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The bars themselves were honestly okay, what made it cringeworthy was your approach. It was too serious for the material you were spitting. Quirky material needs a quirky delivery, and you didn't have that. You could work on it though.
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The bars themselves were honestly okay, what made it cringeworthy was your approach. It was too serious for the material you were spitting. Quirky material needs a quirky delivery, and you didn't have that. You could work on it though.
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^ This.
The "battling nobody" intro was on the right tracks, just need to dive deeper into it.
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^ This.
The "battling nobody" intro was on the right tracks, just need to dive deeper into it.
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Gotcha. More stuff like the intro and the "standing there perfectly fine" bit. I can do that.
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Gotcha. More stuff like the intro and the "standing there perfectly fine" bit. I can do that.
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Yeah, it was definitely a matter of me figuring out what style would work for me. I've never been all that influenced by him, but I was reminding myself of Chedda Cheese when I was looking at the footage, lol.
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Yeah, it was definitely a matter of me figuring out what style would work for me. I've never been all that influenced by him, but I was reminding myself of Chedda Cheese when I was looking at the footage, lol.
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I'll get back to you on that as soon as you earn an LBT title match vs Esso and make it debatable.
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I'll get back to you on that as soon as you earn an LBT title match vs Esso and make it debatable.
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I Would Have To Dumb My Stuff Down And Streamline It To Kindergarten LB Style To Make It Debatable With Anyone And No One, Least Of All Me, Can See That Happening Anytime Soon.
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which is why you focus your great bars on noobs and scrubs..why does noone get you.?lmao
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which is why you focus your great bars on noobs and scrubs..why does noone get you.?lmao
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@ Homeskool , good stuff, and you clearly have good mentors behind you even in this thread. I could only wish LB showed me this much love for trying to have my own unique style. LMAO!
But forreal props fam!
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@ Homeskool , good stuff, and you clearly have good mentors behind you even in this thread. I could only wish LB showed me this much love for trying to have my own unique style. LMAO!
But forreal props fam!
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Strange How You Answered Your Own Question In A Way You Will Never
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whatever you say genius....
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whatever you say genius....
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