Thanks man I appreciate it!
Keep them views coming ya'll!

bump. feedback is appreciated!

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@EGOTISTIKK what you think son

@reEFer, thoughts?

@Agonize feedback would def be appreciated

good shit fam, def a real solid first battle, I would livin up the delivery a lil, and engage the crowd, other than that 3-0 , keep at it you actually got potential in this cus I know you got bars,

stay grindin my nig

ay bruh, u had me on dat newport symbol line KUDOS and jus so u will know u might see me live soon i'm tryin' out in december wish me luck #KEEPGRINDIN' #BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMM!!!

thanks for checkin it out ya'll
tony good luck man

ayo killed that shit, for real. 3-0. hey arnold line was a killer, man. if anything i'd say speed your delivery up just a little bit and more emphasis, but everybody has said that.
i commented, subbed and liked to support fam. props.

dope lines man. i was feelin it. But you gotta remember that people there are looking to get into also. Just try not to be so complex like your "in Vitamins" line, even tho that would work in text id say dumb it down for them. but you have bars man. keep it up. oh yea.... CLASSICK

dos good shit...you murked him.....hmmm rockford,ill thats couple hours away lol keep at it feed the simple minds with simple lines

yea it seems like my best approach is simple comedy

Dude I'm not hating at all, I could never get up on stage and live battle. You did awesome. Pretty much bodied him. It's hardtop critique someone doing something I haven't done. And you kind of reminded me of this guy named Marshall Mathers