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Dao 09-25-2018 05:50 PM

Back to Let's beef after 6 years!! HELP!!
 
Ok I got wit letsbeef in '09 all the way up to 2012-13. Over 200+ battles, won't say my account cuz I posted some weird shid back then lol and we all grow. But yo..

The level of wordplay and what's considered "high level" Bars seems outa reach for me. I check Rules text basics, but that's basic.. Somewhere along theses 6 years something change I don't know what?
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Can someone inbox me. Take me under their wing, school me or wateva. I can't go to the tournament like this lol.

Seul 09-25-2018 06:19 PM

Rule #1: Don't WP like RULE. That style is outdated and WP needs to work both ways grammatically, otherwise you will be docked points.

It was cool to WP like that in the past, but not anymore.

Dao 09-25-2018 07:21 PM

Ok. Yea I been reading ya battles fuel so I can learn.

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*Seul

EtH 09-26-2018 06:59 AM

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Originally Posted by Seul (Post 1156589)
Rule #1: Don't WP like RULE. That style is outdated and WP needs to work both ways grammatically, otherwise you will be docked points.

It was cool to WP like that in the past, but not anymore.

RULE's text lessons were actually not bad, he just didn't follow his own criteria later down the line.

Dao 09-26-2018 08:34 AM

Aye I remember u UnEth.. You Still a monster I see

Godbody 09-26-2018 08:40 AM

I used to f/w an asian bitch named Dao. ironically I met her in the letsbeef or in-crowd elite tinychat and smashed a few times. bitch hit me up recently cuz her baby daddy mistreatin her. funny how the world works

Dao 09-26-2018 08:47 AM

Lol. Yo Godbody I'm reading ya battles. U a problem

lllllllllllll 09-26-2018 08:53 AM

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Originally Posted by Dao (Post 1156617)
Aye I remember u UnEth.. You Still a monster I see

https://i.giphy.com/media/3oz8xVNz8jhVcvp4ze/200w.gif

Dao 09-26-2018 09:08 AM

Lol oh Punk I remember when u was killing shid..

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Originally Posted by Punk (Post 1156620)

I remember you and black book battle. classic

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Oh yea @UnEtH1CaL I was part of the AC's once

KG The Prince 09-26-2018 09:23 AM

Rule #2: Tie your opponent to the bed and tickle em before taking their girl's high heels and using their bare chest as a catwalk

Dao 09-26-2018 09:29 AM

Lol @KG I was apart of Apocalypse too. Dam 160-71.. All that In one year. U working.

Bape 09-26-2018 01:11 PM

I don't buy it

Dao 09-26-2018 01:20 PM

Good cause it's not for sale

KG The Prince 09-26-2018 03:49 PM

grafting

Student 09-26-2018 05:18 PM


Dao 09-26-2018 05:47 PM

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Originally Posted by Student (Post 1156631)

The girl at 1:42 need to work on her arch. Disgraceful lol

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@student didn't you have a a classic 32 bar battle with Unknown Artist or was that Jason..

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Oh na I'm trippin that was daddio

Student 09-26-2018 06:38 PM

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Originally Posted by Dao (Post 1156632)
@student didn't you have a a classic 32 bar battle with Unknown Artist or was that Jason..

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Oh na I'm trippin that was daddio

Wouldn't call it classic, at least my verse wasn't, but I did have a 32 against Jason:
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=333561

Unfortunately you can't see his verse right now though.

Dao 09-26-2018 06:45 PM

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Originally Posted by Student (Post 1156640)
Wouldn't call it classic, at least my verse wasn't, but I did have a 32 against Jason:
https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=333561

Unfortunately you can't see his verse right now though.

Lol The Jekyll n Hyde line tho... I can see where the style that's relevant todaycame from. Y'all really laid the foundation. Salute

EtH 09-27-2018 06:45 AM

Yeah, Student you really shaped the site with your rhymes man...

