Round 2 Submission Deadline: August 16 at 5pm PST (GMT -7). Good luck gents!

I thought one was just stronger overall

KNW I liked how you stuck to the scheme the whole 16 and  you actually executed it well.. it had a nice flow to it and deff packed some nice punchs.. my part from it was :The gap between us? well... it's like a hummer racing a jet, you would'nt be a couple steps ahead hover skating the set & if we choose to spar you'll see his "body lose some parts" like bumper plates in a wreck!! .. good shit

Callaway I felt you had some nice punchs here and there some were set up pretty well, the flow was really connecting at times too.. you deff tried to be more complex and I respect that approach.. a nice use a multies as well.. my fav part from youre 16 was :youll be like a "private in basic training" how you get "WOKEN UP WITH THE CANS" ill take him out the picture theres no way this HOE WILL FUCKIN ADVANCE ill make sure this "bug gets cropped" quicker than what MOSES DONE WITH HIS HAND when he had LOCUSTS COVER THE LAND .. Good battle both.. I got a winner.

KNWLDGE was more cognizant of flow and his punchlines seemed a little more accessible to me although admittedly they both end up even by the end of either verse.

Knwldge the Allah line I didn't understand if you wanna expo, that would be nice. Turning heads line was hard. Brother dating an ex line was funny too. Bumper plates line was cool. I thought it was cool running with the rhyme pattern for the whole verse. I thought the material started to sound a bit nonsensical when you started to get to the parents part. So one thing to improve on would be the storytelling aspect of your bars. Decent verse.

Callaway props for using the word garrote in there. Had to look that one up. Fake fruit line was lengthy but the punch was there which is what matters. Down to the wire as an ending punch felt lackluster and I would put that as a setup to another punch. Woken up with cans was a good line, bit of unrelated setup but it hit for me. I liked the Moses line that was good. Sexed her in great ages is weird wording but the monster pages punch was hard. I thought the ender was kind of weaker just because it felt forced. I understand the punch just not that impactful imo.

I gotta give it the guy who mixed in a greater variety of punches. One lost me during a part of their verse so this one was clear to me. Good work guys!

Hmm...well they were both IMO equally at par with each other but one's was just... let's just say...a lot less weird.... so.... FV IN. GB On both sides.

K-Melo

Here's the expo: 

Twenty six alive (amount of people battling in Round 2)

this sucker's caged with the vets, saying you're up for destruction is an understatement at best, outside of this place my gunners aim at your chest,

(Outside of let's beef I'll have my people shoot at him, rebels will shoot Allahu Akbar which means Allah is the greatest before a terror attack. So in the middle of telling Allah, they will shoot is what I said.)

if I shout Allah the sounds pop off like a drummer playing for guests... & Cally will see this heat like summer days in the west!

Cally/Cali will see the heat as in "Hot in California" Amer days in the west side of the US.

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Votes in..

Nice read here guys....thought one's concepts worked really well here and that's where my vote is going. Thought Knw started out swinging...could have come with some more clever nameplay but it still worked. Call had the setups down nice but was kind of a run-on 16....good spar, fair is left

Twenty six alive, this sucker's caged with the vets, saying you're up for destruction is an understatement at best, outside of this place my gunners aim at your chest, if I shout Allah the sounds pop off like a drummer playing for guests...

Are you known to be a terrorist or something? I'm not really sure.  Seemed like a long time to get to your point.

& Cally will see this heat like summer days in the west!!

Good punch here I guess this should have gone wiht the other block of text but too lazy to edit now. this punch was alright but very loosely correlated with drummers (if at all) and so this took some sting out for me.

you won't be turning heads when you suffer pain in the neck so keep fucking with the wrong one like a brother dating an ex,

ok ok, i like it.

you'll feel the sting over your heart like tattooing your lovers name in the chest!! The gap between us? well... it's like a hummer racing a jet, you would'nt be a couple steps ahead hover skating the set & if we choose to spar you'll see his "body lose some parts" like bumper plates in a wreck!!

I like how you're scheming the entire thing. There was some nice relevant and correlation between your lines up until the last line which came out of the blue tbh. not bad though.

I bet you live with your parents, & your mother's paying the rent, and you're dad is never home just a trucker aching of stress. You're the same as mom though, your fun is making the bed and love getting new animals, cause your role covers naming the pet.

I dunno, this was funny but didn't really have any punches or anything to it. 

Your computer is in the basement, under framing of deck where you have porn images like a bum impatient for sex.

under framing of deck? nah

Far as music, you're a student, don't belong on a track like a runner taking a breath. If I catch you with friends i'll fill your whole circle with led like I'm undertaking a test! 0_o

I have absolutely seen this punch a gazillion times and so this actually compels me to take points away and not just nullify this punch as it is one of the most well known "shoot your circle" style punches of all time.

