Concept: Nickelodeon Bars

almost thot the concept was me lol imma vote shortly here!

I think imma need expos before i can vote :O

Good Battle. I just feel my winner here was much more fresher with the concept with smoother delivery and clever worplay and punches and really stuck to the scheme here. Loser was nice just got edged by his opponent. Was a close call but gotta pick a winner so my fair is in 

First bar is basically saying Row annonymously revised everybodies bars in his clan. Ninja Turtles were anonymous heros against Shredder's clan.

Doug is an old Nickelodeon show. He wares green and brown clothing.

Patrick is from Spongebob. He is a star fish bbn of sorts, lives under a rock .

Amanda Bynes had nudes leak a couple years back. Canon as in military artillery,  and canon as in camera.

Dora the explorer has run ins with a fox called swiper. Swiping is slang for stealing. Explorer as in Dora, explorer as in The Ford SUV.

G'luck, KG.

Expo:

Avatar The last Airbender - Combustion Ray is a move that Firebenders do

Rugrats 

Spongebob - Patrick is a starfish, 5 points 

TMNT - In the latest version, Splinter is killed due to Shredder double crossing him 

Spongebob - Plankton's wife is a computer, virus 

The loud house - 1 brother who has 10 sisters 

Spongebob - Footlong can be bought from Krusty Krab 

Good luck, Rai. Nice verse, except Row the bastid rarely gave me feedback lmao

I was in the crew, I remember you getting mad advice from him and me. 

Not saying you're wrong, just saying the guy's a prick lol

Was a dope battle for sure but 1 slightly takes this 1 due to O felt his punches were more affective 

No H8, FV in

Aight, this is a nice battle y’all got going here.

Vote: My vote is for Lil Kilo. This isn’t to say that Rai didn’t bring a bad verse, because both of these battlers brought fucking INSANE verses to this match.

Multis: I think Rai gets the win in this category. While Lil Kilo never had a broken multi, I think that Rai had the more complex multi’s. None of his multi’s were under 3 words, and most, if, not all, are great multi’s. Lil Kilo didn’t falter in this category either, but I feel like some of his multi’s weren’t as complex as Rai’s.

Concept: I think It’s a tie in this category. Not much to say other than both participants had almost all of their bars match up with their verse...

Punchlines: Lil Kilo hands down. Rai also brought his, A- game in this category, and had a lot of creativity and complexity in his bars... but that’s also what cost him the battle. I felt like some of his lines were focused to much on being creative and complex, instead of trying to destroy the opponent with words. In contrast, I think Lil Kilo, while a bit Moreno basic in some lines, kept the punches hitting hard, and at a constant flow.

Final: TYP wins this, because as I’ve stated before, if it comes down to multi’s vs punchlines, I think it should be the person with the better punchlines who’s wins the vote. Good job to both of you

EoA

Dope bars from both. Punches fire. Multis unique. My winner stood out more no doubt here but the loser did his thing. Both weren't messing around but the winner attempted AND landed more haymakers here then his opponent. Good luck to the advancer 

Kilo

Couldn't 'use heat to ya advantage' even if ya bar's HOT & IT'S RELEVANT, think Avatar: You 'can't bring the combustion, Rai' if you're NOT IN YA ELEMENT! [Combustion ray]

is rai rai as in raichu the pokemon or just ray i may never know either way if it's Ray this is a solid bar 3/5

Being 'childish on a daily basis' as the 'RUGRATS' IN THEIR PRIME, won't be watching Patrick Star after '5 points stick to him' & I give him a BLOOD BATH W/ SOME KNIVES!

the rugrats and patrick was a brilliant concept could have been better set up and executed 2.5/7

What good's this 'rat w/ moves' against CHEESE IN THE MOUSETRAP? Like 'Splinter's death, the double-crossing finna put ya lights out' when we hear SQUEAKS & A LOUD SNAP!

nice and crisp not too dope or LOLish 2.75/5

On 'impulse, he'll malfunction' like he felt more than a TWITCH IN HIS SINUS then he's 'Plankton's wife gone crazy' like the 'BITCH HAD A VIRUS!'

theres is nothing bad abt this bar but it just does not feel like a punch to me and more like a good jab 2.25/5

This lonely cunt dreams of FUCKING W/ HIS PROUD SPOUSE but 'wouldn't have bitches at his crib' being the only 'BROTHER IN THE LOUD HOUSE!'

