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Unread 08-15-2012, 10:15 AM
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Default Clash of Eras: Verity vs. Dono

Verity vs. Dono

Clash of Eras: Topical Battle

House rules apply, contact me with any questions.

The line limit for this topical battle is 40-60 lines. (Any adjustments must be decided upon by both participants and confirmed by Teek within 24 hours).



Topic: Against One's Will
(40-60 Lines)

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First to 5 or 3-0 K.O.

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

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Default Clash of Eras: Verity vs. Dono

Verity vs. Dono

Clash of Eras: Topical Battle

House rules apply, contact me with any questions.

The line limit for this topical battle is 40-60 lines. (Any adjustments must be decided upon by both participants and confirmed by Teek within 24 hours).



Topic: Against One's Will
(40-60 Lines)

(Contestants have 24 hours to contact me via this thread if they agree this image should be replaced, you will only get one chance. )



Check in By: August 24th 12 A.M..

Left Sends To Right By: August 31st 11:59 P.M.
Right Must Reply By: September 1st 11:59 P.M.

First to 5 or 3-0 K.O.

Voting Rubix
Rhyming Scheme/Flow
Vocabulary
Topic/Meaning
Storytelling/Progression
Emotion
Imagery
Poetic Techniques
Ending

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Unread 08-16-2012, 10:43 AM
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11 Won / 8 Lost
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35 Won / 37 Lost
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11 Won / 8 Lost
Exclusive Audio Record
1 Won / 0 Lost

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35 Won / 37 Lost
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Unread 08-21-2012, 11:51 AM
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4 Won / 1 Lost
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153 Won / 28 Lost
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3 Won / 0 Lost
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Oh shit, forgot to check

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Unread 08-21-2012, 11:51 AM   #3
 
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4 Won / 1 Lost
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Unread 08-23-2012, 09:49 PM
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3 Won / 4 Lost
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306 Won / 112 Lost
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9 Won / 7 Lost
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@Dono is above the law....

but still....both are wack and should send 8 ...FV VB GB NO H8
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306 Won / 112 Lost
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@Dono is above the law....

but still....both are wack and should send 8 ...FV VB GB NO H8
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Unread 08-27-2012, 03:38 PM
J u s T C J u s T C is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row!
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4 Won / 0 Lost
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2 of the best topical battlers on the site along with the 2 DPS champs....... and the exiled Scotsman.
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Unread 08-27-2012, 03:38 PM   #5
 
J u s T C J u s T C is on FIRE! 5+ wins in a row!
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4 Won / 0 Lost
 
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2 of the best topical battlers on the site along with the 2 DPS champs....... and the exiled Scotsman.
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Unread 08-27-2012, 06:32 PM
Erupt da Monsta Erupt da Monsta is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!Erupt da Monsta is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!Erupt da Monsta is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!
Join Date: Dec 2009
Posts: 8,056
Mentioned: 1899 Post(s)
Tagged: 85 Thread(s)
Estimated Skill in Audio: 8.83/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.83/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.83/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.83/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.83/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.83/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.83/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.83/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.83/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 8.83/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
24 Won / 4 Lost
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Ranked Text Record
64 Won / 15 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
1 Won / 0 Lost
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Yo what happened to me and dono's topical battle? lol I dont see it anywhere. Anyways goodluck to both , should be dope
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Unread 08-27-2012, 06:32 PM   #6
 
Erupt da Monsta Erupt da Monsta is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!Erupt da Monsta is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!Erupt da Monsta is on FIRE! 15+ wins in a row!
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24 Won / 4 Lost
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64 Won / 15 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
1 Won / 0 Lost
 
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Yo what happened to me and dono's topical battle? lol I dont see it anywhere. Anyways goodluck to both , should be dope
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Unread 09-04-2012, 04:20 PM
Dono
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Posts: 1,740
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Ranked Audio Record
11 Won / 8 Lost
Exclusive Audio Record
1 Won / 0 Lost

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Ranked Text Record
35 Won / 37 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
1 Won / 1 Lost
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'Against One's Will'

He never wanted this, but it was the only option
A place he visited before but hadn't been to often
His ears moved as tears oozed from his distraught toddler
Plenty of thought fodder, any child would have got bothered
It was not proper for a youth to see such a scene
Fists curled tight as vices on the shirt he clutched between
Reluctantly carried the boy from the hospital wing
Away from his grandfather's corpse and sad thoughts it'd bring
While there's hope give forth full effort and shall the best unwind
Let not death define, leave life to let loose the test of time


