One got me thinking he was kicking holes in his room while writing his bars....serious amount of filler. One or two concepts that had potential but sadly went nowhere. Still has a lot of improving to do. Other dude had a clean and polsihed set of bars. Some nice punches and a smooth readability to his piece. Good luck to whoever goes through. 

ROUND 2 Submission deadline: January 19, 11:59PM Eastern (GMT -5). Good luck fellas!

That first multi set shouldn't have B TO capitalized. I didn't proof read this shit.

The "I'll try" before I've yet to define it multi should have been deleted as well. 

was close.. the aggo nameflip was nice and the nba lines... identitiy crisis was nice also...both verses were decent good battle either or.. Posted on: 2018-01-19 10:51:29

this was a close ass battle I was feeling one a bit more tho good shit to both. and goodluck!

204k's vote removed. He was just a member of Bnas's crew.

Uh, aight. I'll give you guys both a few thots. Bnas you just not at the level bro. I didn't think that your verse was particularly terrible or anything, it was just a verse that barely fufilled the baseline requirement for decency in every category. It's readable, but there's not a ton of flow. The ideas work, but they are all solidly below average, you didn't really attack your opponent...I actually think it's worse than being an mediocre verse, it's a fundamentally unambitious verse. It's a verse that didn't feel to me like you were trying to bring a strong verse to the tournament, it felt like a verse you write up in two minutes to body a rookie in an open. Nothing on here seemed like anything more than generic shit you write up for an easy 5-4 win. Aggo you had a good personal verse. There was maybe two lines that I ddin't really feel, but I think it was largely  a strong drop. Most of your personal shots landed quite well. Not sure that there's that much more to say here. 

Good battle I felt one edged it with better concepts. The fair is in

Voted

one had long setups to his punches and tha filler just fucked up tha flow and took sting of tha punches ... winner went easy here but still brought his swagger, had harder punches so imma lean this way ... fairs in

I think aggo had harder punches over all and brought more creativity to the mix, it's good to see Bnas trying against someone decent though, he could elevate alot if he just opened his mind and changed his ways, his verse was okay but not at the same quality level as Aggo's in terms of punches and set-ups. He also had multis too far apart from each other and Aggos verse read cleaner. Fairs in guys.

Voting against Aggo because he bolded his entire verse.

Nah, but on the real... I know Bleu told us that we need to drop an expo for all our votes in this GC, but I honestly don't feel like a detailed expo is needed here. Bnas had one punch that I sort of liked. Aggo, on the other hand, was leagues above Bnas in every way, bringing a verse that was decent technically and absolutely top-tier comedically. Fair's in.

Pretty decent battle but I got my winner here. I think one took to long to get to the punch on a few bars with jabs that didn’t really hit too hard plus didn’t really direct his punches at his opponent as much. There was a few moments but nothing spectacular.  the other had a lot of ammo on his side an ran with it. Multie heavy with a few decent personals that hit hard in my opinion taking this for me.

MvH in this Hoe!!

the bold is annoying to see, but one got the win here pretty easily outclassing all round. fair is in

Aggo was a lot cleaner and more coherent and threw more punches that landed. Fair is tossed.5-6