The Lockhart Verse - Lets Beef

**EtH** · #1 11-18-2019, 05:49 AM

I didn't want this title, I would have LEFT IT ALONE but at this point he's clashed with Rai more times than DEBRA BARONE! But the titles sooo prestigious, that's a MATTER OF FACT so much so that the most MAMMOTH OF TASKS it took to STAND WITH THIS MAN...I won a middle card BATTLE WITH SAXX! Damn, and Saxx is an Indian kid so Locks like "DUDE I'M OUT" only to show up 3 days later with NEW ACCOUNT! "What about the last defence, that shit was MASSIVE AS SHIT?" Nah he only beat a dude who called MARACCAS 'THE STICKS'! With the competition you've beat, you'll never be a LEGEND IN THIS PLACE that's why this fella is jealous that REVAN'S IN HIS WAY! Lock, man, you'll never be resPECTED AT THIS RATE cause guys like Rule didn't build their status by defENDING AGAINST DAVE! It took the demise of the site to be RANKING HIM BIGGER he only made moves and rose from the dead like the DANCERS IN THRILLER! So all five members claiming you're ILL WITH SPITTING IS PATHETIC cause even though your "titles only came at the end" you STILL AINT GETTING ANY CREDITS! But I'll admit, whenever the phrase "HALL OF FAME" IS SAID he's the first to say "LOCK AINT MADE IT YET, I'm gonna decline, I GOTTA WAIT A SEC"! See, Lock came in with that HONEST ABE EFFECT even though no one had made a NOMINATION THEAD! That line was at risk of being outDATED AS HELL cause check my expo, last week he PMed Rule and nomiNATED HIMSELF! Pfft, yet you'd turn it down? You aint earned it clown and it aint EVEN IN SIGHT but that technique? I'll need to KEEP IT IN MIND! "Everyone, I'm so glad you think I'm a BEAST WITH THE RHYMES but the LBT title? Oh, damn, I think I NEED TO DECLINE"! Other day he was fucking with his girl, had her TITS IN THE OPEN with his dick in his hand just SITTIN AND STROKIN! When it got tense he's like "SHIT CAN I HOLD IT?" he was edging closer and closer...so he SWITCHED OFF HIS MODEM! A girl on the internet? This CUNT HERE'S ON EM so much so; I'd be EXPECTING TO SEE his first line in a battle against JESSICA ZEE; "Do you COME HERE OFTEN?" When you were full time army and LB, did you ENJOY YOUR TIME IN EITHER? Ever get confused Lock, try to crew hop and get EMPLOYED BY AL QUAEDA? But he WASN'T A JOKE was someone that they WANNA PROMOTE and BOY WAS KINDA EAGER but what happened? They asked him if he wanna be captain, he said "Nah but I'll JOIN YOU AS A LEADER"! That lines fake I'll admit, he gets no CREDIT WITH THE WEAPON so if you see this private getting a nomination check those MESSAGES TO REVAN!

**EtH** · 11-18-2019, 05:49 AM

I didn't want this title, I would have LEFT IT ALONE but at this point he's clashed with Rai more times than DEBRA BARONE! But the titles sooo prestigious, that's a MATTER OF FACT so much so that the most MAMMOTH OF TASKS it took to STAND WITH THIS MAN...I won a middle card BATTLE WITH SAXX! Damn, and Saxx is an Indian kid so Locks like "DUDE I'M OUT" only to show up 3 days later with NEW ACCOUNT! "What about the last defence, that shit was MASSIVE AS SHIT?" Nah he only beat a dude who called MARACCAS 'THE STICKS'! With the competition you've beat, you'll never be a LEGEND IN THIS PLACE that's why this fella is jealous that REVAN'S IN HIS WAY! Lock, man, you'll never be resPECTED AT THIS RATE cause guys like Rule didn't build their status by defENDING AGAINST DAVE! It took the demise of the site to be RANKING HIM BIGGER he only made moves and rose from the dead like the DANCERS IN THRILLER! So all five members claiming you're ILL WITH SPITTING IS PATHETIC cause even though your "titles only came at the end" you STILL AINT GETTING ANY CREDITS! But I'll admit, whenever the phrase "HALL OF FAME" IS SAID he's the first to say "LOCK AINT MADE IT YET, I'm gonna decline, I GOTTA WAIT A SEC"! See, Lock came in with that HONEST ABE EFFECT even though no one had made a NOMINATION THEAD! That line was at risk of being outDATED AS HELL cause check my expo, last week he PMed Rule and nomiNATED HIMSELF! Pfft, yet you'd turn it down? You aint earned it clown and it aint EVEN IN SIGHT but that technique? I'll need to KEEP IT IN MIND! "Everyone, I'm so glad you think I'm a BEAST WITH THE RHYMES but the LBT title? Oh, damn, I think I NEED TO DECLINE"! Other day he was fucking with his girl, had her TITS IN THE OPEN with his dick in his hand just SITTIN AND STROKIN! When it got tense he's like "SHIT CAN I HOLD IT?" he was edging closer and closer...so he SWITCHED OFF HIS MODEM! A girl on the internet? This CUNT HERE'S ON EM so much so; I'd be EXPECTING TO SEE his first line in a battle against JESSICA ZEE; "Do you COME HERE OFTEN?" When you were full time army and LB, did you ENJOY YOUR TIME IN EITHER? Ever get confused Lock, try to crew hop and get EMPLOYED BY AL QUAEDA? But he WASN'T A JOKE was someone that they WANNA PROMOTE and BOY WAS KINDA EAGER but what happened? They asked him if he wanna be captain, he said "Nah but I'll JOIN YOU AS A LEADER"! That lines fake I'll admit, he gets no CREDIT WITH THE WEAPON so if you see this private getting a nomination check those MESSAGES TO REVAN!

