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I been told plenty of times to do it that way, i guess I'll switch it up and leave the verses out and fuck peoples criticism cuz no matter what is done criticism will always be there and for cant no speak down on my full breakdowns cuz i read i verse analyze each bar then re-read the verse so my shits theory but I'll take that into consideration well actually I'll leave out the verses...

@Dave Once again someone says my shits basically copied and pasted verses well heres proof to shut people up.... Kw0n vs Illokwent... Heres my breakdown without the verses...
Kw0n...This was a pretty decent opener but the only problem was your wording... Try typing more proper and take your time and go over your verse and fix typos cuz that will help with a much cleaner read but other then that you had some nice concepts, the illo quit shit was nice and your execution and set-ups were pretty decent....These lines were kind of hard to follow cuz of your choice of words... Your set-ups and execution here was not that strong and lacked creativity... Your multies were alright but like i said hard to follow and your concepts were basic but these lines flowed somewhat good... You should work on your structure..These lines are better then your previous but not better then your opener.... Once again i understand your verse its just your wording makes your verse look sloppy... Your concepts were decent along with your set-ups and execution... Your multies were ok but could be better and you should try showing more complexity in your bars.These lines had a lot of filler in them... The only good part was the tearing a zipper line, the rest just dragged and lacked creativity and the tearing the zipper line was still basic but i liked it but it could have been a lot stronger if worded better... Your concepts were basic along with execution and set-ups and your multies were ok..These lines weren't weak but they also were not strong at all...Good concepts and your set-ups were ok but your execution was weak... I honestly think your action figure line would have been stronger without the like kids in a twister part... Wording has been an issue for you but like i said try typing proper to help with a smoother read...Decent closer but once again wording kept it from being stronger then what it was... Nice concepts but your wording kept your set-ups and execution from being strong... Other then the filler and wording issues you had a nice verse... ILLoKWENT.......... Not too good of an opener... A lot of filler and your main punch was not set-up or executed strongly but the concept was ok... Nothing to complex here and i didn't really like the flow of your multies...These lines were pretty good.. Nice set-up and execution and the concept was ok but i would of liked to see more complexity in them but the flow to them was good..These lines were not well thought out.. Your wording wasn't good nor was the flow to them and concepts set-ups and execution was weak.. and also your multies were somewhat iffy.. These were basically filler to me...Very basic lines... Your set-up to the billy mays punch was weak which led to a weak punch plus there should have been more to it... It seems like your just trying to show off multies in these lines... Concept was ok but was not executed strongly...The way you structure your verse keeps you from showing more creativity... I liked that Fedor line... Nice set-up, good concept and also nice execution but your showing to much filler with your other lines... Try sticking to a concept for a bar rather then just a line..A lot of filler here and the canibus line was ok... Theres nothing i can really say about these lines cuz everything about them was basic.... Not weak just basic..Decent closer... It could have been worded better but it was still ok.. Multies were ok but could be better... Concepts were ok, your set-ups were decent along with execution but stay away from the filler bro...
-------------- And here are the verses...........
What’s OBSCURE’S WHAT IM SPITTIN? IS PURER THAN LIQUID. Im SURE THAT THIS SENENCE is a cigaRILLO LIT so yall tell ILLo to QUIT/ILLoKWENT coz Im da CURE FOR HIS SICKNESS!! I SCARE ILL WITH WRiTTENS one GLARE Hell wind up with UNBEARABLE VISIONS of me KILLING HIS SIBLINGS!! From BLAMMIN HAMMERS, ’stayin strapped’.. you’ll say I "BANNED/band CANCER" coz iLL GET DIMINISHED!! It's REAL AS ITS GETTIN!! TECS HEAT N hav ILL EXTINGUISHED/dead when MACS HAV em SIZZLIN like GAS IN A SKILLET his ASS'LL BE GRILLIN when I let SHOTS OUT I'll leave his 'head red' and hav niggaz bringin the 'BOX OUT' like DENNIS-N-PIPPEN!! Kw0n Spit DRAGON.. u CHIT CHATTIN step in my LAIR N GET BLISTERED I SWEAR IM DAT NICKER hav NINES SCOPIN FLESH and leave iLL 'stuck' with a 'WIDE OPEN CHEST' like TEARIN A ZIPPER!! POP ILL UP youll think I was JON VILMA coz my INTENTION'S TO INJURE!! Gunz CLAPPIN BOY.. so if it's *ACTION WITH TOYS* best bet I'm TWISTIN HIS 'FIGURE' like KIDS IN A TWISTER!! So dont make me mad coz if "I snap" Im takin 'LIDS off' ..no *WIGS IN A PICTURE*!! &&u NOT SICKENIN!! You wouldn’t bring ’truth to ya FALSE SPITTIN’ if you was FIXIN YA DENTURES!!.....nigga, ya need to OBSERVE AND LISTEN, when i SPURT THESE WRITTENS, to MERK YA SPIRIT, this HERB CANT LIFT FISTS, cause that 'lil pussy's close to featherweight' like GIRLS WIT PIDGEONS/my WORDS ARE SICK WHEN i start SPITTIN ON CUE, and RIPPIN THIS DUDE, til he's 'waste in blood' like what failed KIDNEYS CAN DO/get RID OF THIS FOOL, cause his WHACK RAPS DEALT NO BARS WIT CONCEPTS,plus noone in ya crew HAS THAT WEALTH OF SMARTS IN RHYMES WHEN ,dude couldnt 'show ARMED nice' wit BATMAN'S BELT OR SPARTAN BICEPS/i RAPE TEXT WIT SICK DISPLAYS , so bring ya GAY FRIENDS TO GIVE ME HATE, even tho none of kwons dick riders can 'carry this sham's product' like the REPLACEMENT OF BILLY MAYS/wow.. i PERFECTED MY ART to SERVE FELLAS WIT BARS,so if this NERD YELLS THAT HE'S HARD, ima 'rush-in wit the grips', like they WERE FEDOR IN SPARS/yessir, im BETTER AT GUARDS, blockin your PASSIVE PUNCH QUICK WITH MY WORDS, you LACK IN PUNS KID, I'VE OBSERVED, but if ya PRACTICE MUCH YA STILL CAN LEARN, SO i hope you 'taking some notes' like CANIBUS DID IN THE THIRD/ya RAMBLINGS SUCK BIG , MAYBE WORSE.. so you'll be the only STAR IN YAH CREW,cause noone wants to 'kick it wit kwon', unless its the MARTIAL ARTS MOVE....