Would say overall I am impressed with the scheme work and only really had 1 or 2 forced wordings to fit the scheme so I give props for that. I give a bit of an extra points to you for that but not toooo much because at the end of the day it isn't a scheme battle and so wouldn't be fair to give you a massive advantage for choosing to scheme.

Cont'd

ill have your breath stopped with garrote wire your chances of WINNIN'LL GO WITH IT once i get this "fake fruit laid out on the table" like what SITS IN YOUR HOES KITCHEN

Pretty good here, solid rhyming and correlation.

this wont be "neck 'n neck" since youre FIXING TO CHOKE PIMPIN cause when this comes "down to the wire" its not because this SHIT IS A "CLOSE FINISH"

This is hard. 

youll need your dickriders to beat me cause you ROLL WITH BUNCHES OF STANS youll even try to "cross C's just to get some gas" like a KNOWN REPUBLICAN STANCE

Simple but effective. Great rhyming.

we got big guns with ops so while youre sleeping well unLOAD THE GUNS ON YOUR CLAN youll be like a "private in basic training" how you get "WOKEN UP WITH THE CANS"

wtf dude? this is fire. 

ill take him out the picture theres no way this HOE WILL FUCKIN ADVANCE ill make sure this "bug gets cropped" quicker than what MOSES DONE WITH HIS HAND when he had LOCUSTS COVER THE LAND

wasn't feel this all that much but can appreciate the double rhyming delivery.

plus your girl hit me up and said you hadnt SEXED HER GREAT IN AGES so i hit it and "looked up more positions" than Monsters GENERATED PAGES

awkward wording in the first line and the punch is alright but kind of flat to me.

cause she said if you were a pornstar that you would NEVER MAKE IT FAMOUS youre always "putting the mission first" just like a DEDICATED AGENT

set up is kind of weird but punch was good enough to redeem it.

thought hed breeze by me to hvk but this KIDS A FUCKING FAKE his tourneys about to go "W-L" like how you spell the MIDDLE OF HIS NAME ops bitch

Im not a huge fan of like spelling peoples names out and shit and also is just weird to refer to his tourney run as W-L. Like technically, if callaway wins, it is true yes, but it's just not like how you would naturally speak of his tourney run. One of ur weaker punches IMO and not a great way to close.

Concealing vote but thought this one just came down to 1 dude hitting hard lines back to back to back and having more complex multis, much more relevant set ups, and forced content was kept to a minimum. FV.

IMPRESSED THAT KNW USED THA SAME RHYME SCHEME THROUGHOUT, THA FIRST HALF OF YOUR VERSE WOZ REALLY SOLID BUT THA CONSISTANCY BAR WAVERED A LIL IN THA 2ND HALF, 'FUCKIN WIT THA WRONG ONE' AND 'STING OVER YOUR HEART' PARTS WERE MY FAV FROM YOUR VERSE........ I LIKED CALS 'CLOSE FINISH' PART AN THA SET-UPS PREVIOUS WERE PRETTY SOLID, LOCUST PART WOZ MY FAV PART OF YOUR VERSE, AN THANKS FOR THA SHOUTOUT AT THA END LOL....... THIS IS THA MOST ENTERTAININ READ OF THA ROUND SO FAR FROM ME, BOTH IMPRESSED ME ACTUALLY AN BOTH BROUGHT GOOD SHIT TO THA TABLE, IVE GOT ONE SLIGHTLY EDGIN THIS..... GL TO BOTH....FAIR IS DROPPED!!

Both had spots were ryhmes were off, and had equal amount of punches.

But the difference maker imo was in content, knowledge had a couple lines that didnt make sense imo.Like the lovers name in the chest..Bumper plates..I mean i can see what was your intent there..Call: Close finish line threw me in the fritz..your best bar was your closet wich ended up as a wordplay related one shud have picked up more concrete concepts like that for the whole verse..

Overall good battle... I think Knowledge got this (barely)If it wasnt for more puns in that box..

Fv. All the way thru.

This was a good read. Appreciated how KNWLDGE schemed his whole verse. I felt he was a bit inconsistent though, I think this was due to being in the constraints of one scheme, the first punch was decent but lost its sting due to the simple set-ups. After that he picked it up and then lost steam towards the ending, did finish the verse off well though. Callaway had the better sets up imo, they jus' hit a different creative angle. He did have some misses though, wasn't feeling the final set up for the dedicated agent punch, tbh. This made it real close, especially with KNWLDGE's scheme work being done well, everything rhymed quite good imo. This could go anyway, but due to above reasons, I am leaning this way. May the best man win! Fairs in fellas.

7-7, high to high.