| dmullz |
03-10-2011 04:19 PM |
Quote:
Originally Posted by Spooky Deep
(Post 598713)
Okay straight up, my take on......
1. FreezyCT: Not feelin your mixing......like stackin the voice and the adlibs
You gotta nice flow, but you could definitely put more thought into lyricism and relatin to the audience not just talkin about how you rhyme
We know you rap, why spend the whole verse tellin us how you rap?
2. dmullz: no hate, but man you need to switch ya style up......your words get jumbled and flow trails off so much
Need to work on breath control......
3. JusT C: sometimes it seems like you're ramblin, you got a nice delivery somewhat......maybe you can enunciate better (no it's not the accent)
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Wow i actually agree with you, my breath control isnt very good but i will say each track it has been a little bit better- so hopefully Im fine, but my content and what is their considering i just started- but ya i speed up to much sometimes makes my words sound to alike, breathe control is a bitch wish i was michael phelps or some shit
Huey is nice as fuck- But ill be honest with you Spooky people like my shit A cause of my beats B) cause im rapping about fun shit that is relevant to people my ages 19-20, but dude if you listen to Huey's EP its dope, his lyrics are on point an his sound is unique I approve lol |
