Deniro B Milk Breakdown
 

In His 64 Line Battle Versus Rule
Now I Dont Know Who He Is And (In The Smallest Minority) Don't Care
He's Verse Was Quite Creative (Prolly Wouldn't Have Been If I Watched Some More Verses Against Rule) And Well Written
However I Want Point Out A Number Of Crucial (Wordplay) Flaws In His Verse That If I Would Have Typed Them Out Every Faggotry Voter (I'm Looking At FVC You Faggits) Would Have Mentioned, Inflated And Put In Front Of The Actual Verse To Give Me A Low Vote

Now...

"Some penis/Subpeonas" Doesn't Sound The Same
[Some Peeniss] Doesn't Sound Like [Supeanah]

jewelry/jury" Doesn't Completely Sound The Same

"man delay babes/mandalay bay" Doesn't Sound The Same

You Know What.... EVERY SINGLE WORDPLAY Except "ROULETTE/RULE LET" Doesn't Work/Go Together



While I'm At It
Why Not A Couple From Rule Too

"Conquer/Concur" Doesn't Sound The Same [[KongKahr] == Up Down Speech Effect] While [[cuncoer] == Down Up Speech Effect]

"Decant/ De Cant" Don't Sound The Same; NO MATTER If Its The Modified De Cant Or The Rightful "De Chant Pour Blood" As The 'De' In Front Of It Sounds Different In The Two Languages

"M Be Seal/Imbecile" Don't Sound The Same; Again No Matter The Different Pronunciations Used As The First Cons Is Different 'M/Im'

"Ero Dead/Eroded" Don't Sound The Same; Same Issue As Above

Yes I Am
I Am Able To Break Down Anybodys Verse
No Matter If I Might Be Worse Than Either In That Battle

Ya know what lizzy, your right.... i actually agree with ya, your not one to talk at all with wordplay, but your right... noticed rule's wordplay dipped a bit recently, (he use to be bang on with it, think he tryin so much to get new wp that he forcing it lol) & DeNiro's ones you've quoted there dont work/go together.... there vey poor infact.... i've still to peep this battle, but liz in future if your gonna break someones bars down in the forums/slander them, at least have the respect to wait till the battles over....

co-sign
the lizard himself

yeah for some reason when it comes to these big name vets a lot of people kinda purposely overlook the things they would normally use as their reason for not voting for someone...idk if its outta fear or what but it happens

Thats What We Call Appropriate Swaying.... Anybody?
And I Can Do Proper Wordplay Most Of The Time; I Just Don't Bother

concur and conquer sound identical

But saying that, i do agree with streetz... some people dont point out faults in vets verses (although RULE is FAR from a vet) in fear most probably. I overlook wordplay most the time anyway and don't use it myself

im still in shock that i actually agree with you lizman haha... this is the first time i've agreed with you on something in regards to Text Battling... lol haha

@Verity I'm not really a fan of wordplay either...to me sitting in front of a screen thinking about what two words or phrases sound the same is kinda corny but i have seen some pretty dope punches come from them but the majority aren't...im not knocking anybody that does it bc everybody has their own style..

n bout the vet thing...yeah there's definitely fear on LB n plus most of these ppl built up such a strong rep that sometimes we naturally think their verse is better than it really is...but then when u look back at it u see alot of excessive self boasting, n no-punch-at-the-end rambling...but still they pack enough dope punches in there towards the end to get the job done lol

^I've to disagree, i think wordplay when done correctly of course, makes for a bigger, stronger punch in the Text arena. As the text box has to have a lot of creative, strong factors every where in it, were as in Audio a nice crisp flow see you the win with a few punches that if they were in text would get the meh vibe from every text cat....

Wordplay also shows that creative side, but a lot a LOT of ppl really dont know what wordplay is, they think they do, but they dont... just cos you put two words together (exp) 'Bearin'/Bear-in' together doesn't make it wordplay, its the connection between either side of the / in the line that makes it wordplay (exp) "Holding a Teddy" only time you Bearin'/Bear-in Arms... the most problem with wordplay is ppl are using it wrong and others think what they are seeing/reading is correct wordplay/dope wordplay when in fact its wack & forced to fuck.....

Think a Battle Writing thread should be made up, might do it later this evening, touch on all area's of battling.... as a lot of ppl are trying but still cant seem to get to grips with some parts...

first thing i agreed on from lizman, and this is one of the reasons i didn't vote.

Def. a co-sign here. i think it's dated acceptability in my opinion. Since wordplay is so heavy on the site now as opposed to DeNiro's prime I think that he did what always worked for him. The standards for wordplay to the voters is now more stringent than it was then. Had this battle taken place back then, it might have been different. Yeah, a LOT of people suck at wordplay but the fundamental understanding of how it works is more common knowledge now than it was back then. In fact, it was more impressive back then to have even partially relevant wordplay because it was a more edgy concept to readers back then. I think a lotta these "vets" that get dug back up would run into the same damn problem. Except possibly Mahv or Chizzy who had spot on wordplay back then, and have even seen and inquired about new wordplays now(NawkOut).

REALLY interesting.

My wordplay is usually much hotter i admit, but after reading Bobbys verse i noticed that altho his wordplay was a bit iffy the swag was fuckin insane so i dropped some myself.

but for real Lizman you got absoloutely NO right to comment on anyones wordplay for reeeeal.

& yeah people only vote for RULE cuz of the name, thats why Wargrave & SToBBaRT lost all the time. No, wait a minute...

I actually thought most of the wp liz quoted worked. some of it didnt tho.

cosign^ some was off but and more was on point.

But lizman, did you see collectively 128 lines with no explanations????

They're not needed straight forward and hard hitting.

lizman who r u to say shit dont make sense

Shut Up With Your Inane Arguments
Just Because I Might Not Be As Good Doesn't Mean I Have No Right
And I Can Construct Proper Wordplay; Its As Easy As Doing Multies

No Matter Who I Am
That "shit" Doesn't "make sense"

Please Specify

Genius, figure it out!

No
They Dont

identical.

we've heard your audios Liz, dont try to be an authority on how to pronouce words lmaoooo

accents, lizman....

Thats the point tho, no you cant.

you used stop/shop wordplay.

be quiet kid.

No I Didn't
Make Better Arguments Grandpa

I Am An Authority As What I Am Saying Is Relevant

Screenshot, Quoted And Archived For Later Use

RULE kinda sucks tbh.......js

Whatever Gets you off faggot.

Okay Then

Pipe the fuck down boy.

concur and conquor dont fit well to me..but if RULE said it i think they'd sound identical with the accent.

lol at RULE not being a vet....

concur and conqure or how ever the fuck u spel it diont sounf a like . 1 has a soft sounding r at the end while the other (concur) has a more drawn our r sound like "I concurrrr" Liz inm too drunk to go through all the wps u piocked out. sorry. but most did work. for me. but on the concur im with krhymr 100

@Krhyme SAVES i simply said @RULE wasn't a vet because IMO he hasn't been here long enough or beaten enough HOFs yet

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HOFs/Vets/Icons

If you have to beat HOFers to be a vet.. Wouldnt you just be a HOFer yourself? Lol

RULE defines vet.

Someone Needs A Tampon

Might wanna peep the W's list Verity lol.

I was robbed tbh :high: