Originally Posted by Lockhart (Post 1065981)

@Louie Dawgs How about instead of that 16 you sent me, we have a Scheme battle instead?

Originally Posted by Louie Dawgs (Post 1065983)

Fine with me. But it might be a while. I'm finishing a 16 for Row, and I have LBT coming up.

Originally Posted by M-Rock (Post 1065970)

Dope track

Originally Posted by Louie Dawgs (Post 1065978)

I get what you are saying..but like back in the day it was a point of pride to be able to scheme for several lines. Now I see guys going fucking one and done on a rhyme. In my mind only using a multi for one line is a negative, and fucks up the verse. I never usually use a scheme for less than two punches. But I'm from a different school of thought.

Like, if I do an eight. Unless i'm just bullshitting it, I try to use one scheme the whole verse.

Originally Posted by Erupt (Post 1066414)

Creativity is key.... But there are different levels of creativity... anyone can sit and make a creative line and add a multi... but what separates you from good to great.. is when you can be creative with your multis/vocab as well... Audio doesn't need multis as much as text... that's completely false brah.

In order to be the best.. and respected by the best for the most part you have to master being creative with your multis, swag, etc.. creativity goes way further than just a concept.

If you look at 90 percent of the cats in the text hall of fame.... and read their ish .. you'll see what I mean.

I had a convo with @Jason ... and he showed me an open verse he did, which had crazy schemes, concepts, etc... and cats didn't even realize it or pay homage.... completely overlooked the foundation of the verse.. that's the type of shit that makes HOFers not want to battle.

Texting is moreso multis/vocab than audio ..because it is on paper.. but im preaching to the choir I suppose

Originally Posted by ILLoKWENT (Post 1066415)

@Jason post that verse.lets see it.

Originally Posted by Jason (Post 1066461)

Yoyo! Im BACK bitches!!! It might be for ONLY-a-MINUTE, y’all remember these flows, right?? They go-like-a-river you don’t even KNOW that IT HIT YA, like a BOA CONSTRICTOR? --while yours are so TOTALLY VISCIOUS??
HOMIE-im-GIFTED, I missed shootin the shit-with-you kids I know I’m what you “miss in the ring” like the SOCHI OLYMPICS!! Fuck Mr.Nice Guy time to SHOW-what Im THINKIN’
cus Ive FUCKIN HAD e-NOUGH!!…….
i was the king-of-this-jungle till YOUNGINS TRASHED-it-UP but now all of your runs-through cus I aint COMIN back FOR FUN/ I’m comin cus you thunder-cats is fuckin-whack-as-fuck this whole site finna get “run through” and this is JUST a “PRACTICE RUN”// phew!
Hah, y’all Thought that I’d lost-it???? Well now you’ve MADE it PAST the PREVIEW - - - - >Jasons’ back the brainiac, im going STRAIGHT from BAD to EVIL, stop all-of-the-nonsense cus your SHADY ACT is SEE-THROUGH, you wouldn’t have “close call with a convict” w/ a PANE of GLASS be-TWEEN YOU!
Y’all sayin Fuck the old heads????????
Then Im here to SETTLE the SCORE
You pathetic-irrelevant BORES shoot off your mouths and YELL in the FORUMS but hit my PM’s beggin-to de-DEVELOP RAPPORT/ faggits Ive mastered the details you’ve YET to EXPLORE, don’t bother sendin to a legend when every SENTENCE is SNOOOORE you haven’t touched my “threshold” since I STEPPED-thru the DOOR so my verses always “Flier” cus I got something “SPECIAL, IN STORE!!”// wowza!
DOGGY-im a BIT-NICE!
Lemme give you some background, back ‘round 09 I had your DAUGHTER in her SLICK-TIGHTS honest-this is all-legit she got DOGGY’D w/ this THICK-PIPE time passed-now I for-GOT the CHICK EXISTS, RIGHT//
I moved on, ’11 I spot-you-with-your-chick, I OFFERED that we SPLIT I got all-up-in-the-bitch she was HONESTLY a BIT TIGHT// he found out, drove his CAR to WHERE I LIVE puts his CHOPPER to my CHIN-TIGHT Asks me if I got my “Affairs in order” …. Hmmm, well I said your DAUGHTER… THEN your BITCH, RIGHT??? (LMFAO)
lmao shit, I-AM the MAN!!
If you do not-wanna-die just nod and comply, cus If you de-CLINE my COMMANDS ill do a helicopter spin and WIND up the HANDS Ill hit him so high in the “air, he’ll plain disappear” (aerial plane disappear) and we wont FIND where you LAND// Boom! I know youre KIND of a STAN
I got a SMOOOOV GAME, whats Vintage WU-TANG to your SCREW-BRAINED CLIQIUES?? Johnny-walker-BLUE AGED to a KOOL-AID DRINK?? Top of the FOOD-CHAIN, its TOO LATE KIDS its 2014 and the fact is YOUUUU AINNNTTTT SHIIIIIIIT, my “rappin off the wall” .. and you more like the NEW SLAVES VID .. askfhakfa fuck!
Im the reason you always wondered where your FATHER’s AT……well ……. Time to put a STOP-to-THAT … hello!! PAPPA’s BACK! Scratch that the MONSTAS BACK text, audio, when I hop ONN’a TRACK every single “sound creates an image” like a SONOGRAPH, boP! Ya dignity? NOT-inTACT f’really-b ill hit you w/ such a hard-attack it simulates a HEART ATTACK the gap between him-n-me? So far I had to warn him when re-SPONDIN BACK no matter what he writes when this Thangs-scored it’ll be “10-4” …….. do you ‘AWKNOWLEDGE THAT???’
–(tell your mamma to hollaback!) yaaa, baby I can go on-for-hours no AUSTIN POWERS this is MFD’z bitch, genius w/ rhymes before you even replied you’ve GOT-DEVOURED these peasants is NOT-empowered we’re the “Royals” of this site we even got the Lord makin SONGS a-BOUT US///
its time that you-discover you cant FUCK w/ my FINE-THANGS, my windows, HUNG w/ some FINE-DRAPES fresh branches COVER the WINE-CAGE and you, the BUTLER! how are you a hustla, w/out a COUPLE of NICE-CHAINS?? Your sterlings whack, lets think of this as… a curling-match? and you need to “brush UP, on your ICE-GAME” (okay!) haaaah!

Originally Posted by Ivan CORTEZ (Post 1066462)

This verse was so dope, the flier line and the afairs In order and almost every bar was perfect. Had the basics down to a t.

The problem with most these battlers is that they try that overly complex shit without mastering their basics (usage of relevant multies and setups, wording a concept so that the punch is more impactful).

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@Jasons verse might be having less punches than others 32 but quality over quantity. All those punches were crisp and perfect and executed properly.