Originally Posted by Pronto_Banks (Post 795611)

Originally Posted by Gurp Da God (Post 795689)

Beat on some dub step techno ish tip. not your beat though, is this a friends beat? beat off youtube? FROM NOW ON SPECIFY WHERE YOU GOT THE BEAT FROM but yea, shit was hype. got a lil repetitive after awhile though

PERFORMANCE not your best imo but still cool across the board. i like ur laid back swagger on track, but it didn't really work on this track at points, since the track is so hype. you went in on the second verse though. but nah you had swagger throughout, never really sounded like u were reading. good performance

Hook Od' on em. pretty cool, nothing crazy, solid hook though.

PRODUCTION This is where shit got fucked up. the production of the beat is top of the line, but the beat is turned down so you can hear your amateur vocal mix. which results in a heavy hype rap track that cant get slapped outta the speakers. its the juxtaposition of the amateur vocals on the professional beat that makes this song fall short as a whole. it just doesnt work, it feels like 2 layers rather than one song full of integrating sounds. This is where a lot of rappers fuck up imo as well. they just want some shit to rap on, but the shit doesnt sit inside the beat, your vocal was outside the beat the whole time. The effects on your vocal was cool, at some points a lil excessive, might have been cooler if used sparingly, but a cool change up.

LYRIC very solid, cool flow switches. lyric was original and well written to the beat and effects. also didn't get too lyrical to where shit went over my head on first listen, which is good for a banger style track like this. nothing i remembered as quotable though

OVERALL scores 6.5 outta 10. not gunna lie the production just fucked this whole thing up to me. you can't bang this track, and its ment to be a banger. its saving graces being your swaggy writing and performance. solid track, but fell short of its intention and with a few tweaks could have been something great

Originally Posted by AfterThought (Post 795726)

Originally Posted by Gurp Da God (Post 795860)

no hate, im not saying im infalible. but this is my play house, and you asked for my opinion

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btw my president is not good amateur music. there is no bell curve. im rating according to music i like to listen to

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BEAT not ur beat, dope beat though sounds kinda premier'ish. only problem with using a beat like this is it give u a huge crutch, since you could just chill and let this shit breath whenever and the song will be cool

PERFORMANCE you sang the hook, you put your personality into your verse. no complaints i enjoyed your performance

PRODUCTION sounds like theres no production advice i can give to really help you out, you just have shitty equipment. it makes your vocals tinny. shit sounds like its being played out of a clock radio. but for some reason, i didn't mind it all that much on this song. also that dude talkin in the beginning makes your vocal sound 1000x worse when you start singing in comparison lol. but like i said, i actually don't mind it so much for this particular song.

HOOK your best part of this whole song. you sang it cool n all but the melody and lyric you wrote (im assuming you wrote it)... thats an awesome hook. if you gave that to some sexy ass female vocalist and had her sing that shit. oooo. you should hold on to that hook no lie.

LYRIC 1 verse!!??? come on man... thats a sin for a song with this much potential. but also, your singing this hook about howve you've sinned over and over again to be on top, your praying to the lord to forgive you. its a powerful hook. then you come in on the verse with brag rap. it cheapens the song man if you came in on that verse and spilt ur guts and sins that would be an awesome song. i could see jay z absolutely murdering this song if this were his beat, and he had some soul singer hit that hook.... you should sell it to jay

OVERALL honestly so much potential in this song. i loved that you sang the hook, that shit was refreshing. this song was original in this letsbeef community, and probably my favorite song iv heard so far. but i have to give you a 7. you only put in 1 verse and that 1 verse didn't contribute to the power of the song.

Originally Posted by ŢŔĘ=ĎŐРΣ (Post 795888)

I didnt really ask for your opinion, a guy thats on my nuts did.. but its all good.. that tracks production was really choppy and nowhere near my best as far as that.. and I know me knocking you outta that tourney didnt have ANYTHING to sway ur opinion of me LOL

Originally Posted by Gurp Da God (Post 795897)

but in all honesty thats a major faggot move on freezy's part. some real type A highschool girl shit. if you wan't me to take down the review i will, since it's true you didn't ask for my opinion

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went ahead and deleted the review

Originally Posted by Just € (Post 795899)

did I miss something? I'm confused.