I need some honest help
 

I dunno apparently i'm missing something in my battles, i don't see it but other people do, i just want some honest feedback how to improve my battles. p.s if you're gonna be a douche don't bother. :high:

Drop a quick verse, I'll critique it for you to the best of my knowledge.

Damn nigga u been here since 07' u askin for help now??? SMH.

lol i only really came back to lb a couple in like september sort of. i din't touch it for ages before then. and siccness just peep my hotlist wit Kyle_

twist... ur shit is deep bro.. we've battled before

i think that u been around for so long that ur tryna fuse tha old shit n tha new swag.
jx let it go bro. kp ya trains of thought, jx try to strutucre it different, n also try to think of one or two HEAD TURNING punches to throw in there.

ur gud

imo.......

Well, I dont want to quote your verse, and break it down, might be considered as swaying so, holla at me when that battle closes, I'll tell you what I think you should do, moving forward.

cheers famo, iunno i'm just doubtin it lately coz i been losing to even basic cats.

aight siccness cheers man.

its closed