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As a professional at making broken multies I'll explain
BITCH I'M LACKING A PISS TEST/ not wasting a drop cause i aint MISSED YET!
PISS TEST = 2 syllables
MISSED YET = 2 syllables
The other capped words don't have a rhyme for their syllables.
A stretch is more like
Watch me be ill-IC-IT/ but you change face like your playin the SWITCH, SHIT
Ic = iss sound which kinda rhymes with switch but is only similar and not the same syllable sound this is a stretch
IT = obviously rhymes with SHIT
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As a professional at making broken multies I'll explain
BITCH I'M LACKING A PISS TEST/ not wasting a drop cause i aint MISSED YET!
PISS TEST = 2 syllables
MISSED YET = 2 syllables
The other capped words don't have a rhyme for their syllables.
A stretch is more like
Watch me be ill-IC-IT/ but you change face like your playin the SWITCH, SHIT
Ic = iss sound which kinda rhymes with switch but is only similar and not the same syllable sound this is a stretch
IT = obviously rhymes with SHIT
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Originally Posted by Zezmeril
As a professional at making broken multies I'll explain
BITCH I'M LACKING A PISS TEST/ not wasting a drop cause i aint MISSED YET!
PISS TEST = 2 syllables
MISSED YET = 2 syllables
The other capped words don't have a rhyme for their syllables.
A stretch is more like
Watch me be ill-IC-IT/ but you change face like your playin the SWITCH, SHIT
Ic = iss sound which kinda rhymes with switch but is only similar and not the same syllable sound this is a stretch
IT = obviously rhymes with SHIT
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The stretch here is an example of slant rhyming using assonance. As a part of a multi with a lot of syllables this is commonplace and imo it’s fine, but in a short multi like the example it’s pretty lazy in a text battle.
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Originally Posted by Zezmeril
As a professional at making broken multies I'll explain
BITCH I'M LACKING A PISS TEST/ not wasting a drop cause i aint MISSED YET!
PISS TEST = 2 syllables
MISSED YET = 2 syllables
The other capped words don't have a rhyme for their syllables.
A stretch is more like
Watch me be ill-IC-IT/ but you change face like your playin the SWITCH, SHIT
Ic = iss sound which kinda rhymes with switch but is only similar and not the same syllable sound this is a stretch
IT = obviously rhymes with SHIT
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The stretch here is an example of slant rhyming using assonance. As a part of a multi with a lot of syllables this is commonplace and imo it’s fine, but in a short multi like the example it’s pretty lazy in a text battle.
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Originally Posted by Zezmeril
As a professional at making broken multies I'll explain
BITCH I'M LACKING A PISS TEST/ not wasting a drop cause i aint MISSED YET!
PISS TEST = 2 syllables
MISSED YET = 2 syllables
The other capped words don't have a rhyme for their syllables.
A stretch is more like
Watch me be ill-IC-IT/ but you change face like your playin the SWITCH, SHIT
Ic = iss sound which kinda rhymes with switch but is only similar and not the same syllable sound this is a stretch
IT = obviously rhymes with SHIT
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Not getting this either. In the first line there's a bunch of random pointless shit capped which will lose points. miss her and piss test is alright as a multi, although test and yet aren't great.
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Originally Posted by Zezmeril
As a professional at making broken multies I'll explain
BITCH I'M LACKING A PISS TEST/ not wasting a drop cause i aint MISSED YET!
PISS TEST = 2 syllables
MISSED YET = 2 syllables
The other capped words don't have a rhyme for their syllables.
A stretch is more like
Watch me be ill-IC-IT/ but you change face like your playin the SWITCH, SHIT
Ic = iss sound which kinda rhymes with switch but is only similar and not the same syllable sound this is a stretch
IT = obviously rhymes with SHIT
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Not getting this either. In the first line there's a bunch of random pointless shit capped which will lose points. miss her and piss test is alright as a multi, although test and yet aren't great.
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Not getting this either. In the first line there's a bunch of random pointless shit capped which will lose points.
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This is whats broken about it. Capped syllables that don't rhyme.
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Not getting this either. In the first line there's a bunch of random pointless shit capped which will lose points.
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This is whats broken about it. Capped syllables that don't rhyme.
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This is whats broken about it. Capped syllables that don't rhyme.
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That's where your misconceptions is coming from. Capping all those multis that dont rhyme is just lack of knowledge as to why we cap multis
Broken is more KIND AND HONEST / LINES IN THE COMMENTS.
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This is whats broken about it. Capped syllables that don't rhyme.
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That's where your misconceptions is coming from. Capping all those multis that dont rhyme is just lack of knowledge as to why we cap multis
Broken is more KIND AND HONEST / LINES IN THE COMMENTS.
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That's where your misconceptions is coming from. Capping all those multis that dont rhyme is just lack of knowledge as to why we cap multis
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That's where your misconceptions is coming from. Capping all those multis that dont rhyme is just lack of knowledge as to why we cap multis
Broken is more KIND AND HONEST / LINES IN THE COMMENTS.
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to me a broken multi is when you use the word THE in the center of a set then on the follow-up set add THE in the same place. That is a broken multi.
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That's not a broken multi. That's just a repeated non rhyming word in a multi set. Definitely frowned upon if done more than once in a multi set... it's still not a broken multi.
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A broken multi is when the syllable counts don't match in a rhyme scheme.
As Eth had mentioned:
Broken is more KIND AND HONEST / LINES IN THE COMMENTS
KIND AND HONEST (4 syllables)
LINES IN THE COMMENTS (5 syllables)
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to me a broken multi is when you use the word THE in the center of a set then on the follow-up set add THE in the same place. That is a broken multi.
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That's not a broken multi. That's just a repeated non rhyming word in a multi set. Definitely frowned upon if done more than once in a multi set... it's still not a broken multi.
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A broken multi is when the syllable counts don't match in a rhyme scheme.
As Eth had mentioned:
Broken is more KIND AND HONEST / LINES IN THE COMMENTS
KIND AND HONEST (4 syllables)
LINES IN THE COMMENTS (5 syllables)
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This is the DEFINITION of a broken multi.
A syllable count thats off and affects the flow in a negative way.
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That's not a broken multi. That's just a repeated non rhyming word in a multi set. Definitely frowned upon if done more than once in a multi set... it's still not a broken multi.
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A broken multi is when the syllable counts don't match in a rhyme scheme.
As Eth had mentioned:
Broken is more KIND AND HONEST / LINES IN THE COMMENTS
KIND AND HONEST (4 syllables)
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Yeah Manny spot on here.
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That's not a broken multi. That's just a repeated non rhyming word in a multi set. Definitely frowned upon if done more than once in a multi set... it's still not a broken multi.
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A broken multi is when the syllable counts don't match in a rhyme scheme.
As Eth had mentioned:
Broken is more KIND AND HONEST / LINES IN THE COMMENTS
KIND AND HONEST (4 syllables)
LINES IN THE COMMENTS (5 syllables)
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Yeah Manny spot on here.
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