Logikk: You painted a nice picture for me.. You stayed on topic and provide a great read. Vocab was on point.. After reading it, I just knew that your opp had his hands full. I just wish you wouldve stepped up the lyrical aspect of it, and pulled away from making it so poem-ish.. just my opinion tho.

Phroxen: You provided a dope read. I was impressed at the lyrical content.. and how you did not let that distract you from the storyline and topic. Very Nice. The flow factor of it was cool as well. Real dope read..

Both was nice in this one.. After the topic has been nailed.. (to me) it boils down to lyrical content.. and for that

Phroxen gets my vote.

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I know this is a rap site, but when it comes to topicals, I tend to prefer a more proper language being used instead of urban lingo, so I really wanted to lean Logikk's way because of that. He had some excellent poetic technique going, nice flow and scheme, but the problem was that he just didnt have enough story development. It was a sort of vague, grandiose explanation of a shark being killed with the whole hunter being hunted concept. I dug it, don't get me wrong, but Phroxen came with a better story. It still wasn't a fully developed story either, but better. And while Phroxen came with some more hip hop phrasing and use of words, as well as some almost battle type metaphors, his flow and rhyming were pretty excellent, and he had some more straight-forward explanations of what was going on. Phroxen also topped it off with a good closer. It wasn't exactly a plot twist, but a solid way to wrap things up, and make us feel what the character had gone through. I think Logikk has mad potential, once he gets a better fell of how shit is generally rated on this site. I can see Phroxen beasting too once he gets a few more topicals out there. Great reads fellas

VOTE: Phroxen

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