Ok from the start I don't like this beat anymore. Pianos all over. You know you got bars . It holds up as far as the song, but i'd like to hear you on something that isn't so up tempo. Those bars with inner rhymes are my favorites and those just sound better on a slower joint. You switched schemes quite a few times my favorite was the very last part of you verse. You need to record more stuff its a shame this all u got out

Appreciate this Phil. Was never a fan of song making tbh but got the itch to put something together to have to look back on one day.

Thanks.

peep ma tracks bruh

It's different. That's for sure. Track could benefit from vocals being raised/mixed nicer and/or the beat being lowered. Certain parts of vocals jump. Hook is an odd one lol though altogether i kinda like this track, it's different and if engineered and mixed better could be a pretty cool track.

Didn't even know you made tracks. :high:

Did this lil while ago

Working on some new shit currently

This like Bizzy's song you guys could probably give me tips not much I can nitpick about shit I like. This is fucking dope you not doing more music is a damn shame bruh an i've said that for years.

Seeing people with talent no fucking idea what to do with it is a killer. People haven't become soundcloud rappers in like a decade. Go get your name out there on social media and YouTube and stop wasting what you have. Hell we've already seen an LB did do it.

@Phil Banks I appreciate that fam. Me and @BizzyOne working on a song now. You right though you been saying that for a minute. And I really do need to drop like 100 songs and go crazy one time for the one time.
@EtH you always been the homie cus you keep it real MOST the time lol but you right. Just had to find the love for this shit again. But ima give it a shot. Atleast for the love of it not fame etc

This is spot on

if your tryna make a name as a rapper you need to do music videos on youtube really.

The best format i think is like lady leshurr's queen speech series. 2-3 min bar cypher, simple music vids.