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Tag Team Championship #10
Length: 16 Lines

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Lockhart
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Welcome to the 1st Round of the 10th Tag Team Championship! The matchup for this battle will be: Sean Griffey/Punk vs. GoD_THE_Reptilian/The Wrathchild. Both teams will have until the 12th of July to submit their 16s for this round. Good luck, gentlemen!

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Posted on: 2019-07-08 17:28:14 Private Message Lockhart


Lockhart
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Please ensure that you post by the 12th of July at 11:59PM EST.

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Posted on: 2019-07-08 17:33:30 Private Message Lockhart


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Sean and Saiyan are given a 3 hour extension due to the mishap from the submission of the other team.

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-07-12 16:30:15 Private Message Lockhart


X
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GTR verse was updated it was missing one of their team

Posted on: 2019-07-12 19:48:52 Private Message X


Kiwi Peewee
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Saiyunk, your biggest thing to work on (for both of you) is to try land some more advanced punches. You both went for a real flurry of jabs, most of which were executed quite well, but you lacked any real haymakers; if you go forward in the tourney, you'll need to have some standout blows to win matches. I thought your two best bars were the "man kind" bar and the "sonic" bar.

Wrathchilian, I think your biggest probem was the clean-ness (or lack thereof) in your setups. You had lots of really great punches conceptually, but many of them really lost their sting the way they were executed. For instance, GTR's huge Greek mythology punch had more wordplay than just about any punch I've ever seen, yet a lot of it didn't work both ways. "Give him halos for the Hades weak" doesn't make much sense, likewise for Wrath "the only way these elitists are Abel dudes" doesn't make sense. Your best lines were the first line of the metallurgy bar, and the google earth punch. Many of your ideas and concepts were strong, but you need to work on execution to go any further if you win this battle.

Overall feedback: Tbh this didn't feel like a tag team battle. GTR & Nicklesh each just had 8 lines that could be a standalone verse; Punk & Sean mentioned each other and seemed a bit more conversational but it was still quite superfluous and unrelated. I would have liked to have seen more interaction between the tag partners, maybe working off of each other's lines or trading back and forth or something like that. Also, a few more bars that seemed a bit more relevant to your opponents specifically wouldn't have gone amiss.

Good battle, although I thought the result was reasonably clear and both teams have a lot to work on.

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Posted on: 2019-07-14 02:28:24 Private Message Kiwi Peewee


Lockhart
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Honestly feel this could've been an upset if GTR/Wrath could've incorporated their wordplay to read smoother. They had a lot of creative bars and I fucked with metallurgy line. But a lot of the verse had what I felt was disjointed wording (lifting this Griffin in the Aries, meek doesn't work in terms of the wording on it. It still has to work as a sentence.) Not to mention it took quite awhile during the Greek Mythology scheme to get from one rhyme to the next. You both have potential, just continue to work on it individually. 

Sean/Punk it honestly felt like you loafed around a bit in this battle. Nothing really stood out to me as impressive from either of you, but it stayed around an "ok" level the whole way. To me, the opener doesn't really make sense. How does "shots to Wrath'll put him away" like anti-depressants make sense? Idk that was just weird. Mankind bar was alright but it's been done to death, so I had to take that in to consideration. Going with 2 syllable multis is a weird look for the both of you cause you're both capable of so much more as writers, imo. Holy Trinity line was pretty good, but lines like that have sorta been done before, as well.

Overall, I feel if Wrath/GTR had put it all together, they could've pulled the upset. Alas, they did not. Fair is in.

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Posted on: 2019-07-14 10:50:02 Private Message Lockhart


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Also, CakedOut's vote deleted. You can't just accuse a dude of biting lines and then expect to just vote against him on his battle without it looking like a hate vote. 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-07-14 10:52:40 Private Message Lockhart


Lockhart
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You can't see the votes @Wrathchild

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-07-15 09:11:21 Private Message Lockhart



 

 
 

Expos -

griffin is a mythical creature with the head and wings of an eagle and the body of a lion, 

everybody knows uncle fester and the addams family i hope,

addams here also representts adam as in adam and eve

who named their sona cain and abel,

the latter being the first human to die as per the book of genesis in the bible

flames is a kids game -

https://www.wikihow.com/Play-%22Flame%22

anything else just ask.

Posted on: 2019-07-13 03:10:59 Private Message The Saaxxx Baba


For me this comes down to the more structured, polished verse. I liked Rep's opener my only criticism is the presidin/poseidon wordplay doesn't work for me. Punk and Sean had a few nice lines too. Some of the multies in both verses were a bit basic but good start to the tourny. 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-07-13 07:24:52 Private Message Svengali


WORDPLAY: 'HALO' (Greek God)'Hades' (Greek God of the underworld'APOLLO' (Greek god of the Sun) (Apollo space shuttle)'URANUS' (Greek God of the sky)'ATLAS/Map' (Greek God, bearer of the heavens)'Poseidon' (Greek God of the sea)'Griffin' (Greek)-a fabled monster, usually having the head and wings of an eagle and the body of a lion.'Odyssey'/Odd to see' (The Odyssey is one of two major ancient Greek epic poems attributed to Homer).

Expo:

'Metallurgy Engineering' the technique or science of working or heating metals so as to give them certain desired shapes and properties.

Posted on: 2019-07-13 07:40:41 Private Message OG TookMySoul


EoA

Posted on: 2019-07-13 13:24:06 Private Message B a r z o o k a


Griffin  n punk had a pretty nice verse. Mankind bar has been done pretty similarly a bunch so that was meh. But other than that fairly solid. Rep and wraith, felt like a lot of the wordplay was pretty shaky and took more away from the verse than it added to it. Cadence is off in places (cats get clapped silly/Adam's familly). And just overall was not as smooth a verse as the others. 

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-07-13 14:35:14 Private Message Will Sniff


Clear winner here in my opinion

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-07-13 14:46:40 Private Message OSKAR


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One team started off with great wp and concepts but tbh it was a bit too wordy at points. Wordplay not grammatically working both ways but fuck that. Thought it was Dope regardless. maybe tighten up the flow. Second half a bit too simple however but there were flashes of a couple good concepts. 

Other team had some great punches ranging from great to simple as well. Cleaner execution overall tho. read this multiple times but the winners got this from cleaner execution. otherwise I proably would've went the other way. Good battle guys

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-07-13 17:25:35 Private Message GOOD GRIEF


is it that i cnt see them votes or has nobody voted on this battle yet :O

Posted on: 2019-07-15 03:39:10 Private Message The Saaxxx Baba


Rai
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Pretty clear decision for me here. First half of my winners verse was on point and slowly faded off. Liked the personals used though. 

Botb was...

points at Rept* When I say these bullets would snatch this STAN'S LIFE IN SECONDS, I mean body "shots to Wrath that'll put him away" like "ANTI-DEPRESSANTS!!" the difference in skill between us? a LANDSLIDE IN ESSENCE so fuck what ya'll talkin-about, or get "Socked In The Mouth" I'm doin my best "MAN-KIND IMPRESSION!!!"

Fairs in

Voted: Yes (Hidden)
Posted on: 2019-07-15 12:36:05 Private Message Rai

 

 

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