Bleu 09-27-2018 07:07 AM

Lmao @ seeing where today's "style" came from with that battle. Today's style is mostly trying to chase after me which I'm not really a fan of but I get it. I spearheaded and pioneered the movement of wordplay working both ways. You want to make your verses sound natural with wording / execution. I also pioneered the double ended punchline on here, where not only the set up has a double meaning but the punchline itself has a double meaning. That and just don't say the tons of played out / already used shit and you're on the right track. Be creative/original/complex yet smooth and cohesive.

Dao 09-27-2018 09:44 AM

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Originally Posted by Bleu (Post 1156647)
Lmao @ seeing where today's "style" came from with that battle. Today's style is mostly trying to chase after me which I'm not really a fan of but I get it. I spearheaded and pioneered the movement of wordplay working both ways. You want to make your verses sound natural with wording / execution. I also pioneered the double ended punchline on here, where not only the set up has a double meaning but the punchline itself has a double meaning. That and just don't say the tons of played out / already used shit and you're on the right track. Be creative/original/complex yet smooth and cohesive.

@Bleu Yea that's why I said "y'all" ....n yea it's hard knowing what's played and used since I've been gone so long.. Just gotta read a lot more battles to catch up I guess...

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Originally Posted by Bleu (Post 1156647)
Lmao @ seeing where today's "style" came from with that battle. Today's style is mostly trying to chase after me which I'm not really a fan of but I get it. I spearheaded and pioneered the movement of wordplay working both ways. You want to make your verses sound natural with wording / execution. I also pioneered the double ended punchline on here, where not only the set up has a double meaning but the punchline itself has a double meaning. That and just don't say the tons of played out / already used shit and you're on the right track. Be creative/original/complex yet smooth and cohesive.

N I get the conversational wording part cause i never stopped writing music.. It's just the played schemes..
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Oh and @Bleu you vs @Rai would be CRAZY!!!

Bleu 09-27-2018 09:52 AM

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Originally Posted by Dao (Post 1156659)
@Bleu Yea that's why I said "y'all" ....n yea it's hard knowing what's played and used since I've been gone so long.. Just gotta read a lot more battles to catch up I guess...

Or just get feed from as many people as possible I guess. I've had people say lines are played with no evidence before so be sure to do your research. You can always use google to double check if a lines been used if you know how to search properly.

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Originally Posted by Dao (Post 1156659)
@Bleu Yea that's why I said "y'all" ....n yea it's hard knowing what's played and used since I've been gone so long.. Just gotta read a lot more battles to catch up I guess...

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N I get the conversational wording part cause i never stopped writing music.. It's just the played schemes..
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Oh and @Bleu you vs @Rai would be CRAZY!!!

Just happened in the Summer Text tourney and a few times before that.

Dao 09-27-2018 10:12 AM

Preciate that... N that battle was dope, thought it'll be closer. That mortician line was smooth af tho.

Supsie 09-28-2018 10:06 AM

who is this homosexual who made this thread?

Dao 09-28-2018 10:21 AM

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Originally Posted by Supsie (Post 1156712)
who is this homosexual who made this thread?

Haha a gay joke, man your funny!!!

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Lashing out on gays I guess HE'S HURT. Aspirations of being great in EACH VERSE. bringin others down so they SEEM WORSE. Yea @Supsie known to 'troll' to make the 'DREAM WORK'... Send 8 not gay jokes pussy. #BrainFartces

EtH 09-28-2018 12:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bleu (Post 1156647)
Lmao @ seeing where today's "style" came from with that battle. Today's style is mostly trying to chase after me which I'm not really a fan of but I get it. I spearheaded and pioneered the movement of wordplay working both ways. You want to make your verses sound natural with wording / execution. I also pioneered the double ended punchline on here, where not only the set up has a double meaning but the punchline itself has a double meaning. That and just don't say the tons of played out / already used shit and you're on the right track. Be creative/original/complex yet smooth and cohesive.

