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I tend to read shit generally. In general, pull and skull is very off and I would never comfortably read that in text form.
Man and Smack work for me though. The A sound is all the rhyme SMACK THIS DUDE RAPPING GOOD MAN IS CRUDE Ironically when writing these you'll probably find one I'll always get off. In Scotland food, good, dude, rude all rhyme and even putting on accents those still sounds the same so it's always hard for me to catch. But yeah, pull/stool/school/drool, skull/null/gul/cull |
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Not as much dead as just... simpler. Voter are either lazy dick riders or close minded. This place feels more like a popularity contests for accolades more so than artists tryna push their game. I don’t see artists or even individuals here as much.
I rly have little room to speak as I don’t vote but y’all gave me 50+ credits for voting on a tourney lmao & at least when I vote I VOTE. I read verses 3 to 10 times. I experiment with flows & rhymes. I break it down bar by bar, measure the complexity of the scheme, freshness of the concept, how it was delivered, if it comes back effectively later on. Etc etc. I do it empathetically & comprehensively. Y’all sit back & wait to be impressed like Eminem is suddenly gonna log on lol. ---------- Post added at 02:23 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:13 PM ---------- Like I see y’alls criticism & I respect it. I see how y’all want people to set up their multies, I see how y’all want words to rhyme one dimensionally, I see how y’all skip around concepts to maximize punches. I see y’all. & I saw RULES rookie how to rap thread too hahah & I think it’s great & all I just don’t agree. Ppl have grown alienated if they’re not textbook that’s boring to me. ---------- Post added at 02:29 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:23 PM ---------- See like man & smack to me don’t rhyme but they’d be 100% fine for most internals. & even so depending how effective the delivery & concept & how easily it rolls off the tongue it could work. |
A rapper rhymes words ... A lyricist makes words rhyme
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Hell poets don’t even rhyme sometimes & that goes for Kendrick.
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The 'ull' in both pull and skull match. It isn't pool..."What happened your back, man?" Ah, i strained a muscle swimming at the pull... Ya'll on some fucking drugs, i swear. :monkey::monkey: |
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i STILL remember when Lil Wayne rhymed Rock with July in that damn Kevin Rudolph song
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@Manhattan that song made many charts.. plenty of money.. so rhyming those words was a smart move in my eyes... https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Can%27...t_(T-Pain_song) ---------- Post added at 08:52 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:45 PM ---------- I think the important thing to remember is that the crowd we are really appealing to on this site when it comes to battle rap is a body of other rappers... Everyone judging our lyrics are writers themselves. Of course there will be criticisms on word choice, style techniques, etc... To a crowd of people who aren't also battle rapping half of the technical factors we care about actually don't matter. People want to be entertained when it comes to music and lyrics. They don't want to analyze. As voters that are also battling, we analyze critically. With all honesty also, who can actually read someone's text battle and know the exact flow someone is using. If you can, you're lying... there's a big difference in reading and listening. Even without the accent of some of the foreign rappers I can still rhyme the words that they do. It looks funky when written, but delivered in speech it's perfectly fine. ---------- Post added at 08:54 PM ---------- Previous post was at 08:52 PM ---------- Quote:
yeah.. because if you emphasize on particular sounds the words will rhyme.. it removes all limit from writing lyrics... another song that also made chart positions and plenty of money.. smart move.. |
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