Either way my full breakdowns will be done without the verses just so people hop off.. 90%?? lol

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Done and next!!

@Phenomonon could you drop a fair on this? thanks
http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=440418

@ShotsFired I aint read the verses but I'm not voting on the battle cuz i dont wanna hear snoopy complain about a hate vote if you had the better verse so I'm left with the option to vote for him or not vote at all so I'm not voting..

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Done & NEXT!!!

Aight man I understand lol no wonder this battle has no views on it

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=440490

@Phenomonon

Done!! and next!!! Lets get some more people to post there links...

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I vote for the better verse and i cant tell if thats a smart ass remark but if it is then it does not apply to me...

I vote for the better verse... Choose any battle where i just voted for the popular guy... Once again someone wants to hop on my band wagon with all these lame ass false assumptions... You can send 8 or 16 anytime bro but you aint gotta sit there and make bullshit up... You just wanna sit there and start shit for no fucking reason at all but I'll tell you what this is a fucking battle site so send beef or back the fuck off... Your just mad cuz AT shitted on you and of course i voted for him along with many others... How the fuck am i just voting for the popular guy anyways, either way every battle i vote on whoever i pick wins so shut the fuck up trying to start shit if your not gonna follow up properly with 8 or 16...
And another thing also if your gonna come at me on some bullshit then you should come at @Ill Phenom on some bullshit also cuz we're both voting it up unlike you and I've noticed that we been voting for the same people so i guess he only votes for the popular guy also... Fuck outta here Dave theres no arguing your wrong and just like my and ill phenoms votes, I'm right...

Done and next!!

imo Mind edged that shit but like i said whoever i vote for wins and look who won... And you say my votes based off of popularity get the fuck outta here, Frankie should smack the shit outta you for that lame ass comment... I left a fucking breakdown explaining why Mind won stupid... Like i said theres no argument I'm right your wrong... And stop watching what i do bro...

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=440358
DROP A FAIR ONE..It's Getting Slept On..

wtf is your problem... Ok for the 3rd time now I VOTE FOR THE BETTER VERSE, not the vet not the most popular stupid ass, i VOTE FOR THE BETTER VERSE and by your lame ass comments i know what type of voter you are.. The type of voter you are is exactly what your struggling to prove i am.. I dont give a fuck about these vets or anyone else on here bro.. I dont pay these vets no attention so i expect the same... I think your just mad about the vote that wasn't for you in your battle with AT or in your own words, AfterThought(The Jock) vs Dave(The Nerd)... Your pitiful bro, My votes are fair and your just looking for someone to fuck with but your not really doing a good job at it but we can keep this shit going cuz you'll never prove I'm the type of voter you are... And you said "out of like 10 battles" well let me see some more proof so i can show you that YOUR WRONG I'M RIGHT STILL...

if u got a minute hit up me vs PheoNix

appreciateddd

And I'm done!!

@~SHINIGAMI~ I'll get to it later..

Done and next!!!

Sometimes people are the more popular because they know how to write or rap. So people are going to vote for them based off what they write which earned them that rep.
Making the whole name thing nothing more than a coincidence.

They are popular for a reason.

It works both ways you know. Just saying.

Either prove it or leave him be. Get links. But they have to be obvious. Not battles that could come down solely to personal preference n post them up in a thread.

If you can't be arsed. Leave him be.

he's doing good for the site & ur insulting him? smh

But you're distracting and derailing the thread. This is for people to post there battles for feedback and votes and you're delaying that because he keeps wasting his time replying to your posts. You're turning what is an honest gesture into a fucking chore for him.

Like I said. Take it to another thread. Or drop it.

where are u going with the deleting accounts sentence? i didn't delete ur account

And you said your piece. But kept posting.

Shits done with.

Sorry @Ill Phenom. I don't know why. But yeah, sorry bud.

I VOTE FOR THE BETTER VERSE and show me some battles that i voted on that should have gone the other way... And aint no one dick riding AT motherfucker, i said IN YOUR OWN WORDS since you think I'm voting off of popularity... Anyways i dont mind the feedback unless it does NOT APPLY TO ME AT ALL... And i honestly dont give a fuck about you or your deleted account or your smart ass comments cuz the fact that you said i vote off of popularity is not feedback at all thats an insult and now I'm completely through speaking to you about nothing cuz you still haven't left the fact alone that I VOTE FOR THE BETTER VERSE and my vote is based off of consistency most of the time... You have to be consistent with good concepts, good metaphors, complexity, good set-ups, strong execution, good wording, good structure and good multies to get a vote from me UNLESS YOUR OPPONENT'S VERSE WAS BETTER... That is all... Feed me links people...

Done & done!!!!

@Just €

Sorry for what?

Shoot them links through...

Done & done.. Next!!!

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Well I'm not done with one of those cuz its a tough decision but I'll try to choose a winner later...