I love ya Bleu, but this is a load of bollocks. I get why you think this, because when you kind of started proper being a part of LB we were caught in the Murda Muzik bullshit spin of things. But guys like Manhattan and Lockhart were making their wordplay work before you came onto the scene (not that they were doing so as good) and that's just an example from the "new-gen" of guys. Wordplay was almost always one way until Rican and Pulse kind of started shifting it, and as far back as 2009 I used to post constantly in threads about Rican's misuse of wordplay. Here's a quick example:-

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=359745

IAmFlow's vote comment. Kind of around 2011 is when it started to change. I'm not taking credit what so ever, but that's kind of why we made the crew. We wanted to kind of get everyone battling in a much cleaner way than all the bollocks of the time was. Eventually, the guys with the clean style outlasted the guys with the non-working wordplay style and it now seems to be the norm again.

Anyone before the Grizz/Dissizit/Rican/Godbody era made their wordplay work both ways.

Dao 09-28-2018 12:21 PM

Lol I just read my battle wit grizz in 2010. He swept me. Dam Rican, Dissizit, Lockhart. Them names nostalgic.

EtH 09-28-2018 12:24 PM

Dao, stop. If you're going to return and do the whole "I used to be here but I'm not telling you who I was" routine, stop fucking begging for attention by trying to act like you know all of us. We don't know each other son. I don't know people that are so bitch they need to hide their identity.

Dao 09-28-2018 12:51 PM

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Originally Posted by UnEtH1CaL (Post 1156721)
Dao, stop. If you're going to return and do the whole "I used to be here but I'm not telling you who I was" routine, stop fucking begging for attention by trying to act like you know all of us. We don't know each other son. I don't know people that are so bitch they need to hide their identity.

Routine? .Hide identity? Bruh I can't enjoy this shid, n my memories without dudes feelin some type of way lol. Gah damn this it ain't that serious bruh. Shid we all hiding our identity bitch boy.. Post ya real picture of ya self. How old are you. What school you went to??? Hunh??? Ok then fuck boy. That's the good thing about this site u can start fresh Iif u want

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Man I'm done wit this thread y'all got it. I'ma just stay to myself n snipe dudes.. I'm just using this site to improve my bars for my songs any way.. Uneth1cal eat a dick lol

Bleu 09-28-2018 05:41 PM

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Originally Posted by UnEtH1CaL (Post 1156719)
I love ya Bleu, but this is a load of bollocks. I get why you think this, because when you kind of started proper being a part of LB we were caught in the Murda Muzik bullshit spin of things. But guys like Manhattan and Lockhart were making their wordplay work before you came onto the scene (not that they were doing so as good) and that's just an example from the "new-gen" of guys. Wordplay was almost always one way until Rican and Pulse kind of started shifting it, and as far back as 2009 I used to post constantly in threads about Rican's misuse of wordplay. Here's a quick example:-

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=359745

IAmFlow's vote comment. Kind of around 2011 is when it started to change. I'm not taking credit what so ever, but that's kind of why we made the crew. We wanted to kind of get everyone battling in a much cleaner way than all the bollocks of the time was. Eventually, the guys with the clean style outlasted the guys with the non-working wordplay style and it now seems to be the norm again.

Anyone before the Grizz/Dissizit/Rican/Godbody era made their wordplay work both ways.

Other people did it here and there probably out of luck / coincidence. Those same people you say made their wordplay work both ways mostly had wordplay that DIDN'T work both ways so your point is invalid. I was the first to consistently make wordplay work both ways and set the standard / make it the norm. That can't be debated. I witnessed it / did it myself. Before me it was a whole lot of forced shit and no one had that standard for wordplay when they were judging / writing. Since my run you saw wayyy more focus / judgement / mention of wordplay working both ways because I pushed the narrative with my writing / critique / discussion and people caught on to an extent. Back in the day they let the most forced wordplay slide.. they probably didn't even have the term of wordplay working both ways.

