Might fuck around and post every single one of Bnas’ battles in here to breakdown

Gonna post some throwaways. Teach these kids a lesson or two.

For instance:


One punch ya lumped up. We'd struggle to get ya COFFIN TO CLOSE
Leave ya whole head like my freestyles. That shit just bumps OFF OF THE DOME!

Take notes yunguns

Here's my throwaway bar that I may or may not use in a battle.

You got no punches, don't step up to the line, just "hit the muay thai pads" YOU GAY PRINGLE!
When it comes to battling? "You throw nothing in the ring" like planning TO STAY SINGLE!

https://www.letsbeef.com/battle_deta...n=tb&id=406645

PROBLEM CLOCKA, I'm the PROBLEM DOCTA// Dog you wouldn't go hard if you were alive after I SHOT YA// Ya pitch is 'pure wack', off centered and OLD FASHIONED// The kid is 'keystylin' and Ima still give your head a BASHING// If you wanna fuck with the kid then STEP UP// Off the top flowin crazy ya no I'M NUTS// You's better 'step the fuck back' before the kid turns 'subway' and gives you a CLEAN CUT// And I aint talkin about no ARMY SHIT// Dog your just a BARBIE BITCH// Your flow's off and your bars deliver that kinda SNOBBY PITCH..Yah ya no the team, SaVage Scriptz all day, Bnas, LETS GET IT

PROBLEM CLOCKA, I'm the PROBLEM DOCTA// Dog you wouldn't go hard if you were alive after I SHOT YA//

Analytics:

- 3 syllable scheme (basic)
- Repetitive usage of the word "PROBLEM"
- Poor conceptually - to say someone wouldn't go hard if they survived you shooting them seems backwards

Bar Grade: C-

Ya pitch is 'pure wack', off centered and OLD FASHIONED// The kid is 'keystylin' and Ima still give your head a BASHING//

Analytics:

- 3 syllable scheme + broken/choppy execution
- Schemes have poor wording (faSHION and baSHING end differently in sound and rhythmic value)
- No punch or concept of a punch present
- Bar is criminally short, and not developed at all

Bar Grade: D

If you wanna fuck with the kid then STEP UP// Off the top flowin crazy ya no I'M NUTS// You's better 'step the fuck back' before the kid turns 'subway' and gives you a CLEAN CUT//

Analytics:

- 3 syllable scheme (basic)
- extremely played concept by relating "crazy" and "nuts"
- Broken scheme (STEP up, IM nuts, CLEAN cut have different sounds and rhythmic value)
- Concept is pretty decent considering the time this was posted (subway/clean cut)

Bar Rating: C

The last bar I didn't feel like doing, but yeah...breaking Bnas shit down could run us up to 2K easy.

I TOLD YOU if ya get this ROYAL ENRAGED, TURDS will SOIL YOUR FACE, FOR Im taking a dump, stuck in the THRONE ROOM with no TOiLET PAPER!

Very relevant in the times of corona.

Real talk tho those those during-the-shit bars

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The TP struggle so real, Nick. @Musashi

Here he is again. It's the lord of the ring. I came back two tower over you. It's the return of the king!

I read this and thought more so that Easton has no idea what he's talking about than Bnas. Dude's reading rhymes line CLEAN CUT / STEP UP and saying "3 syllable scheme is basic". Wtf?

Lmao I was waiting on someone to catch it :D