ProntoBanks: judgin from Dummy Dope alone I'd conclude you definitely have a tendency to say random shit and ramble on, you kinda like a prepubescent poor man's version of Lil Wayne except with an annoying unmarketable voice......

You come up wit a lot of nice lines, but it's like a collage of incomplete thoughts. I'd like to see if you can hold a theme through a whole song or at least develop concepts that would enable a listener to follow your line of thought

But with that said......Waka Flaka has been successful doin what you're doin, so you still might have a chance to make it lil nigga


*about to go listen to Huey J

fl 44..............

can't believe nobody mentioned illimit .... some of the best tracks i've heard on here are his... plus he's been doing shows with his group for years and produces all his own shit

Out of curiosity , Spooky

What track was u refering to when u was talking about me?

Cause some of the shit I do is off the top...

(Refering to the rambling, I normaly just mess around with words)

Bending/Forcing

still no mention

pfffffffftt

Huey J: got smoother delivery than most, but it seems like 75% of your material revolves around the state of the rap game. Shit is one dimensional. There's been a lot of underground cats complainin on tracks for a long time, if you haven't noticed. I mean tell me who isn't doin that. Explore some more subjects bitch. Diversify your portfolio.

However, I will say you got a lil soul wit it but nobody's gonna be breakin their neck to hear you grouch Oscar......

Keep spittin

lmfao....yo....Spook...you are so swagger jacking Killz right now that i wanna be mad..but damn...i cant hate on someone who is at least good at something....even if it does involve adopting my steez successfully


plus it never ceases to amaze me that people will take input from nearly ANY source...yall muhfuckas is silly as shit...this dude hasnt let niggas hear even an AUDIO BATTLE...and yall acting like son knows what the fuck he's talking about...based solely on the fact that he SAYS he knows what he's talking about...smh...yall forget that this is the same cat that has spent the better part of 6mos clowning and shit in the forums, and has dropped no more than maybe 12 total battles...

yall want some feedback? go to the fucking studio and do you...fuck what this lil nigga say...and stop falling for the okie doke...


-Killz (the real one)

I was sayin in general (like the diss songs I've heard), but if it's off the top......that would make me look at things a lil differently

oh..and i forgot, in my old age, to mention that an "industry ready rapper" is such a vague term that its not even something attainable....both Black Thought and Waka Flaka are in the 'industry'....so skill doesnt play a part...there are ALOT of factors

Damn, you so old you forgot how old you were nigga? :o Funny shit......