JOHN DOS FIRST LIVE BATTLE!!!
 

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature...&v=JYlDUv955yk

WATCH, LIKE, COMMENT, SUBSCRIBE, AND MOST OF ALL SHARE THE SHIT OUT THIS YA'LL!!

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@RULE check this Classick shit out!!!

Good shit man....crowd was super weak though those fuckers weren't responding to shit

Good stuff @John Dos. You had a few line I liked ..."long head like 'hey Arnold'." I felt you did better than your opponent...you paused and gave the crowd chances to react to some of your line..I felt you could have done better engaging the crowd though. But good looking though.

I know they were sleeping hardcore but i think that will change with my next battle

Weak crowd, sick ass battle.

Mad props man

I made this live battler thread for you: http://www.letsbeef.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=565
Just let me know what your current record is and if you have any new battles and I'll update it.

thanks homie! i would say my current record is 1-0. what ya'll think?

Take a crew wit you to hype it up...every top battler bring dickriders yo
& make them memorize your hardest lines

yea i wanted some friends to go with but it was like a two hour drive n shit so i wasn't able to. but now that i have made friends in the league, they'll be up there with me

Do you have a next battle lined up?

yea in november. probably won't drop until january or later though

against Santhi Long

Keep it up fam and just do better each time. Would love to see you take this far. I'll keep my eyes open for the next jawn.

this is only the beginning for sure

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everyone who watches please comment with who you think won this! thanks

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what you think @Dissizit

Look in the camera & look at the crowd too...write down your lyrics on your phone so u won't choke & check your phone while the other nigga rapping like he boring

lol i've seen people do that. they're stupid if they think other people don't know they're readin bars.

i gotta come liver, more enthusiasm, more crowd involvement. i was super nervous, high as fuck, and had not a single friend there. drove two hours north to battle too. not making excuses, just sayin

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BUMPIN THIS! DON'T SLEEP PEOPLE

i watched this earlier........Not going to sound like a broken record here your lines were there but def lacked on the delivery end but thatll come in due time

dope shit john.. you obviously out weighed him in complexity and bars.. get a little more aggressive with your delivery.. good shit tho props

Most definitely. I appreciate you all taking the time to check it out!

The kids classick!

Good work Dos, you know what u gotta work on. Keep doing it!

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Dope shit fam.. def alot of ur bars was gettin slept on..remember live battles is all about comedy..u had em rollin wit the cheeseburger crackhead references.. keep those type a funny bars up and u gon be slayin em..great job

Thanks man I appreciate it!
Keep them views coming ya'll!

bump. feedback is appreciated!

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@EGOTISTIKK what you think son

@reEFer, thoughts?

@Agonize feedback would def be appreciated

good shit fam, def a real solid first battle, I would livin up the delivery a lil, and engage the crowd, other than that 3-0 , keep at it you actually got potential in this cus I know you got bars,

stay grindin my nig

ay bruh, u had me on dat newport symbol line KUDOS and jus so u will know u might see me live soon i'm tryin' out in december wish me luck #KEEPGRINDIN' #BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMM!!!

thanks for checkin it out ya'll
tony good luck man

ayo killed that shit, for real. 3-0. hey arnold line was a killer, man. if anything i'd say speed your delivery up just a little bit and more emphasis, but everybody has said that.
i commented, subbed and liked to support fam. props.

dope lines man. i was feelin it. But you gotta remember that people there are looking to get into also. Just try not to be so complex like your "in Vitamins" line, even tho that would work in text id say dumb it down for them. but you have bars man. keep it up. oh yea.... CLASSICK

dos good shit...you murked him.....hmmm rockford,ill thats couple hours away lol keep at it feed the simple minds with simple lines

yea it seems like my best approach is simple comedy

Dude I'm not hating at all, I could never get up on stage and live battle. You did awesome. Pretty much bodied him. It's hardtop critique someone doing something I haven't done. And you kind of reminded me of this guy named Marshall Mathers

Def appreciate that! I might not be battling in november now due to scheduling issues on both sides. shit sucks

Good shit Dos...I thought the delivery was dope and lines were crack...Live battling/Audio is more of your thing...You can be complex and comedic at the same time...tie the 2 together and its gon get chu some W's...G'shit brah...keep grindin!

i've always told people that text shit just ain't for me, lol i might have bodied a few big names but live is the way to go for me

over 500 views in 3 weeks, not bad.