I agree, without the "flavoring" or "swagger" anybody could've written that verse, it just comes across as monotonous at a certain point.


Side Note Tangent: I also don't agree with completely DRE$$ING UP YOUR VERSE!!~// as well, I think that distracts from the text itself but the best approach is somewhere in the middle, CAPPING THE MULTI's is pretty standard though

Op all the other stuff builds the punch like others have said, rap battle is a lyrical, verbal boxing match so there need b punches. Some just rhyme multis n kinda diss (newer guys or bnas) but they don't got dey build up hittas nah mean.

Student cappin da multies is all ppl need imo too. Bold is ok but all.. Oh yea and putting " " those on words that relate to the punch can b good 2.

I agree to an extent. A RULE-esque style of writing has been popular for a minute now here, fitting in as many punches as possible with only one line to set it up. The style is cool but I wish there was room for more conceptual punches that take a couple of lines to set it up.

The Scheme Tournament's got some HEATERS showcasing this right now including you vs. @Wonderbred

Sup w it @Jayse

You basic grade school avy, no clue how to vote fuck boii.

Talk all that shit but you don't want that smoke though. :high:

look at ur record loser, ur no threat ur just a shit rapper

Lets battle then. Quit running, talking that hoe ass shit.

Most of my record is from the early 2000's where I barely gave a fuck & some of them battle's are against the top names on LB.

Either accept a battle or stay on the bench lil homie.

Bro if I send u won't even reply ur known as a duck.. :grass:

U ain't got skill

Are you scared to battle?

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Ducking is EXACTLY what you're doing right now.[COLOR="Silver"]

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@Jayse

You keep poppin up on my profile, what you need to do is run to the store & pick me up some wraps lil homie.

Well personally (this is just according to my preferred style of rap) I think the punchline should be the centrepiece. It’s the dough, and the multi’s,rhymes,wordplay,vocabulary and metaphors are the cheese sauce and toppings. If you have just the dough (punchlines) it’s boring, but the more and more you add on to it the more and more it gets better. But you can’t have the toppings without the dough, because then it wouldn’t be a pizza (You can have rhymes multis etc, but without punchlines you ain’t got a battle rap). I prefer straight up hard hitting punchlines then creative punchlines that don’t hit hard. Punchlines should make you think “Holy shit this guy is getting flamed”, not “wow that’s quite creative, nice”. I prefer a diss talking about a guy shooting up a rival crew (Hit em up) over a guy making fun of someone for nothing (Killshot). The first proves your a total badass motherfucker that’s not to be messed with, and the latter proves you can make old disses better by changing words around. The punchlines should always hit hard and should always make the opponent feel like shit. If your opponent laughs and thinks it’s cool, instead of how they are being verbally fucked, you are doing something wrong.

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I definitely have an unpopular opinion though. I know there are more people who prefer creative stuff over the gangsta shit.