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ViTRiOL 03-26-2012 01:49 PM

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Originally Posted by Just C (Post 771877)
'BOMBS, HE's BRINGING THEM'?,
naaaaaah,
the only reason 'GOD's LIKELY STRAPPED'....
PUT BASICLY?..
cuz even the most 'STAUNCHEST CHRISTIANs'
WOULDN'T 'PAY TO SEE'
the 'ALLMIGHTY RAP'....

The pink and red multi sets are broken.

Student 03-26-2012 02:08 PM

But Forreal When Your Spitting On The Mic Does It Matter If They're Broken? Do You Review Your Favorite Rappers Like That? Oh NaS Isn't Dope Cause That 16 He Spit Had Two Broken Multi's Lmfao Hell Nah.

Revan 03-26-2012 02:34 PM

Americans say Christains as two syllables: Chris-tans whereas English people pronounce it as 3 syllies: Chris-ti-ans.

So your both right. Except that we invented English so Corb wins by default.

:D

1/

AfterThought 03-26-2012 04:15 PM

them lines are playyed, they been the LOUSIEST LINES since two THOUSAND & NINE!! hit? ya "Build-Ups Wouldn (wooden)" & even if there's a little OUCH IN YA RHYMES, they "Constructed In The Middle Of Nowhere" like gettin a HOUSE IN THE WILD!!!/

ViTRiOL 03-26-2012 04:51 PM

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Originally Posted by AfterThought (Post 771970)
them lines are playyed, they been the LOUSIEST LINES since two THOUSAND & NINE!! hit? ya "Build-Ups Wouldn (wooden)" & even if there's a little OUCH IN YA RHYMES, they "Constructed In The Middle Of Nowhere" like gettin a HOUSE IN THE WILD!!!/

Sick concept, well-executed. Peeps might have a little poke at the roughness of the wooden/wouldn't wordplay, but it still works both ways grammatically. Dope stuff man.

oh wait..this is the LEGENDARY KRHYME KILLZ THREAD...WHY THE FUCK AM I POSTING??

Just C 03-26-2012 05:27 PM

'PUNCHES'... in aBUNDENCE? ..well.. 'with the RAPS'.. 'SHE TAPs'... it's apparent 'she's
NOT EQUIPPED'... as I see 'her ASS AS SAGGED' as 'maDONNA JIG's'

Just C 03-26-2012 09:23 PM

That bad huh? :(

ViTRiOL 03-26-2012 09:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ViTRiOL (Post 771981)
oh wait..this is the LEGENDARY KRHYME KILLZ THREAD...WHY THE FUCK AM I POSTING??

Haha, I just noticed that. I thought someone hacked my account.

Phoenix 03-27-2012 08:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ViTRiOL (Post 771867)
Was English your first language?

...Calm down on me I'm still learning english in school smh And No arabic My first language...And second these are english words just look up on the dictionary I read it everyday.

ViTRiOL 03-27-2012 08:58 AM

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Originally Posted by PheoNix (Post 772253)
...Calm down on me I'm still learning english in school smh And No arabic My first language...And second these are english words just look up on the dictionary I read it everyday.

Dude, I wasn't taking the piss out of you, I was just curious. I could tell that you aren't a natural english speaker... You're doing very well so far, you just got a few definitions wrong.

They ARE English words, yes, but they don't make sense in the context of the sentences that you are constructing...

Phoenix 03-27-2012 09:02 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ViTRiOL (Post 772254)
Dude, I wasn't taking the piss out of you, I was just curious. I could tell that you aren't a natural english speaker... You're doing very well so far, you just got a few definitions wrong.

They ARE English words, yes, but they don't make sense in the context of the sentences that you are constructing...

Lol I wasn't mad or something...and I'll re-write these lines.

Phoenix 03-28-2012 09:04 AM

I know I use This Thread Alot But I'm Working On This Shit..Thanks For This Thread Here An Another Verse I've Worked On Being Clear.

@Itz Killz

This Faggot Ain't Winning With That "Faliure Style"It's Like A SPECIOUS SWAGGER And His "Irrelevant Statements" Is Foolish That Why We Call Him A THESIS RAPPER And This Bastard Wouldn't Be A "Heavy Hitter"If He Was A GRIEVOUS BATTER!Steelo Would Only "Pull A Nine" When He FORCING MAGS And The Only Time This Dude "Reach The Fame" When He Is SURFING ADS And This Faggot Winning This Battle ? He Should Stick To NURSING NAGS cuz I'm "Too Freshen" For Him And He Wouldn't "Deliver Punches" If He SERVING JABS!I'll Leave You "Out Of Trial"Like FABRIC RAIL and "Confinned Up"The Only Time This Fag Celebrating In St.PATRICK DAY!

This a 8 liner I've sent to steelo right now.

Just C 03-29-2012 07:14 PM

Since I'm bored n can't post battles on my Pod.

Just posting this bar I just thought up n jotted.

Go head 'shoot from the mouth' n talk 'WILD, I'LL PULL IT' , 'revolve the chamber'
then 'unload the pain ta' make ya 'bite ya lip' when ya 'BITE THE BULLET!'

@Itz Killz

Krhyme Killz 03-29-2012 08:24 PM

dope concept...but i hate when a word is used twice in line lol...just a pet peeve.

decent imagery though

Revan 03-30-2012 03:02 AM

This fag's boyfriend has aids & u DEEP IN THE VERMIN THO? Shit its like his "Plane Was Cancelled" the way he SLEEPS IN THE 'TERMINAL'!!!

Krhyme Killz 03-30-2012 08:40 AM

gross yo...lol.

a lil forced...i could go into the details, but i'm hetero soo....nah

Just C 03-30-2012 10:02 AM

This 'guy a lier' tryna act like his CLIPS AL DUMP when his PISTOL PUMPS cuz every threat to dead a guy is 'FICTIONAL'/ so COME ON K QUIT/ u never been PICTURED ONCE GRIPPING TO FIRE, just heard u SNITCH 'THROUGH THE WIRE' on SOME 'KANYE SHIT' that's how he knows your 'SCRIPTING BUNK'

Ruthless_One 03-30-2012 02:39 PM

"your flow is softer than a FATTY LADY'S ASSCHEEKS,yet you ACTIN CRAZY while ya RAP WEAK,well i'm 'spawnin from satan' and you act 'hard while you playin' like MASTERBATING WHILE LAUGHING!"
have at it,be honest w/ me

---------- Post added at 01:36 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:34 PM ----------

I got a few....
"yo you 'BE TAKEN APART', though you claim you a *BLAZE BLOWER*,but you're 'WEAK FAKE,DON'T START' PLUS YOU COULDNT '"CRE-ATE A SPARK"' weildin a *FLAMETHROWER!*"

---------- Post added at 01:39 PM ---------- Previous post was at 01:36 PM ----------

you never 'packed a challenge' or 'had talent'so listen and *FOLLOW BITCH I'LL BASH YA*,and i dont need to be 'pushin this far' cause you 'wouldn't be hard' if you *SWALLOWED TEN VIAGRA!!*


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