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NICHOLAS: 7 KILOS: 6 NICHOLAS: Points for his multis and decent concepts, Vocab was also over average and punchlines were good, Nameplay and Humour was also there So overall a good verse with consistent rhyme scheme. So is my winner. KILOS: Flipped his opponent's line in the opener but with broken multis (Contra-diction), Also rhyme scheme wasn't regular, Punches were decent though there were some played ones.. Overall a good fight given. |
I still want to fix my Vp can't find week 1 test? Sorry ive been busy
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Week 2 Vote @X-Calibur
EMCEE A (NICHOLAS) = 3: Emcee A had a bit of a rhyming scheme going on but was missing the elements needed to compete in this battle. His punchlines barely had an impact in my honest opinion and the wordplay was okay but needs work like all of his verse. EMCEE B (KILOS) = 5: Emcee B had a decent flow and included the main elements of what a rap battle is made up of in regards to punchlines, wordplay and multies which I really enjoyed reading and made me laugh. And also both used a few metaphors which is always good to see and helps improve their rhyme scheme and builds their skill as well but I definitely believe Emcee B was better on all levels in this one. That’s my vote, my honest fair vote. Peace Out BIG DICE. |
emcee A= 7
emcee B= 8 I chose emcee B, his punches were strong and hit hard. the flow was constant all the way through. his multis were on point and clean. emcee A, for dropping first, he had a good approach with his verse. the only problems I really saw were, the burger and absurd part, and not sure if he was rhyming calling in the murda with something, I didn't see anything that rhymed with that. if I missed it someone let me know..besides that, it was a pretty good battle verse, the bad part was emcee A dropped first, so it was easy for emcee B to point out some of his mistakes....fair vote, emcee B is my winner |
Week 1
Emcee A=6 Emcee B=8 I'm going with winner because he utilized Multis and better structure vocab and punches ---------- Post added at 05:29 PM ---------- Previous post was at 05:22 PM ---------- Week 2 Emcee A Nickolous=6 Emcee B Kilos=8 I felt my winner kilos won because he had a sweet rebuttal better Multis and punches including vocab fv |
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Deadline has passed for week 2 i shall be posting results and updating thread later today ....
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