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I understand what he was doing, and it's a very common way of writing. I'm not sure why "even Dave" is the wording used, considering that for all my shortcomings in my own writing ability, my ability to comprehend and understand the technical aspect of writing has never been in question.
But that being said, I was pointing out the flaws with that style, of which there are many.
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I understand what he was doing, and it's a very common way of writing. I'm not sure why "even Dave" is the wording used, considering that for all my shortcomings in my own writing ability, my ability to comprehend and understand the technical aspect of writing has never been in question.
But that being said, I was pointing out the flaws with that style, of which there are many.
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So if yah nighas didn't like the shit then how da fuck he get blue balls .. truth be told none of the words rhyme but I get the picture tho. I vote for bruh cause his shit be the lines that have u like " damn, why I ain't think of that shit".
Don't be surprised a mufka aint stole illo raps in real life cause that shit be a1.
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So if yah nighas didn't like the shit then how da fuck he get blue balls .. truth be told none of the words rhyme but I get the picture tho. I vote for bruh cause his shit be the lines that have u like " damn, why I ain't think of that shit".
Don't be surprised a mufka aint stole illo raps in real life cause that shit be a1.
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For all that shiit he "states man/statesmen" I give his COLON POWS( Colin Powell )/ get em 'bent' over this "ground work" like FOLDING TOWELS/ (TILE'S) / only time he "gripping shid" is HOLDING BOWELS / so it's no 'wait'.... I'll give em "tips over beef " w/o ROLLING COWS... slow it down... "No weight" I'll give em "tips over beef" w/o enROLLING CALS/(calories)
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Man, I'd hate to be ILLoKWENT right now. Can you imagine Dtdabeast was defending you?
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Man, I'd hate to be ILLoKWENT right now. Can you imagine Dtdabeast was defending you?
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It's all subjective and enough people regard ILLo's style for him to garnish his accolades so there's that...
Also, I don't know if tub-of-lard, hefty-bag Rant intended this as a call out but that's be cool to see. LBA or LBT maybe?
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It's all subjective and enough people regard ILLo's style for him to garnish his accolades so there's that...
Also, I don't know if tub-of-lard, hefty-bag Rant intended this as a call out but that's be cool to see. LBA or LBT maybe?
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It's all subjective and enough people regard ILLo's style for him to garnish his accolades so there's that...
Also, I don't know if tub-of-lard, hefty-bag Rant intended this as a call out but that's be cool to see. LBA or LBT maybe?
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It was supposed to happen a year ago on a card....Illokwent cited holiday parties and other winter wonderlandnessfor not participating.
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It's all subjective and enough people regard ILLo's style for him to garnish his accolades so there's that...
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It was supposed to happen a year ago on a card....Illokwent cited holiday parties and other winter wonderlandnessfor not participating.
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It was supposed to happen a year ago on a card....Illokwent cited holiday parties and other winter wonderlandnessfor not participating.
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I distinctly recall this quackery.
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I distinctly recall this quackery.
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So if yah nighas didn't like the shit then how da fuck he get blue balls ..
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So if yah nighas didn't like the shit then how da fuck he get blue balls ..
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"Even EtH gets what I was doing".
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