**EtH** · #2 11-18-2019, 11:31 AM

Blown away by all the feedback.<3 you guys

**EtH** · 11-18-2019, 11:31 AM

Blown away by all the feedback.<3 you guys

**RULE** · #3 11-18-2019, 11:36 AM

With the competition you've beat, you'll never be a LEGEND IN THIS PLACE that's why this fella is jealous that REVAN'S IN HIS WAY! Lock, man, you'll never be resPECTED AT THIS RATE cause guys like Rule didn't build their status by defENDING AGAINST DAVE!

But I'll admit, whenever the phrase "HALL OF FAME" IS SAID he's the first to say "LOCK AINT MADE IT YET, I'm gonna decline, I GOTTA WAIT A SEC"! See, Lock came in with that HONEST ABE EFFECT even though no one had made a NOMINATION THEAD! That line was at risk of being outDATED AS HELL cause check my expo, last week he PMed Rule and nomiNATED HIMSELF!

try to crew hop and get EMPLOYED BY AL QUAEDA? But he WASN'T A JOKE was someone that they WANNA PROMOTE and BOY WAS KINDA EAGER but what happened? They asked him if he wanna be captain, he said "Nah but I'll JOIN YOU AS A LEADER"! That lines fake I'll admit, he gets no CREDIT WITH THE WEAPON so if you see this private getting a nomination check those MESSAGES TO REVAN!

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**RULE** · 11-18-2019, 11:36 AM

With the competition you've beat, you'll never be a LEGEND IN THIS PLACE that's why this fella is jealous that REVAN'S IN HIS WAY! Lock, man, you'll never be resPECTED AT THIS RATE cause guys like Rule didn't build their status by defENDING AGAINST DAVE!

But I'll admit, whenever the phrase "HALL OF FAME" IS SAID he's the first to say "LOCK AINT MADE IT YET, I'm gonna decline, I GOTTA WAIT A SEC"! See, Lock came in with that HONEST ABE EFFECT even though no one had made a NOMINATION THEAD! That line was at risk of being outDATED AS HELL cause check my expo, last week he PMed Rule and nomiNATED HIMSELF!

try to crew hop and get EMPLOYED BY AL QUAEDA? But he WASN'T A JOKE was someone that they WANNA PROMOTE and BOY WAS KINDA EAGER but what happened? They asked him if he wanna be captain, he said "Nah but I'll JOIN YOU AS A LEADER"! That lines fake I'll admit, he gets no CREDIT WITH THE WEAPON so if you see this private getting a nomination check those MESSAGES TO REVAN!

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**Brayne Ded** · #4 11-18-2019, 01:52 PM

You have a unique style, Dave, and it really shines in this. Your conversational approach worked really well with the personal after personal approach of this verse. I enjoyed the storytelling about Lock's LBT history and the references to his defenses. That flowed well, was well written and rhymes nicely. It's also common knowledge, doesn't need an expo and easily verified. The punchlines sprinkled in were nice, the "titles/credits" line was clever and relevant to the subject. Only part I didn't fuck with was "your internet girl" segment. Been way overused against him, in my opinion. Military reference was a little dated as well but works for me. Closer was nice. All in all, a nice diss towards someone I consider a friend. Good shit, Dave.

**Brayne Ded** · 11-18-2019, 01:52 PM

You have a unique style, Dave, and it really shines in this. Your conversational approach worked really well with the personal after personal approach of this verse. I enjoyed the storytelling about Lock's LBT history and the references to his defenses. That flowed well, was well written and rhymes nicely. It's also common knowledge, doesn't need an expo and easily verified. The punchlines sprinkled in were nice, the "titles/credits" line was clever and relevant to the subject. Only part I didn't fuck with was "your internet girl" segment. Been way overused against him, in my opinion. Military reference was a little dated as well but works for me. Closer was nice. All in all, a nice diss towards someone I consider a friend. Good shit, Dave.

**Svengali** · #5 11-18-2019, 02:53 PM

When you were full time army and LB, did you ENJOY YOUR TIME IN EITHER? Ever get confused Lock, try to crew hop and get EMPLOYED BY AL QUAEDA? But he WASN'T A JOKE was someone that they WANNA PROMOTE and BOY WAS KINDA EAGER but what happened? They asked him if he wanna be captain, he said "Nah but I'll JOIN YOU AS A LEADER"!

Wow, that made me laugh so much. This whole verse was superb.

**Svengali** · 11-18-2019, 02:53 PM

When you were full time army and LB, did you ENJOY YOUR TIME IN EITHER? Ever get confused Lock, try to crew hop and get EMPLOYED BY AL QUAEDA? But he WASN'T A JOKE was someone that they WANNA PROMOTE and BOY WAS KINDA EAGER but what happened? They asked him if he wanna be captain, he said "Nah but I'll JOIN YOU AS A LEADER"!

Wow, that made me laugh so much. This whole verse was superb.