I'd like to see you find someone other than me who consistently made their wordplay work both ways and pushed the narrative until it became the standard.

EDIT: I don't even see any wordplay in that battle. I'm talking oronyms / homophones at least.

lllllllllllll 09-28-2018 06:09 PM

Fr though, who is U, Dao

Erupt da Monsta 09-28-2018 06:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UnEtH1CaL (Post 1156719)
I love ya Bleu, but this is a load of bollocks. I get why you think this, because when you kind of started proper being a part of LB we were caught in the Murda Muzik bullshit spin of things. But guys like Manhattan and Lockhart were making their wordplay work before you came onto the scene (not that they were doing so as good) and that's just an example from the "new-gen" of guys. Wordplay was almost always one way until Rican and Pulse kind of started shifting it, and as far back as 2009 I used to post constantly in threads about Rican's misuse of wordplay. Here's a quick example:-

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=359745

IAmFlow's vote comment. Kind of around 2011 is when it started to change. I'm not taking credit what so ever, but that's kind of why we made the crew. We wanted to kind of get everyone battling in a much cleaner way than all the bollocks of the time was. Eventually, the guys with the clean style outlasted the guys with the non-working wordplay style and it now seems to be the norm again.

Anyone before the Grizz/Dissizit/Rican/Godbody era made their wordplay work both ways.

If we want to be technical.... Everyone switched their style up after i made it apparent people were forcing bars and had to work both ways in Rupts Rap School. But to be fair. UA, Real Talk, Illimit all had clean styles.

lllllllllllll 09-28-2018 06:23 PM

I invented capping your rhymes in a text battle.

KG The Prince 09-28-2018 06:26 PM

Someone should make an "I invented thread"

EtH 09-28-2018 06:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bleu (Post 1156748)
Other people did it here and there probably out of luck / coincidence. Those same people you say made their wordplay work both ways mostly had wordplay that DIDN'T work both ways so your point is invalid. I was the first to consistently make wordplay work both ways and set the standard / make it the norm. That can't be debated. I witnessed it / did it myself. Before me it was a whole lot of forced shit and no one had that standard for wordplay when they were judging / writing. Since my run you saw wayyy more focus / judgement / mention of wordplay working both ways because I pushed the narrative with my writing / critique / discussion and people caught on to an extent. Back in the day they let the most forced wordplay slide.. they probably didn't even have the term of wordplay working both ways.

I'd like to see you find someone other than me who consistently made their wordplay work both ways and pushed the narrative until it became the standard.

EDIT: I don't even see any wordplay in that battle. I'm talking oronyms / homophones at least.

I mean...I'm one of them. Even though there's probably an example or two in the snipes on this account, probably 99.9% of them worked both ways even back in like 2012 when I was using this account for sniping.

It was a common thing, but a while before you came it sort of shifted away. It was more simplistic back in the day for sure so it was a little bit easier and I won't debate that you took the concept and ran a mile with it. Huey J brought something to the site where people used less "like" concepts and it takes a lot more skill to execute those, which is more to your side of things, but even if someone's using "like" the wordplay still works both ways.

There's probably plenty of people who remember me having many bitch fits in the forums about wordplay having to work both ways. @Student might remember my back and fourths with Pulse and Rican. The only way it's possible for me to have started bitching about it is for it not to have been the norm previously.

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Originally Posted by Erupt (Post 1156754)
If we want to be technical.... Everyone switched their style up after i made it apparent people were forcing bars and had to work both ways in Rupts Rap School. But to be fair. UA, Real Talk, Illimit all had clean styles.

This would be true if this wasn't the era when everyone was fucking horrendous with wordplay haha. As you say though, there was an era of guys who all had shit working both ways. Actually I'll concede a bit and say you were there with Huey kind of pushing everyone to stop using the basic simile set up, and Bleu has managed to master that sort of style and keep it clean. You guys are more barrier pushers. When someone innovates a new thing individually, it's evident. Conceited, NawkOut and UNKNOWN ARTIST for example.