Preparing the curtain, it was scary for certain
Could he carry the burden and bury a person?
Letting him live meant daring to worsen the illness
But his parent's perpetual pain proved worse than a stillness
Pops would rarely talk, so weak he could barely cough
All his best traits and personality had been carried off
Merely a shadow of a shell of his former self
No trace of the radiant, positive man from warmer health
He stood above his father, thoughts clear as muddy water
Murder was murder, be it benign or bloody slaughter
Plus, this was the man who raised him through taboo phases
Tattoo crazes, and led him out of bad move mazes
He could relieve the worst mess, there for his birth, fresh
The first breath, and what was he bestowing in return? Death?
His heart felt heated as burnt flesh so he mentally stalled
Grasping for alternatives but necessity called
The son bawled, you could almost watch nerves tearing
The old man was suffering more than worth bearing
Leaned down and pulled the plug, more than a metaphor
Sleep, forever snore, dad ceased to breathe; nevermore
While there's hope give forth full effort and shall the best unwind
Let not death define, leave life to let loose the test of time


Years ago, tears flow, father and son, each across the table
Speech is lost - disabled, discussion reaching thoughts of fatal
Father hosted a brain parasite, simple medical fate
No refunds, one way ticket to a vegetable state
The son refuses, what he's asking is impossible
Barely audible, his denial wasn't acting as an obstacle
Pretending it's optional doesn't change the evidence
Forgetful now, few years left by saintly estimates
The old man spoke "When I pass the point of no return
Don't let me slowly burn, be firm, and end my term
I am no worm or germ, but I have reached the end
When speech is bent, unite me with the preacher's men
While there's hope give forth full effort and shall the best unwind
Let not death define, leave life to let loose the test of time"


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Unread 09-04-2012, 04:20 PM   #7
 
Dono
Estimated Skill in Audio: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 7.91/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
11 Won / 8 Lost
Exclusive Audio Record
1 Won / 0 Lost

Estimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.91/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.6/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
35 Won / 37 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
1 Won / 1 Lost
 
Join Date: Apr 2011
Voted: 24 audio / 306 text
Posts: 1,740
Mentioned: 782 Post(s)
Tagged: 61 Thread(s)


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'Against One's Will'

He never wanted this, but it was the only option
A place he visited before but hadn't been to often
His ears moved as tears oozed from his distraught toddler
Plenty of thought fodder, any child would have got bothered
It was not proper for a youth to see such a scene
Fists curled tight as vices on the shirt he clutched between
Reluctantly carried the boy from the hospital wing
Away from his grandfather's corpse and sad thoughts it'd bring
While there's hope give forth full effort and shall the best unwind
Let not death define, leave life to let loose the test of time


Preparing the curtain, it was scary for certain
Could he carry the burden and bury a person?
Letting him live meant daring to worsen the illness
But his parent's perpetual pain proved worse than a stillness
Pops would rarely talk, so weak he could barely cough
All his best traits and personality had been carried off
Merely a shadow of a shell of his former self
No trace of the radiant, positive man from warmer health
He stood above his father, thoughts clear as muddy water
Murder was murder, be it benign or bloody slaughter
Plus, this was the man who raised him through taboo phases
Tattoo crazes, and led him out of bad move mazes
He could relieve the worst mess, there for his birth, fresh
The first breath, and what was he bestowing in return? Death?
His heart felt heated as burnt flesh so he mentally stalled
Grasping for alternatives but necessity called
The son bawled, you could almost watch nerves tearing
The old man was suffering more than worth bearing
Leaned down and pulled the plug, more than a metaphor
Sleep, forever snore, dad ceased to breathe; nevermore
While there's hope give forth full effort and shall the best unwind
Let not death define, leave life to let loose the test of time


Years ago, tears flow, father and son, each across the table
Speech is lost - disabled, discussion reaching thoughts of fatal
Father hosted a brain parasite, simple medical fate
No refunds, one way ticket to a vegetable state
The son refuses, what he's asking is impossible
Barely audible, his denial wasn't acting as an obstacle
Pretending it's optional doesn't change the evidence
Forgetful now, few years left by saintly estimates
The old man spoke "When I pass the point of no return
Don't let me slowly burn, be firm, and end my term
I am no worm or germ, but I have reached the end
When speech is bent, unite me with the preacher's men
While there's hope give forth full effort and shall the best unwind
Let not death define, leave life to let loose the test of time"



Last edited by Dono; 09-04-2012 at 04:26 PM.
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Unread 09-06-2012, 11:47 PM
Teek
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Ranked Audio Record
5 Won / 5 Lost
Estimated Skill in Text: 5.51/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.51/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.51/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.51/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.51/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.75/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.75/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.75/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.75/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 5.75/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
34 Won / 35 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
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@Dono I just caught this. Been off here a few days. Really nice verse.

Respect on the images. Thank you for this read.
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@Dono I just caught this. Been off here a few days. Really nice verse.

Respect on the images. Thank you for this read.
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if this is a still open battle my bad... I gave some feed......



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if this is a still open battle my bad... I gave some feed......



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