LMAO nice one 3/5

Looks for the largest swords & he's even SHOPPING FA TRUSTED MAGS, only time he's 'held something.. A foot long.' Was an item on OFFER AT KRUSTY KRAB! [Footlong]

so krusty krab is the subway of spongebob? LMAO. as for the bar the two lines did not have much of a connection between them for me, and the footlong bit could have been used a little more efficiently here 1.75/5

Total - 15.75/30 (52.50%)

Rai

That snitch-Row showed you to spit-flows, & now you think that GIBBERISH IS HURTFUL? "that rat taught you everything you know," but "here's the KICKER"- YOU'RE HIS GERBIL!

just a jab set up bar here 1.75/5

So to put a couple WINNERS IN THE CIRCLE? He "played an anonymous roll amongst the clan" like "SPLINTER & THE TURTLES!!..."/

the longish set up kinda did not allow the punch to be as effective as intended 1.75/5

I'll bury you in a field, where the grass is GROWN & MUD IS HIGHER "green & brown covering up the body" like "the CLOTHES FROM DOUG'S ATTIRE!!"/

more of a statement than a diss crisp yet not really demeaning enough 2.25/5

You've never beat anybody good, so how can you BEAT-RAI-OR HIS TACTICS? When you wouldn't be "known for putting stars under a rock" being "the CREATOR OF PATRICK!!"/

good bar overal, nice decent punch too 3/5

Loading steel balls in this enormous barrel. When I SEE YOU? IT IS HAMMER-TIME & if "you leave your chest open? I'll shoot the cannon" like "some LEAKED NUDES OF AMANDA BYNES!!"/

Rated Kilo a High 6 and Rai a mid 7.

Forgot to copy paste the whole vote the last time - 

Kilo

Couldn't 'use heat to ya advantage' even if ya bar's HOT & IT'S RELEVANT, think Avatar: You 'can't bring the combustion, Rai' if you're NOT IN YA ELEMENT! [Combustion ray]

is rai rai as in raichu the pokemon or just ray i may never know either way if it's Ray this is a solid bar 3/5

Being 'childish on a daily basis' as the 'RUGRATS' IN THEIR PRIME, won't be watching Patrick Star after '5 points stick to him' & I give him a BLOOD BATH W/ SOME KNIVES!

the rugrats and patrick was a brilliant concept could have been better set up and executed 2.5/7

What good's this 'rat w/ moves' against CHEESE IN THE MOUSETRAP? Like 'Splinter's death, the double-crossing finna put ya lights out' when we hear SQUEAKS & A LOUD SNAP!

nice and crisp not too dope or LOLish 2.75/5

On 'impulse, he'll malfunction' like he felt more than a TWITCH IN HIS SINUS then he's 'Plankton's wife gone crazy' like the 'BITCH HAD A VIRUS!'

theres is nothing bad abt this bar but it just does not feel like a punch to me and more like a good jab 2.25/5

This lonely cunt dreams of FUCKING W/ HIS PROUD SPOUSE but 'wouldn't have bitches at his crib' being the only 'BROTHER IN THE LOUD HOUSE!'

LMAO nice one 3/5

Looks for the largest swords & he's even SHOPPING FA TRUSTED MAGS, only time he's 'held something.. A foot long.' Was an item on OFFER AT KRUSTY KRAB! [Footlong]

so krusty krab is the subway of spongebob? LMAO. as for the bar the two lines did not have much of a connection between them for me, and the footlong bit could have been used a little more efficiently here 1.75/5

Total - 15.75/30 (52.50%)

Rai

That snitch-Row showed you to spit-flows, & now you think that GIBBERISH IS HURTFUL? "that rat taught you everything you know," but "here's the KICKER"- YOU'RE HIS GERBIL!

just a jab set up bar here 1.75/5

So to put a couple WINNERS IN THE CIRCLE? He "played an anonymous roll amongst the clan" like "SPLINTER & THE TURTLES!!..."/

the longish set up kinda did not allow the punch to be as effective as intended 1.75/5

I'll bury you in a field, where the grass is GROWN & MUD IS HIGHER "green & brown covering up the body" like "the CLOTHES FROM DOUG'S ATTIRE!!"/

more of a statement than a diss crisp yet not really demeaning enough 2.25/5

You've never beat anybody good, so how can you BEAT-RAI-OR HIS TACTICS? When you wouldn't be "known for putting stars under a rock" being "the CREATOR OF PATRICK!!"/

good bar overal, nice decent punch too 3/5

Loading steel balls in this enormous barrel. When I SEE YOU? IT IS HAMMER-TIME & if "you leave your chest open? I'll shoot the cannon" like "some LEAKED NUDES OF AMANDA BYNES!!"/

BOTB dayum!!!! would have almost been a perfect bar had the first line been a little harder 3.75/5

I'll steal your Ford suv. FLOOR IT, THEN I'M SPEEDING OFF "Catch me swiping the explorer" fast as "DORA WHEN SHE MEETS THE FOX!!!"

another good one, takes complex articulating skills to pen concepts like these 3.25/5

Total - 15.75/30 (52.50%)

WTF this is still a draw :O

moving on to the over all bits

Metaphors - RAIWordplays - TIEMultis - RaiVocabulary - TIEPunches - RAI coz he had the BOTB

Kilo had a more consistent verse whilst Rai only started picking up the pace after an ordinary opener in the second half of his verse and nearly killed it with every line which is why i gotta lean towards Rai in this one which was otherwise literally evenly matched for me in quantitatively but Rai edged it only thanks to the qualitative advantage he had here.

