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Yo @X-Calibur can i get in Fam???

so week 1 is done thankfully all those who took part passed well done guys now onto your week 2 assignments the verses aren't as easy as it was in week 1 im expecting some mixed responses here....

good luck ....

@Proctologist
@ET the Refugee
@JayPrince
@BIG DICE
@BROWNCIGAR
@Soly

Ok my vote is 7 for Nick and 8 for Kilos. I feel like Nick had some nice punches and wordplay with decent setups and vocabulary but I also feel like Kilos had the same strengths but since he flipped the St. Nick line on Nicholas, and had better vocabulary and wordplay, his punches were harder and funnier. Good verse from both but kilos won.

EMCEE B: WINNER 5
EMCEE A : LOSER 3

Pretty clear winner here, basically 'MC B' was on another level, 'A' wasn't bad has some decent rhymes but nothing that packed a punch, also it was hard to read as there was no punctuation, I advise he tries using worldplay and also multis with more than one syllable also incorporate some metaphors in there, basically he is basic but will grow better with experience.

Winner : Nicely set out and everything flowed quite nicely, he had multi syllable rhymes and showed he understood these quite well, unlike the loser he also introduced wordplay once or twice, now this is good and although it's quite basic wordplay it was above his opponent and was great for this battle but it may need to be more complex for future battles, also try rhyming the middle of the rhymes more than the last part of a bar... I have to say both battlers didn't really use too much vocabulary and that could be implemented into their future battles.

EMCEE A: Low 7.
EMCEE B: Middle 6.
Nick has executed his punches and wordplay better. He was funnier too. Kilos mentioned the broken rhyme in a pretty nice way and he tried to keep it relevant but I feel like he forced some rhyme schemes and lines in his verse. For example "I hope lets beef don't think this QUEER-KAT-IS-SUPER". I think he just said that to rhyme with the following line. Not bad, but he could've used better punchlines. Nick kept punching and that's why he won for me.

Register me

Please read the first post and complete assignments week 1 and week 2 by Monday

All my votes are fairest of fair, even my given points match with the average rating on the battles.. still my vp is 0?

You say register me I tell you what to do and now you complain ...
My here's no point dwelling on it man it is what it is so man up make a move and improve you can do that through here ....

So as I said read the first post then complete week's 1 & 2 and post it in here ....

Thanks,
X

- WEEK 1 -

EMCEE A: 3
EMCEE B: 5

EMCEE A: Focussed on his flow, No comma/fullstop.. It was hard to understand his lines, No wordplay, weak vocab, no metaphores, punchlines were weak and multis were absent. There was no real connection between his lines, he actually forced rhyming words in his verse just for the sake of it. Points for his flow and some jabs.
EMCEE B: Decent multis, metaz and vocab, few generic wordplays with some decent punchlines but overall he was consistent. Constantly attacked his opponent with punches and kept his multis clean and clear. So is my winner.

Because the admins/mods are retards 90% of the time and don't like it if you don't vote for person with high rep of the 'favourite' lmao, this site gets sillier by the day.

- WEEK 2 -

NICHOLAS: 7
KILOS: 6

NICHOLAS: Points for his multis and decent concepts, Vocab was also over average and punchlines were good, Nameplay and Humour was also there So overall a good verse with consistent rhyme scheme. So is my winner.

KILOS: Flipped his opponent's line in the opener but with broken multis (Contra-diction), Also rhyme scheme wasn't regular, Punches were decent though there were some played ones.. Overall a good fight given.

I still want to fix my Vp can't find week 1 test? Sorry ive been busy

Its all in the first post bro ....

Week 2 Vote @X-Calibur

EMCEE A (NICHOLAS) = 3: Emcee A had a bit of a rhyming scheme going on but was missing the elements needed to compete in this battle. His punchlines barely had an impact in my honest opinion and the wordplay was okay but needs work like all of his verse.
EMCEE B (KILOS) = 5: Emcee B had a decent flow and included the main elements of what a rap battle is made up of in regards to punchlines, wordplay and multies which I really enjoyed reading and made me laugh. And also both used a few metaphors which is always good to see and helps improve their rhyme scheme and builds their skill as well but I definitely believe Emcee B was better on all levels in this one.

That’s my vote, my honest fair vote. Peace Out BIG DICE.

emcee A= 7

emcee B= 8

I chose emcee B, his punches were strong and hit hard. the flow was constant all the way through. his multis were on point and clean. emcee A, for dropping first, he had a good approach with his verse. the only problems I really saw were, the burger and absurd part, and not sure if he was rhyming calling in the murda with something, I didn't see anything that rhymed with that. if I missed it someone let me know..besides that, it was a pretty good battle verse, the bad part was emcee A dropped first, so it was easy for emcee B to point out some of his mistakes....fair vote, emcee B is my winner

Week 1
Emcee A=6
Emcee B=8

I'm going with winner because he utilized Multis and better structure vocab and punches

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Week 2
Emcee A Nickolous=6
Emcee B Kilos=8

I felt my winner kilos won because he had a sweet rebuttal better Multis and punches including vocab fv

Sign me up please. thanks

Could you please read the original post and complete weeks one and two and post it in here .....

