No problem. The fact that it is an audio bar makes a big difference though. Flow is more valuable to an audio, so its not really a fair comparison. But i hope the feed helps anyway.

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Thanks for the feed bro

We thought he’d turn down this callout, run aWAY N RETIRE ‘Now He Gon Get This Work, Thank God’ as if he PRAYED TA GET HIRED!

Decent set-up, flows nice, decent jab.

6 defenses with no ‘Burn Out’; think youre TAKIN IT HIGHER?

Wording on the set-up seems strange to me. Maybe i dont get the slang. 6 defenses with no burn out? you mean like 6 defense with no clear victory? The wording is too unnatural and hurts the bar imo. More than the fire reference helps.

watch ya old-puns-fa-Row ‘Go Up In Smoke’ coz now youre ‘PLAYING WIT FIRE’!

Bit of a soft punch. playing with fire as a punch is pretty basic. Feel like the first line was the hardest of the bar which is should never be really.

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Frosty you sumamabitch lol.

nigga i got sticks for arms but ya get hit wit da CROSS RIGHT INNIT FAST cuz once i lay yo out in da snow ... ya getting 8 inches of da FRAWST BITE IN YA ASS /

Cant lie this is funny as fuck lol

burnout is a state of exhaustion: physical, emotional, (in this case, writing).

but yea you pretty much agreed with my assessment, thanks yo. this is dope

thanks dawg

you think you wanna tangle with guts, THEN TEST MINE ya get 'coiled and stuffed' like an INTESTINE ya 'lines is rather shallow' so i'm not afraid of A 'PENDICKS' VERSE and the only time he 'ruptured with a sac' is if his APPENDIX BURST

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also gonna cheat and post a few more. sorry for cheating.

your 'text is ancient' like Mesopotamian CUNIFORMS WROTE so i'm Gilgamesh and YOU KNEE FOR A G.O.A.T his SWAG IS GONE, the FAGGOT SCUM, if he 'carried weight with words like a stone' it was relics ya SALVAGE FROM BABYLON and you gonna 'conquer my legion?' but ya FAILED n PLAN WAS SLOPPY cause the only time he 'grasped at victory' was reading TALES of HAMMURABI


if he a 'warrior type, he snaked himself in' like KEVIN DURANT and the only time he 'present bars of greatness' is biting from REVAN OR RANT


these 'kids sit with lids dim' ya whole crew is a POSSE OF ERROR couple peas of a pod that 'stick a round' sayin yo DROP ME A FAIR but known to 'rattle from the tension' like they COPY A SNARE so if they 'snap when i'm roasting' they PROBABLY AWARE when the 'mug gets the black bruise(brews), my flow is hot n fresh' like COFFEE PREPARED(edited)

gutz like "If I posted a 64 line battle, but put a space every time two bars have passed, that counts right?"

6 i was trying to think of a wittier response but you beat me to it lol

lmao. but i get to cheat. just because.

gutz would have done well in Murda Muzik.