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Lizman

10-10-2010 04:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Moltisani (Post 514545)

Yeah, but we need to import some voters from elsewhere because everyone here is a faggot. And also, could you write my verse for me? Im a little busy.

I Could Do That
But There Is A Rather High Possibility That I Would Win

1DollarShort

10-10-2010 05:07 PM

I like the fact the TV's are old school.

John Dos

10-10-2010 05:21 PM

not bad. tough topic to write about. i was diggin it.

but, fuck you.

Jack-0-Lantern

10-10-2010 05:27 PM

I felt some of the wording towards the ending, and late middle of the verse really destroyed the mood you set earlier in the piece. Which I personally found to be something big. It made me really lose interest in the story as a whole. Maybe some less light hearted wording towards the late middle, or something.

Lizman

10-10-2010 05:55 PM

Well I Suppose I'll Get To Work Then

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