Excellent battle,  as expected.  Very,  very close.  Both incorporated their concepts very freshly and tangibly. Both had a slanted multi,  but in both cases,  it was very negligible because the schemes were so fresh,  the slants didn't matter in the least. Again, seeing this as almost too close to call,  I'm edging this, very slightly,  to the battler I best thought scored conceptually. 

Dimes from me this is a gem of a battle and very interesting as well being that the concept is nickelodeon bars and i have kids who watch that channel i was hoping for a double dare bar or peppa pig or rusty rivets lines but no worries. I did find it interesting to see the different spins on a couple of your bar choices the spongebob and ninja turtles crazy how you both went wit those exact same shows well they say great minds think alike so guess thats it. KG lemme tell you that for such a young fighter your wisdom is well beyond your years i mean i loved ya drop the opener was well thought out punch landed with heavy force nice. My favorite from you was "What good's this 'rat w/ moves' against CHEESE IN THE MOUSETRAP? Like 'Splinter's death, the double-crossing finna put ya lights out' when we hear SQUEAKS & A LOUD SNAP!"💪💪💪💯ya closer was a bit pause worthy tho it still connected overall great job young man.The Champ came with an elagant response punches were real smooth like ali in the ring that opening personal hit real hard i will never understand how row got all the acclaim he had that dude was ultra trash but anyways i feel like KG had the better turtles flip but Rai definately had the better spongebob flip plus imo the champ had bar of the battle wit "Loading steel balls in this enormous barrel. When I SEE YOU? IT IS HAMMER-TIME & if "you leave your chest open? I'll shoot the cannon" like "some LEAKED NUDES OF AMANDA BYNES!!" 💪🔥👀 some realy creative shit the dora closer sealed the deal for me. Got Rai Edging this slightly due to some fresher ideas fir the concept he had to work with but had it been anyone else KG would've took it cuz his verse was just plum loco! Thank for the efforts fellas great reads much RESPECT fairs in

I have Rai winning with a stronger average punch level from start to finish. There were a couple things I didn't like in the verse. The setup to the Doug bar was weird, and the Dora bar was totally fucked in terms of execution (it sounds like Swiper is stealing Dora which is something I don't recall ever seeing). The Doug punch was great though, Amanda Bynes bar was solid, the Patrick bar was alright although less clever than Kilo's. TYP, a lot of your punch weren't doing it for me. The Patrick one was pretty good but other than that nothing struck me as particularly impressive. Also, do they really serve footlongs at the Krusty Krab? I don't recall ever seeing that. Most of these bars weren't reaches though, they were just on a lower level conceptually. Fair's in.

Good Battle Rai come out to Win

Now  I like the concept And how you both put good bars in the 8s. Although I thought this would Ben one sided it wasn't at all. Prince can with great wording and ideas with mid to high grade punches . Didn't no like the mouse trap set up it didn't go with the concept all in all to me. Even with the mouse characteristics.

rai like normal has long rhyming schemes to the punches which elevate the strength and the creativity to the concept he used. Doug line wasn't the greatest but it stuck wit me fv in

Dope battle Young Prince had some decent jabs but was missing some of the complete haymakers he had been throwing in some of his recent battles. Rai  was firing on all cylinders here. The Splinter & the Turtles line followed by the 4-bar set of straight punches were the highlight of the battle for me. The multi's in the end made for an entertaining closer.

Gang

this one wasnt close for me, dominating victory, gb

GOOD READ HERE, FAV PARTS FROM KILO WERE THA ''SPLINTERS DEATH'' AND THA ''PLANKTONS WIFE'' PARTS.  FAV PARTS FROM RAI WERE THE ''SPLINTER'' AND ''DOUGS ATTIRE'', ALSO REALLY LIKED THE CLOSERS FROM BOTH...... ALL IN ALL YOU BOTH CAME IN SWINGING, I HAVE GOT ONE AHEAD DUE TO CONSISTANCY AN WORDING..... GREAT SPAR THO GUYS, FAIR IS IN.

Revoting because I fucked up.

Ee ooh ayyy

Read this a few times last few days, just coming back to vote now. Got Rai with more relevant references and superior wording and rhyming. Not much for me to say here otherwise. Both had a few things that made me laugh in good and bad ways, but Rai had more of those “dope” moments. Good battle guys.