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Unread 05-29-2012, 09:02 PM
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Default Seeing the Light

As i contemplate my future,this isnt what im used to
Ripped shirt, unshaven the streets with no toothbrush
I feel useless, ive been left empty
you wont even find a moth in my hugo boss wallet -see?
No dollars ,no pounds not even a fucking rupee.
trained for five year 'hmph' so much for uni
the verve were right 'the drugs dont work'
they ruin your life - or even send you bisurk!!
what a jerk!! << seems to be my middle name
If i reach the top again then forget about cocaine.
But as i stand here i know theres only two ways down
ones by the stairs , the others hittin the ground
do i really want to carry on this life of strife
no money no daughter NO CAR!! no wife.
on refection ive gotta do whats right
do i really wanna splatter the pavements in the York night?
do i have anywhere left to go?
mum dead brother in jail, all im gettin is NO's
I step up to the ledge in take a look up to the sky
'so jesus christ this is how im gunna die'
One look down and i start to cry
'Pick up your balls and look alive'
steap off the edge like im crossing the road to heaven
dropping like a brick i aint flying like a feather
hit the ground theres no more sound
its out of my hands who will carry me now.

uppin for feed!
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Unread 05-29-2012, 09:02 PM   #1
 
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Default Seeing the Light

As i contemplate my future,this isnt what im used to
Ripped shirt, unshaven the streets with no toothbrush
I feel useless, ive been left empty
you wont even find a moth in my hugo boss wallet -see?
No dollars ,no pounds not even a fucking rupee.
trained for five year 'hmph' so much for uni
the verve were right 'the drugs dont work'
they ruin your life - or even send you bisurk!!
what a jerk!! << seems to be my middle name
If i reach the top again then forget about cocaine.
But as i stand here i know theres only two ways down
ones by the stairs , the others hittin the ground
do i really want to carry on this life of strife
no money no daughter NO CAR!! no wife.
on refection ive gotta do whats right
do i really wanna splatter the pavements in the York night?
do i have anywhere left to go?
mum dead brother in jail, all im gettin is NO's
I step up to the ledge in take a look up to the sky
'so jesus christ this is how im gunna die'
One look down and i start to cry
'Pick up your balls and look alive'
steap off the edge like im crossing the road to heaven
dropping like a brick i aint flying like a feather
hit the ground theres no more sound
its out of my hands who will carry me now.

uppin for feed!
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Unread 05-29-2012, 09:12 PM
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umm you can take this shit to the Cypher Section, Start A Cypher, And Then ask for feedback. we don't fill our forums up with a bunch of useless depressing babble about how bad your life is. But if i were to give you feed back. you'd get a N for Needs Work.
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umm you can take this shit to the Cypher Section, Start A Cypher, And Then ask for feedback. we don't fill our forums up with a bunch of useless depressing babble about how bad your life is. But if i were to give you feed back. you'd get a N for Needs Work.
 
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Unread 05-29-2012, 09:38 PM
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well your a dick! i can take construction but that was just plain rude
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Unread 05-29-2012, 09:38 PM   #3
 
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well your a dick! i can take construction but that was just plain rude
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Unread 05-29-2012, 09:48 PM
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Oh, I Apologize, I Forgot My Manners.

Hi, Welcome To The Site.

We Don't Use Our Forums To Post Poorly Constructed Lyrics. The Site Is Structured So That You Can Actually Post A Cypher With It And Then Ask For Feed Back. I'm Not A Fan Of This Depressing Excrement Writing. IF I Were To Give Feedback, It Would Be An "F". Failure To Meet Expectation.
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Oh, I Apologize, I Forgot My Manners.

Hi, Welcome To The Site.

We Don't Use Our Forums To Post Poorly Constructed Lyrics. The Site Is Structured So That You Can Actually Post A Cypher With It And Then Ask For Feed Back. I'm Not A Fan Of This Depressing Excrement Writing. IF I Were To Give Feedback, It Would Be An "F". Failure To Meet Expectation.
 
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Unread 05-30-2012, 12:50 AM
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
32 Won / 13 Lost
6 1694
Estimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
249 Won / 73 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
2 Won / 2 Lost
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@J-time

I moved this to the correct forum. Good luck.
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Unread 05-30-2012, 12:50 AM   #5
 
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Estimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Audio: 4.47/10 stars
Ranked Audio Record
32 Won / 13 Lost
6 1694
Estimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 4.47/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 starsEstimated Skill in Text: 7.93/10 stars
Ranked Text Record
249 Won / 73 Lost
Exclusive Text Record
2 Won / 2 Lost
 
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@J-time

I moved this to the correct forum. Good luck.
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Unread 05-30-2012, 05:27 AM
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truth be told its just a piece in a topical battle im having with someone, i just wanted feed thts all!
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truth be told its just a piece in a topical battle im having with someone, i just wanted feed thts all!
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Unread 05-30-2012, 06:31 PM
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can i get some feedback please guys
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can i get some feedback please guys
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