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Creative Genius vs. Chico, both bound to bring that FIRE

Reminder: Deadline to post is tomorrow, April 17th, Midnight PST

Expo;Cameback tryn’ put lock on blast. Lock – Riep.

My choice's setup and execution was better

thought one was a little bit better here fairis  tossed fellas

sWORDz: Good use of multi's here, ambitious bar to go with, with so little room, only critique would be the bar's fumble part didn't really make sense, how could a bar fumble? also the ending punch just didn't hit that hard, basically saying he's old, IDK, just felt like you came light here.

Rican: Good execution here, concept was fresh and the wordplay was nice. Minor wording issues but nothing that crazy, don't know if you put "to to" on purpose but either way the punch hit.

Overall: Felt like my winner took this with a more complex concept with a better, more direct, approach. Loser took a chance but the execution wasn't fully there, good drops here fellas, may be better bar win. Fair's in.

Swordz re

Swordz reeling inn a win,ftw had some stream of rapz that was back to back gb y'all both was good close

Papis punch is the best I've seen yet words was dope but didn't have as much 'oomph' at the end of his bar. Fairs in

Rican - Play as medieval and today as evil was pretty forces bro lol rest was pretty flawless. This is the third time i am seeing the notre dame play on this site tho, but you already said you had already posted ur bar here when others had started using it in one of the forums so thats aite. 

Swordz - you had the concepts and the plays the only low being the execution which kinda made ur pinch feel like a jab and cost you this battle man. 

Rican just had a more refined verse, gb all the best to both! 

My choice was smoother here which took this for me..

A bit soon for this content isn’t it but I was expecting to see someone drop a bar about it somewhere on lb .... one just hit harder that’s all that needs to be said I’m afraid .... .:X:. 

One bar tried to fit too much in and it was difficult to read, although I thought the punch itself was pretty funny. Other bar seemed kind of generic and the setup wasn’t as good, but it was much cleaner and gets my vote.

This was a difficult one to call. In the end both bars had some flaws but were overall quite high quality.

sWORDz your writing style does pack a lot into the number of characters you can use, but this can hurt you in that it makes it quite hard to read. Just something to think about. Your first multi didn't really fit with me. The final two syllables in particular - "bruh, ya/fumble/tunnel" just doesn't rhyme at all to me (fumble and tunnel do just not bruh, ya"). I tried for a long time to think of a way in which this works but I just couldn't. Things like this in your execution really hurt you. That being said your concepts were pretty solid and you had a hard-hitting and effective personal.

Rican you went for something much simpler but more cleanly executed. The whole bar stuck with the one concept and used it well in a variety of ways, although it was reasonably clear what the punch would be by about half-way through. Still, props for being so current and although your multis were much more basic than sWORDz's they were all clean.

In the end my vote came down to whether sWORDz's bar, which was much more ambitious than Rican's and had a lot more put into it, was able to come out on top despite the fact that its execution let it down somewhat; or whether Rican's single concept executed pretty seamlessly was more effective.

this one wasn't too hard to pick, gb