the second one,

i'm on first verse, he's on second

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and thanks to everyone else

uppin' for feed

will post the 3rd later tonight

aight...

riding a beat is hard, right lol...nah..i mean it..my shit was actually worse than this when i tried to do it the first time...but if you have ANY rhythm in you at all..you'll catch it fast. flowise it was a little off, but lyrically it was pretty solid. Like remarK said, mic presence isnt there yet...luckily, its not one of those things that you either have or dont..its something that you can learn....even though some people just have it out the gate. I was always curious about how you'd sound on a mic...and i'm more impressed than disappointed...imma peep the other two shits too...not a bad start at all, fam.

you are still a faggot though...

thanks alot






faggot







uppin'

Listened to the first track...Was pretty nice for your first track man, i dont need to add on to what'ever has been said about it...I agree with Krhyme also, always wonder what people sound like in a track after seen them texting for a while...

Link me to tracks when ever you drop so i can check them out...gonna check out the other one now...:high:

E just gets on the mic and talks about weed!! awesome dude. good start tho, its listenable which is more than you can say for some people when they drop their first.

thanks may, prime, stu

sounds like some exotic soup

may prime stew

cosign with everything, mostly the listenable part...props my man keep it up