Bleu 09-28-2018 07:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by UnEtH1CaL (Post 1156757)
I mean...I'm one of them. Even though there's probably an example or two in the snipes on this account, probably 99.9% of them worked both ways even back in like 2012 when I was using this account for sniping.

It was a common thing, but a while before you came it sort of shifted away. It was more simplistic back in the day for sure so it was a little bit easier and I won't debate that you took the concept and ran a mile with it. Huey J brought something to the site where people used less "like" concepts and it takes a lot more skill to execute those, which is more to your side of things, but even if someone's using "like" the wordplay still works both ways.

There's probably plenty of people who remember me having many bitch fits in the forums about wordplay having to work both ways. @Student might remember my back and fourths with Pulse and Rican. The only way it's possible for me to have started bitching about it is for it not to have been the norm previously.



This would be true if this wasn't the era when everyone was fucking horrendous with wordplay haha. As you say though, there was an era of guys who all had shit working both ways. Actually I'll concede a bit and say you were there with Huey kind of pushing everyone to stop using the basic simile set up, and Bleu has managed to master that sort of style and keep it clean. You guys are more barrier pushers. When someone innovates a new thing individually, it's evident. Conceited, NawkOut and UNKNOWN ARTIST for example.


I've seen clean stuff from those names and I've also seen sloppy / forced wordplay from those names. Pick me out like 5 of your battles with a decent chunk of wordplay if you're one of those people who were consistently doing it

EtH 09-28-2018 07:31 PM

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Originally Posted by Bleu (Post 1156766)
I've seen clean stuff from those names and I've also seen sloppy / forced wordplay from those names. Pick me out like 5 of your battles with a decent chunk of wordplay if you're one of those people who were consistently doing it

I was writing shit down but I saw you specifically mentioned homophone style. I was never a big fan of it so I stopped using that back in like 2009. I don't like having to explain to the readers what the other word is so I cut it out. Even when I had good verses saved I'd probably have very few examples of that. Tbh most styles, even including yours, mostly use idioms for wordplay so I'm not too pushed on finding homophone wordplay that works.

Bleu 09-29-2018 12:15 AM

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Originally Posted by UnEtH1CaL (Post 1156767)
I was writing shit down but I saw you specifically mentioned homophone style. I was never a big fan of it so I stopped using that back in like 2009. I don't like having to explain to the readers what the other word is so I cut it out. Even when I had good verses saved I'd probably have very few examples of that. Tbh most styles, even including yours, mostly use idioms for wordplay so I'm not too pushed on finding homophone wordplay that works.

That's not wordplay to me. Those are just turn of phrase flips. Wordplay is oronyms / homophones where wording things both ways becomes tricky.

Supsie 09-29-2018 06:02 AM

Good invention @Punk

Btw I think I know who dao but I forgot the name.. it's some black dude.. hmm..

EtH 09-29-2018 09:02 AM

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Originally Posted by Bleu (Post 1156772)
That's not wordplay to me. Those are just turn of phrase flips. Wordplay is oronyms / homophones where wording things both ways becomes tricky.

It's definitely a bit trickier, and it's much more of a skill now because so many of the earlier things had been done. But there were plenty of people easily able to make a defeat wordplay work both ways back then. It got diluted by a lot of mid tier guys early because guys like NawkOut and Jacoby had 1000 wordplays per line and didn't often work both ways with it so that spread around, but if guys like UA, RT, Illy, Notch etc. were using that form of wordplay, a lot of the time it was something simple they could delivery easily.

I actually really dislike the style anyways. I feel the punches rarely resonate with the audience on first hit. I like to think of text battling like live battling and 90% of homophones wouldn't resonate at the resolve of the punch. People are more impressed when they read backwards to the line than they were when the punch landed first.


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