Thanks,
X

Deadline has passed for week 2 i shall be posting results and updating thread later today ....

So much for week two. It's almost halfway through week 3 and no results and no new assignment.

Just on my way home from work and I was away for the bank holiday weekend you can expect your results and week3 assignment later

I Apologise for the delay .....

updated with week 3 and 4 set up ....

good luck to you all

NICHOLAS:4

KILOS: 6

BASICALLY, NICKS OPENING BAR WAS GOOD AND SOME NICE WORDPLAY THERE BUT THROUGH OUT THE BATTLE HE USED ONE SYLLABLE RHYMES AND NEXT TO NO MULTIS AND IT JUST DIDN'T FEEL UP TO THE STANDARDS OF THE OTHER BATTLER. ALSO LETS FACE IT, HE TRIED FORCING THE RHYME 'ABSURD HERE AND BURGER'

KILOS ON THE OTHER HAND CAME IN AND FLOWED AGGRESSIVELY THROUGH OUT AND KEPT MY EYES FIXED OVERALL. HE HAD SOME NICE WORDPLAY AND METAPHORS AND LOTS OF MULTI-SYLLABLE MULTIS.. HE ALSO FLIPPED NICKS BARS A A GOOD FEW TIMES. THE MAIN DIFFERENCE WAS HIS MID RHYME MULTIS E.G heat clips and nines I'll just make sure he "eats-shit-and-dies" like a FEAR-FACTOR-BLOOPER - THESE REALLY KEEP THE FLOW OF THE BATTLE AND PROVES KILOS IS ON ANOTHER ALL ROUND LEVEL AT BATTLING.

Where is week 3's assignment?

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^^ maybe I'm not with popular opinion, but at least someone saw what I did.

All in the original post dude the same as week 1 & week 2 .... :facepalm:

1.@Proctologist
2.@ET the Refugee
3. @JayPrince
4. @BIG DICE
5. @BROWNCIGAR
6. @Soly
7. @STaLWaRT
8. @J8E


Yall have until tomorrow for me to grade your week 3's

Get it in fellas !!!!

Diss: 8 Aksari: 7
Both had excellent verses. My loser had very creative use of Multis and nice personals but my winner had the personals Multis and wordplay as well as more punches and funnier punches. This battle is really a matter of preference though imo because both had very few flaws. By a cunt hair my winner got it.

Week 3 Voting:

EMCEE A (DIZZIT): 8 = I felt that Emcee A was more creative in his verse by the way he incorporated in wordplay that was relevant, his vocabulary was quite good and the punchlines were clean and were clearly understood. His Multies were okay but needs improvement.

EMCEE B (ASKARI): 7 = Emcee B was really good aswell and thought he also incorporated in those elements I've discussed above but felt he lacked in some of those areas such as wordplay and punchlines and needs a little more polishing touches on those but it definitely was a great battle.

That's my vote for Week 3 and hope it's okay. Thanks X.

EMCEE A = 7

EMCEE B = 7

after reading both a few times, I feel Emcee A had a slight better verse along with the punches and wordplay. EMCEE A is my winner

Week 3 challenge
Dissizit=8
Askari=7

Both had spectacular verses my winner was a little more consistent and swingin harder i liked the punches and flow

And it seems like this thread has been forgotten about again.......

I'm currently on holiday ^^^^

In Africa I'll be back on the 19th i did state to complete weeks 3 and 4 in all pm's i sent im pretty sure if you look back i also updated weeks 3 and 4 together so as you could comtinue to do both weeks whilst i am on holiday when i get back i expect you all to have completed weeks 3 and 4


I havent forgot about this dont you worry im just enjoying some sun at the minute ...

Cool. Didn't know if I graduated or not.

Not long until I return hope yall have got ya links ready for the week 4 challange ....

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1.@Proctologist
2.@ET the Refugee
3. @JayPrince
4. @BIG DICE
5. @BROWNCIGAR
6. @Soly
7. @STaLWaRT
8. @J8E

I've had a septum surgery recently, I'd drop vote for week 3 tomorrow if it's ok

its graduation time !!!!!!....

who will be the first graduates of the school of VP

well i can confirm the first to graduate is @ET the Refugee

1.@Proctologist
3. @JayPrince
4. @BIG DICE
5. @BROWNCIGAR
6. @Soly
7. @STaLWaRT
8. @J8E

Still awaiting yall week 3 entries and your links to my PM ....

@Proctologist
@JayPrince
@BIG DICE
@Soly
@STaLWaRT
@J8E

you all have five days to complete weeks 3 & 4

other wise you will have failed this and you VP will not be changed..


congrats to @ET the Refugee & @BROWNCIGAR for passing out the school of VP

Last chance today yo submit otherwise you'll always be on the failed list and you votes never respected and your VP will stay on 0


After tonight we start October with new sign ups and new challenges!!!

If only I still had my mod powers I could edit this thread after tonight ....

UPDATED AND IMPROVED TAKING IN NEW CLASS MATES FOR OCTOBER .....