I'm willing to bet...
 

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=477929

This is the best open ya'll seen in a minute....

shit was below average honestly

That guy who responded, though.

God Bless.

Nigga, are you a fucking ass?...

Nah. I'm not a donkey.

Try again...

Damn, you guys be fellating each other over here... DID NOT KNOW... let's see who's gonna put the most spit on that..

Honestly thought The Juggernaut was the dumbest supervillain. Yeah the idiot could run through walls, but gosh dang. Ever heard of a door?

Honestly, we can break the verse bar for bar right here and you would feel stupid right now, for even writing that bullshit lol

You're ass fam.

LOL I didn't write anything. That's the sad part. That took all of 5 minutes to get done.

ight fam do you, someone else may interpret both verses differently then you and your boys... just saying

Just like people are interpreting your verse to be terrible?

the originator and the interpreter have two different perceptions, and perceptions are liable to change, maybe once you start to live outside of the site and more in the world. You're verse would be cool for some people that frequent this site like every fucking day... at the end of the day my verse could have more of an impact than your "I'm a forum nigga"-verse

Keep dreaming.

God Bless.

You're a close minded fool, for even saying this. I can tell most of your time is spent on this site by your verse, it is tailored to be respondant of the shit that happens here more than anything so, instead of having some actual real world connections that are actually creative... fo real? LV Bags? seriously?!... like come on dude. I don't know who gassed you up, but you need to go outside and try rapping that same way, people won't even think it's rap, more like ridiculous overanalyzation.... nothing you're saying says much about you.

Battle rap doesn't mean referring to myself. It's attacking the person you're going against.

God Bless. Keep grinding.

"You think you're a challenge? Well start supPLYING SOME LINKS, FIRST " that line I actually liked, everything else was wishy washy, talking about why didn't I buy a drink? Like how is that insulting? I understand Forum is a bar, and this is the forums(woah... your so amazing... not) but I wasn't really challenged to think on that. As well as how is me drinking such a degrading thing?... you dudes are so hyped, its crazy....

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And why are you not defending you're garbage LV line

Because it's not garbage. I also didn't see 1 punch in your battle. How are you going to defend that?

Also who's multi are you? Considering you just registered today and you're in @2FUEL's multi crew.

God Bless.

Just pick one part and I'll explain it

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Nah, hell no, Idk even know wtf is a multi, cuz... I just forgot I even had this shit a long time ago, came back forgot my password, so I made another account.

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But honestly, you had one decent line

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At least, give me the benifit of not being one of the millions of dudes on this site that would just praise you instead of offering some constructive criticism

got a lot of *Sick lines* so I'm putting on a CLINIC/ RIDICUOUSLY AMBITIOUS when SPITTIN COMPETITION, You niggas just a SCRIMMAGE, *no real match,* *no CALLING*...more *EXHIBITIONS* of that BALLIN!/

Where's the punch in that?

By definition, you are using a multi account. So if you don't know, now you know.

clinics will have lines of people who are usually sick, hence sick lines. "I'm putting on a clinic" is often said by basketball players when they are scoring a lot of points... you google this shit at anytime you know

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There's more, I keep the basketball thing going with "you niggas just a scrimmage" A scrimmage is a practice match or a pick up game, hence, like most actual basketball players I'm not taking it seriously. You're "no real match", you're not a match for me. Get it? "No calling" you have no calling or no goal in life, like some scrimmages people just tend to not be too hard on calling fouls. "exhibitions of that ballin" basically saying I anticiapte for you to rap about luxury, and tying it to the basketball concepts as exhibitions and scrimmages are synonymous.

The sick lines thing is circa 2004. My point is that your ideas that you were putting down in your box were not the freshest in the world, meaning that they wouldn't really be the best when it comes to punches. The way you executed them didn't do you any favors either.

Give me another part, this shit is fun lol

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ight, I think everyone that battles should do this, but we can keep going at another time, I gotta go

Statistically speaking?...Juggy's Joe STALIN! killing oh so OFTEN, shoot you in your ARMPIT and supply the nails for the COFFIN! You'll be like "Juggy?...All that over some POP CHIPS!?" Yeah bitch! I'm BOSSIN, never ever LOST SHIT except my temper and some PORRIDGE! I grab that 30 and just PAUSE SHIT, so if you wanna go *overboard* I'll make YOU DO THE PLANK/ Itz Da Juggernaut, Bitch! putting *shit to an end* like the POOP DOLLAR PRANK!/

Ok. How do OFTEN and ARMPIT match? What is POP CHIPS? And what is a POOP DOLLAR PRANK?

Honestly i was just trying to be funny, with that bit... Armpit and often are similar rhymes bro youre overthinking it, pop chips is a brand of potatoe chips, i was just tryna convey that I am easily angered, I am a very impatient guy lol... so ill do all this crazy shit over some chips, which in the street "chips" is slang for money, hence "im bossin, never ever lost shit but my temper and some porridge," which gives a bit of background as to why im so impulsive, the porridge bit is making an allusion to the theee bears story where, the papa bear in particular, flipped out when they found some bitch ate they shit.

Joseph "joe" stalin has killed the most humans in history so its just more exaggeration to convey what my anger is capable of in a funny way

"Grap that 30 and just pause shit and if you try to go overboard i'll make you do a plank" which idk if you seen kids do the plank prank where they will lay flat on something and take pics. This is a double entendre if you would consider sailor/pirate culture, goimg overboard is a term used for when people jump off ship and into the water, and a plank is usually where youll find the most undesired people of the ship are forced to go overboard.

"Putting shit to an end like the poop dollar prank" the poop dollar prank, is a prank where you take a dollar bill and wipe you ass with it until theres as shit on it, then you lay it on the street and just watch and laugh as people pick it up and thinkin its a free dollar, until they look at it and see shit lol an end or ends on the street is more slang for money so "im putting shit to an end" should make more sense

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Dont forget this part :D

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The fact that I have to explain the whole entire shit to you, actually makes the ideas I had on the box fresh. You misjudged, it happens bro.

Your rhymes don't rhyme and your concepts & punchlines are worded horribly. Nothing to see here.

Finally, the help is here!

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How the fuck can i trust that you even know what my concepts was, when your boy needed a fucking sermon lol

You failed

Your garbage... Your bars are played & punchez are weak as fuck.. You got everyone on here telling you that you suck... Get tha Point or Get Tha FuCk Outta HeRe...

#FAIL

~1~

Not everyone on this website are each others "boys" you colossal faggot. When you have over 10 people telling you that you're raw ass cheeks, then there's a pretty good fucking chance that you are in fact ass cheeks.


Suck an unspecified amount of dicks son.

If your concepts are going over people's heads it's not because you're the greatest thing to ever grace the site w/ your presence, it's because you're not presenting them properly.

Yeah, you can have a hella complex bar but if its too vague for your ideas to make an impact on the reader then the complexities more of a detriment than it is an advantage...

this here.

LOL Are we still on about this?

God Bless.

^#100

LOL Dude did him dirty.

God Bless.

Finally, a civil response. Thanks for the constructive feedback, sometimes it takes more than just telling somebody they suck.

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yo lol on dead dawgs, I don't even know wtf a crew does on this bitch, I was just like "what in the blue fuck happens if I press accept" lol... dudes are too image conscious on a website.... shit's hysterical lol