RhetoriKvs. Louie Dawgs. (topical)
 

Aight.

Rules- NO SWAYING. Due @ 4 EST, I guess it don't matter if you check or not because of this.

16 bars, topic: "Weapons of mass Destruction"

Once verses are in, only votes and bumps please.

First to five. three to KO. RhetoriK, if you wanna change any of these, say that before you post your verse.


Explain your votes. Votes not explained will be discarded. I don't care how you break it down, as long as you do. IT's not a battle verse. I dont wanna see anyone saying anything about some multi or personals bullshit.

Remember to vote in the poll please. Thank you.

Shit. Anyone know how to edit and post a poll????

I guess this is also my check.

checking in as well ...rules look solid my man.. i'm writing currently.. pZz

Actually, you think we could make this later?? I"m going to see a movie in like 10 mintues.

also, we shold make this 16, 32 is a lot for one day.

yeah i got some shit to handle too.. lets post this tomorrow 12:00 noon tomorrow ..plenty time?

louie man .... it's so obvious you've been on HHA ... lmao

this topic reminds me of a line from one of my cyphers

1) Do selected voters.
2) I got winner!

good ideas EtH.. hmm..

Voters...lets see...

Me, UA, Jason...thats 3 I'd suggest first, but you need 5 with some subs. Maybe Mayneak in there too as I know hes fucked with topicals before.

Also put up cats on what we vote on.

can crew members vote?.. lol

MASTR is whats up with my name.

When he said EtH, he ment me, so don't worry.

Rhetorik, you might want to ask UA, Jason and May if they want to vote before they are officially named.

thats right where were my manners... RULE can vote if he's down [i think his is] lol I'll PM Jason, Mayneak, and UA... now

^Then read mine on ave, it kicks ass!

I'm a fair voter when it comes to this shit. You just better hope if you ever wanna do a topical against me that it isn't Horrorcore. Because bad stuff happens to my opponent when we're given horrorcore topicals. @___@

If ya'll already got the voters; get em Louie. *throws on da manpurse Conceited's boy was wearin*......... EAT EM, ITS DINNER TIME!....*BARKS*

A horrorcore isn't a topical.

And horrorcores are the worst kind of battles. All it is is limiting the places you can be creative.

That's fine........

Quote:

Originally Posted by RhetoriK (Post 386577) 12:00 noon MST.. tomorrow Voters: UA, EtH, remarK (main voters)

Aught Jason, remarK, RULE are all confirmed judges
pulse said he was down...confirmed
EtH can vote on this ..then participate on the next one

cool? Louie can you link these cats up when both verses are posted? Cause I'll probably be asleep by then lol..

let a nigga know! pZz

I'm wrapping up mines now...
Mayneak will not be able to make it [respect it]

I'm dropping in like 5.

can others judge past the list??? sounds good to me BTW. :high: I'll link them up. don't worry

Okay yo..
I just made it 16, I wasn't gonna do 32
Dropping now, I"m gonna be gone later...been busy.


my footsteps silently travel upon broken temples to the lasciviousness of humanity unfurled
The splendor of man, now rendered as nothing more then building blocks for the creation of the natural world
Twain would give but his soul for the irony embedded in this construction
The eventual downfall of the creature, instigated from his own primordial desire for destruction.
My feet grace broken gravel, lonely remants of mans function
The only inhabitants live in a broken corridor, the same one referenced in dylan's soliliquies
Where mankind's desolation and epiphanies reside within the same circle of depravity
Where war and peace take their true positons on the same hemisphere of the human psyche
The corridor's walls are arrayed with images of Hitler and Ghandi correlated under the same colors
The true predisposition of human existance truly realized with no cover
exposes war and peace as the same symbiant, equivalent to a child and mother
indiffusible, they exist, inseperable as well
The human mind the sole creator of mankinds insufferable hell
I leave the corridor for an outdoors covered in a dusty veil
and realize the mother and child are truly Saturn and it's welp
Eventually it will only destroy it's health. The only weapon of mass destruction humanity needs. Itself.

Okay, not the best ever..shoot me.

:high: