@Victor Mancini, u couldn't pay me enough to battle you

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Bumpin this thread

tbh man I'd say be more versatile...I know you went in there with your writtens and delivery planned, which may have been good for letsbeef, but in a live battle you have to win the crowd over...having some funny jokes about their physical appearance makes a big difference. It doesnt even have to be funny but if you freestyle a couple dope lines to loosen up the crowd on how your opponent looks it'll get the them on your side....and that makes a big difference

these days we talk about writtens and preparation win battles but the thing that wins is entertainment...its like watchin a movie, you have to make the people feel something when u spit..whether its funny, scared, or dramatic, they have to feel something...otherwise you wasting your time

just my 2 cents

I hear you @Leroy Brown

I shouldn't have to pay anyone at the level you're at to battle.

Lol @Victor Mancini

wack crowd ruined alot of it tbh.

gotta work on freshening up those bars tho mate. in live battling you need to have big moments, and as you stand you just maintaining a standard throughout.

rulers 2p. keep grinding mate.

F2Deezy

Really did think i had som shit tho but it is what it is nah mean @RULE, ima keep pumpin tho

Watching Now...

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Small ass crowd yo. Off topic: how many loccs that door have tho?...

Anyways...
yeah, small crowd was a lil unappealing..Both had bars.
DGW I think your delivery was off just a lil bit, and should of emphasized a little more.
Also, some bars was clever..and some was just on the weaker side.
Other dude had some bars too, was a lil fresher with delivery, I liked his in some spots and
didn't like it in others. I would say out of the 3 rounds you got round 3 and he got rounds 1 and 2.

Good looks @UhMAZING

my net mad slow,.... lands rover an other mars was a sucker are cool..ya the name flips were cool...scat lvers was weird but cool... you need to cut the word like out of your lines as much as possible it makes them have a reptitive feel. Your first had some nice bars... I think you just need to switch it up an throw some swag in there an you A+....Speed up the flow in some spots slow it down.... use your voice to draw us in..... He does that a bit better honestly....

Dude aint rly had the bars... but his delivery an just his presence rly killed yours on video... I think you got him bar wise... but he make the wack bars sound interesting... you doin the opposite..... I think you got the basics down now u just gotta build up your presence.... maybe take yourself a lil less serious an start clownin.... most of it jus felt super rehearsed a lil lifeless

But thats me bein super critical figured thats what you would want