Wordplay commparisons.
 

Now, since I have received so much grief for my wordplay being "Forced" I would like to compare one of what I'm sure several people would consider one of the top wordplay users in grindtime's wordplay to an instance of wordplay of my own.

QP vs. Swave Sevah: "Your battle raps are cadillacs. I see your link, and navigate away."(Lincoln Navigate.)

Bl[ ]nk vs. Erupt Dah Monster: "When the money's up? He's not Apparent With Cash just because this Person A Child."(A Parent/Purse And A Child.)

So, someone explain to me the difference between these two instances of wordplay? What makes my wordplay forced as compared to QP's? Why is QP's wordplay likely praised, while mine is critiqued as "Forced." Or told that it doesn't work?

Honestly...it depends on how u use wordplay like that...for instance that Chizzy Wizzy stuff...is forced af. Combining words like Bit Choose to mean Bitch Ooze is forced af. In your case it's kinda forced but not really. It's understandable, but person should have an s at the end of it if u talk regularly.

QP vs. Swave Sevah: "Your battle raps are cadillacs. I see your link, and navigate away."(Lincoln Navigate.)

Link and navigate away:

I swerve them, they shit I dont wanna see or hear them.

Lincoln Navigates away, drives away:

It doesnt quite work both ways, Unless I'm missing something.

BUT

You're not a parent with cash because this purse and a child:

MAKES ABSOLUTLY NO SENSE when using the english language.

Ask your self? Who calls someone a purse and a child? Like seriously it's a stupid line.

Instead of asking us why it's forced, when I've explained to you enough times why it is.

Why don't you explain why

You're not a parent with cash because this purse and a child:

Isn't forced.

Why did you have such a hard time critiquing QP's wordplay, but find it easy to maliciously assault mine? Seems biased to me. *Shrug.*

Dude that shits forced... give it up..

IMO it's a slight force of the wordplay. Agreed it should be persons, but besides the wordplay, that concept does need some work.

Because QP used his to describe his opponents bars, It's forgivable and is strong enough with it's first meaning on reading it that it's easy to brush aside the 2nd somewhat iffy meaning

where as you on the other hand used purse and a child as a statement of fact and the first meaning was too flawed anyway, never mind the whole purse and a child shit which makes absolutely no sense. Why don't you just admit that the bar is fucked instead of pointing the finger of blame at others?

And for the record I hadn't even heard of seen that QP bar untill this thread. So you're making a generlization by saying "Why does everyone think this is good, but mine forced?"

Give it up

QP isn't even that good tbh.

hes good hes just missing a fuck ton of elements that make you a dope battler^ hes god nice wordplay.. but his punches...ehhh.. and his delivery sucks.. and i hate how he repeats everything

Thae QP Swave battle was funny as fuck. QP got BitchMade. Def a one-sided crowd though.

Lolz... :cool:

fuck blank if he wants to believe his wordplay is good then fuck em let him lose every battle

i got an example of good wordplay for you blank

"Real life is something that your crimes won't be cuz you 'not ready to face time' like iphone 3."

beat that

Person'S'..... Thats is tha only flaw w/ tha WP but tha SET UP was tottally off.. And even a person who sometime forces tha shiii outta stuff(Me) can truely say that was BORDERLINE Lizmania

actually not wordplay.... but a solid punchline none the less.


"the master of writtin. u trynna 'elevate' to NO CAPS, ALL SWAG but the latter/ladder is missin"

theres wordplay.... my bad lol

Here... This is a verse fulla WP. Some MAY be forced but everything fits in with tha concepts

First Concept: Fucking
Second Concept: Jesus

(Vs. Mind Fuck)

He on that LOSER SHIT.. Mainly cause I'm "Goin in on: Fuck Easy" wen I "LUBE N SPIT" o.OH THATS IT But I'mma 'Get Mind(Head), out tha way'..Then UR ASS IS FUCKED!! Pick any day & get 'Stuck on that date' cause we wudn see 'Fuck over Great', So dont 'Pipe, OR GAS HIM UP(Orgasim).. & Ma "Mag'll lend, views of a holy body"(Mary Magalin) wen I SQUEEZE ON YA BOSS, 'Jay See, a L'?(J.C.) 'JESUS, GET OFF' cause even w/ ya 'Calvary hangin' I ain EASILY 'CROSSED' .. Liiitework, like WHO'S AH BITCH.. In tha gym(Gem), If I "Die, Man"(Diamond) then tha "JEWS WERE SWITCHED"! Cause Rappin gainst a Hood dweller will leave 'letters, after this Good Fella' w/o havin his "CREW SUFFIX'D"(Crusifix)!! ..Classick

Haha.. Dope shiii Hue

Since you was battling Rupt, Something like this would of worked better.

This guy's broad?.... 'by George!'.... HE LOVED AND LOST HER!.... she told me how he lacks in game... a real 'drag n saint'.... so now she.... 'fucks with me'....
woah!, wow she's.... 'touching me'....*sobs*.... till she 'ERUPT dah MONSTA'!!....

what the fuck does a purse have to do with a child?

Thats some Lizman shit tbh

Don't Namedrop Me Like That
Don't Do That

Hm
Somehow You're Starting To Actually Piss Me Off

What Was That For?
Do You Want Me To Showcase The Many Flaws In That Verse?