Ight, now that it's over..questions:

[AfterThought]

I got a couple questions I want answers to in all honesty by any decent voters (not a shot at any voters, I just really wanna understand)

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=493784

Now, that was my battle with @Shodan, cool verse, has possibility to win I guess, but for any reasons but wording being better, let's check it out:

AT's homies will watch THESE ROUNDS HURT THIS WHORE QUICK, it'll "Dawn 'on 'em after son goes down" and they'll BE OUT "EARLY, MOURNING!

..Ok, cool, it's worded good enough not to be bad and got a son/sun/morning/mourning wp.

Who says Afterthought is ACTUALLY KNOWN?, HONESTLY, if you hear "A-T(ee) is extra-large"? that's FAT PEOPLE'S CLOTHES SHOPPING SPREES!

Now, other than the fact that A Tee wp was used alot against me, this is a serious ass question: am I the only one that feels this multi a bit awkward? Anyway..

I HURT & MUG LAME NERDS, i'll prolly "bask in robbin" AT NO 31 FLAVORS! I'll shove a screwdriver into ya face, that's how I RIP FAKIN' Gs, to put it "past your eyes" like making MILK SAFE TO DRINK!

Ok, now I got a real problem with this right here. I hurt & mug lame nerds, can you say that in a casual conversation? Can you be like ayyyy bruh, I hurt & mug lame nerds??
We can let hurt & mug rhyming with 31 slide..but isn't lame nerds & flavors just a tad forced??
....and then in the middle of that casual conversation, you can slide "I rip fakin Gs"??

Then use the pasteurize wp (which was used very heavily back in 2012) in the most mediocre way possible, then end that rhyme with milk safe to drink???


My main question is, am I the only one that sees something wrong with this? Coz I had major wording problems up until 2014 and I always got criticized for it till I fixed the shit...
@Shodan This is not even directed with any malice your way, it's just that you used to have to have the ability to construct a smooth verse to win, so I'm trynna understand it

[AfterThought]

I got a couple questions I want answers to in all honesty by any decent voters (not a shot at any voters, I just really wanna understand)

http://www.letsbeef.com/battle_detai...n=tb&id=493784

Now, that was my battle with @Shodan, cool verse, has possibility to win I guess, but for any reasons but wording being better, let's check it out:

AT's homies will watch THESE ROUNDS HURT THIS WHORE QUICK, it'll "Dawn 'on 'em after son goes down" and they'll BE OUT "EARLY, MOURNING!

..Ok, cool, it's worded good enough not to be bad and got a son/sun/morning/mourning wp.

Who says Afterthought is ACTUALLY KNOWN?, HONESTLY, if you hear "A-T(ee) is extra-large"? that's FAT PEOPLE'S CLOTHES SHOPPING SPREES!

Now, other than the fact that A Tee wp was used alot against me, this is a serious ass question: am I the only one that feels this multi a bit awkward? Anyway..

I HURT & MUG LAME NERDS, i'll prolly "bask in robbin" AT NO 31 FLAVORS! I'll shove a screwdriver into ya face, that's how I RIP FAKIN' Gs, to put it "past your eyes" like making MILK SAFE TO DRINK!

Ok, now I got a real problem with this right here. I hurt & mug lame nerds, can you say that in a casual conversation? Can you be like ayyyy bruh, I hurt & mug lame nerds??
We can let hurt & mug rhyming with 31 slide..but isn't lame nerds & flavors just a tad forced??
....and then in the middle of that casual conversation, you can slide "I rip fakin Gs"??

Then use the pasteurize wp (which was used very heavily back in 2012) in the most mediocre way possible, then end that rhyme with milk safe to drink???


My main question is, am I the only one that sees something wrong with this? Coz I had major wording problems up until 2014 and I always got criticized for it till I fixed the shit...
@Shodan This is not even directed with any malice your way, it's just that you used to have to have the ability to construct a smooth verse to win, so I'm trynna understand it