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FiNAL WoRD 05-13-2012 09:09 PM

you think his tracks bad, you should see the audio tre sent me randomly when he left classick all pissy on some ho shit cause he hated me soooo much hahaha
hes on his icp swag, and he sent it when i told him i didnt do audio yet like a year back

TRE 05-13-2012 10:13 PM

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Originally Posted by Ticket (Post 795985)
Tre.. don't ask for feedback and cry about it and talk shit it makes you look like a faggot and a loser, the track wasn't good bro, keep it movin... (of course no hate)

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and if you didn't give a fuck what people thought, you wouldn't ask for feedback and have peoples feedback in your sig... seriously.. don't bullshit me. one.



Ticket, suck my dick man.. again.. I dont give a fuck what u think about what I say.. when the FUCK are u dudes going to get that? I didnt talk shit to J.. I said.. he must not like my style.. his points was the lines and blah blah he didnt like.. thats MY STYLE.. he didnt like it.. enough said.. more than likely any song I do he wont like.. cause he dont like MY STYLE

you dont like that.. suck on the ballsack bitch

---------- Post added at 10:07 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:05 PM ----------

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Originally Posted by FiNAL WoRD (Post 796031)
you think his tracks bad, you should see the audio tre sent me randomly when he left classick all pissy on some ho shit cause he hated me soooo much hahaha
hes on his icp swag, and he sent it when i told him i didnt do audio yet like a year back

oh you talking about the FREESTYLE i sent you? that you didnt even accept.. tho it was soooo bad?? OH THAT! LOL really who the fuck is FINAL WORD and what the fuck has he done for this site or hip hop in general..

for those that dont like my music.. its fine.. u dont like it.. for those that dont like me and hangs on every word I make.. FUCK YOU

and in the TRUE FASHION of the EOS way.. ill say.. GO AHEAD DISS ME and waste your fucking time

---------- Post added at 10:13 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:07 PM ----------

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ticket (Post 795985)
and if you didn't give a fuck what people thought, you wouldn't ask for feedback and have peoples feedback in your sig... seriously.. don't bullshit me. one.[COLOR="Silver"]

Ill take the feedback, and im fine with what he said.. cause I know there are people that like my music.. if were ALL delusional enough to think EVERYONE will like their music is retarded.. but if you dont like.. i truly dont give a fuck.. Ticket your one of the most emotional fags on this site.. and you saying that about me is kinda funny

SH1T L0RD 05-13-2012 10:19 PM

take it somewhere else ladies

Mikey DeNiro 05-13-2012 10:34 PM


She Wants A Gentleman = Swag

SH1T L0RD 05-13-2012 10:55 PM

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Originally Posted by iQ™ (Post 796056)

BEAT lol this beat was hype

PERFORMANCE man seems like everyone been rapping like this recently, ever since big sean and them. you went in on it and didn't sound like u were reading. definitely comfortable on the mic but something about your performance was unnatural to me. idunno if its cause you were just rapping like ovvverly swaggy or something and it came off like you were putting on a bit of a front... idunno i don't really like heavy party music though and thats kinda what this is. solid performance, something was a bit off. one thing i did like was the lil walk in you did at the beginning, 'i got this' lol like you just hopped in the booth from the boards

PRODUCTION great, really good... best yet in this thread. the guys voice at the start was muddy, but you came in and cut him off real quick so that worked

HOOK lamar already hit that 'hol up' hook heavy, but this was a decent party hook. nothin new though

LYRIC cool lyric, i wouldve felt a lil quick sylable flow switch up for a couple bars in there, that shit would bounce on this beat pretty dope. but nah your lyric was definitely cool, well written. one thing i don't feel is the 'swag swag' shit anymore though, leave that for the goonies in the bay

OVERALL this is a party song for sure. BUT thing is, the hook and the rap style all been done my man. The beat could definitely be slaughtered for a party track, but if u really wanna make a party song thats gunna go hard outside of your friend group you gotta think of some shit that nobodies put on track, and make that the hook. in my opinion, party music is all about starting a new fad. thats what people like, if thats what your into. so the reason the song didn't really work is cause your not really doin anything new.. think of some shit your friends do or say thats funny or catchy. i give it a 6, has potential

Ticket 05-13-2012 11:10 PM

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Originally Posted by Gurp Da God (Post 796051)
take it somewhere else ladies

The land you built the playhouse on is in my name son.. its all good

SH1T L0RD 05-14-2012 02:55 PM

i missed a payment on the playhouse, im shutting it down... fuck you

SH1T L0RD 05-15-2012 12:27 PM

iv created something recently that pleased me, playhouse back open

FiNAL WoRD 05-16-2012 02:28 AM

No one loves you huey,......

SH1T L0RD 05-16-2012 12:20 PM

w/e, these reviews were starting to make me look cunty anyway


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