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Originally Posted by pULSe (Post 595570)

When ya girls Hyper? Ball lickin time! like GOKU WHEN HE TRAINED FOR CELL.

That concept makes sense. "When ya girls hyper-bolic in time" is how it would read... and its a phrase that makes sense both ways, considering I say like GOKU WHEN HE TRAINED FOR CELL... because thats when lightbulbs will go off and you guys go "Ohhh, its a DBZ line"

The question mark was added for rhyme's sake, because obviously the wordplay is Hyperbolic In Time and not Hyper?Bolic In Time... when I made this, I made the ? like a 1 second pause before proceeding to BALL LICKIN TIME! So its like splitting HYPERBOLIC into two words, HYPER-BOLIC IN TIME/HYPER? BALL LICKIN TIME!

@Literally; Hyperbolic Time Chamber was some place Dragonballz characters trained. To me Rican's ORPHAN:ISSUE is on point because I know how to read it. I think some people are literally taking the two words and reading them separately. "ORPHAN" "ISSUE" ....

Just Because Hyper Ball And The First part Of Lickin Connect Together With A Place Where Songoku Trained... Doesn't Mean Its A Good Line.... It's Actually Pretty Stupid: To Use Only Half Of The Wordplays Meaning To Set Up A Punch... I Mean What Does The Other Part Has To Do With ' GOKU WHEN HE TRAINED FOR CELL'?? Nothing? Great Stuff

LOL @ Lizman thinking a whole entire rhyme scheme has to relate to a wordplay for it to work. Fucking dumbass.

maybe the other lines didnt have anything to do with Goku because I didn't get to that point in my verse yet, dumbass. the Hyperbolic/Goku is what connects the concept. not you KNOW YOU'RE GONNA TAKE AN L bla bla bla bla bla. That's part of the set-up, the rhyme scheme I decided to set up for that GOKU WHEN HE TRAINED FOR CELL rhyme.

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Originally Posted by pULSe (Post 595597)

LOL @ Lizman thinking a whole entire rhyme scheme has to relate to a wordplay for it to work. Fucking dumbass.

maybe the other lines didnt have anything to do with Goku because I didn't get to that point in my verse yet, dumbass. the Hyperbolic/Goku is what connects the concept. not you KNOW YOU'RE GONNA TAKE AN L bla bla bla bla bla. That's part of the set-up, the rhyme scheme I decided to set up for that GOKU WHEN HE TRAINED FOR CELL rhyme.

Yeah...
But A "dumbass" Like Me Does That On EVERY SINGLE BATTLE

I tip my hat to you then, lizman. That would explain your tremendous success as a textcee.

Atleast I'm Able To Make Every Single Meaning Of A Worplay Make Sense With The Connected Punch (For People Like You, After You've Read My Expos (Or Not)); You, Instead, Just Create One Connection And Cut The Other Meaning Up As You Desire

First off... Even though i bullshit around... I fux with pULSe... son is nice and cool in the forums...but... Hyperbolic in time is closer to forced than not. And then to sway and bring up Ricans forced shit is wrong tho. Orphan issue is also slightly forced. As the general emphasis on the syllables is awkward.