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Soon as Jeremiah pay me, drinks for the entire Anbu staff.
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Soon as Jeremiah pay me, drinks for the entire Anbu staff.
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I just don't understand why he hasn't logged on at all today :/
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I just don't understand why he hasn't logged on at all today :/
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Well this is an obvious slaughter. If it were a "track battle" it would be debatable. Erupt had the far better production with a more radio ready structure and length, but Punk's bars and style of beat were better to me.
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Well this is an obvious slaughter. If it were a "track battle" it would be debatable. Erupt had the far better production with a more radio ready structure and length, but Punk's bars and style of beat were better to me.
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Good with the personals, but I think you didn't deliver anything. So focused on rapping quickly that you never actually took the time to put the sting into the shots. It got better in the middle briefly, but didn't really pick up.
I think with your personals, you're more mentioning things without actually putting something on them. I know, it's ironic for me to say that, but I think saying "you're the worst hall of fame" needs something to it to make him feel it.
Don't really feel either track. Erupt's was much worse to listen to and much more annoying, but I feel that he had a lot more clarity and had more delivery on everything. Punk had the lyrics and actual substance though, regardless of what the substance may be (just assuming it's a track battle and not a diss battle).
I don't think it's a whitewash like everyone else does, but because Punk actually had meaning and direction to his writing, he takes it for me.
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Good with the personals, but I think you didn't deliver anything. So focused on rapping quickly that you never actually took the time to put the sting into the shots. It got better in the middle briefly, but didn't really pick up.
I think with your personals, you're more mentioning things without actually putting something on them. I know, it's ironic for me to say that, but I think saying "you're the worst hall of fame" needs something to it to make him feel it.
Don't really feel either track. Erupt's was much worse to listen to and much more annoying, but I feel that he had a lot more clarity and had more delivery on everything. Punk had the lyrics and actual substance though, regardless of what the substance may be (just assuming it's a track battle and not a diss battle).
I don't think it's a whitewash like everyone else does, but because Punk actually had meaning and direction to his writing, he takes it for me.
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good shit. you got it. ill send that 25 this week
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good shit. you got it. ill send that 25 this week
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Haha Erupt man. I don't know what's going on in the guy's life but I change my mind. I honestly hope this guy doesn't make it. If he seems genuinely bipolar on LB, swinging between insane big headedness and acknowledged lack of success by the post, can you imagine him in a celebrity environment?
Erupt is a self destruction waiting to happen, and giving him the finances to accommodate it would be disastrous.
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Haha Erupt man. I don't know what's going on in the guy's life but I change my mind. I honestly hope this guy doesn't make it. If he seems genuinely bipolar on LB, swinging between insane big headedness and acknowledged lack of success by the post, can you imagine him in a celebrity environment?
Erupt is a self destruction waiting to happen, and giving him the finances to accommodate it would be disastrous.
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lol cool story, bro.
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thats it ?
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Originally Posted by EtHnic Cleansing
Good with the personals, but I think you didn't deliver anything. So focused on rapping quickly that you never actually took the time to put the sting into the shots. It got better in the middle briefly, but didn't really pick up.
I think with your personals, you're more mentioning things without actually putting something on them. I know, it's ironic for me to say that, but I think saying "you're the worst hall of fame" needs something to it to make him feel it.
Don't really feel either track. Erupt's was much worse to listen to and much more annoying, but I feel that he had a lot more clarity and had more delivery on everything. Punk had the lyrics and actual substance though, regardless of what the substance may be (just assuming it's a track battle and not a diss battle).
I don't think it's a whitewash like everyone else does, but because Punk actually had meaning and direction to his writing, he takes it for me.
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Actually the writing came before the beat choice. I had no idea I’d be rapping at a faster pace. Trust that was not my main focus. Wasn’t a focus at all ha. Thanks for the in-depth feedback.
But for a more fun fact. Someone stole my microphone so I had to record this shit in my car off of my phones voice memos, headphones, and a custom made pop filter. sent it to my email, downloaded it to be converted, then finally dropped in audacity for noise removal. Lool
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Good with the personals, but I think you didn't deliver anything. So focused on rapping quickly that you never actually took the time to put the sting into the shots. It got better in the middle briefly, but didn't really pick up.
I think with your personals, you're more mentioning things without actually putting something on them. I know, it's ironic for me to say that, but I think saying "you're the worst hall of fame" needs something to it to make him feel it.
Don't really feel either track. Erupt's was much worse to listen to and much more annoying, but I feel that he had a lot more clarity and had more delivery on everything. Punk had the lyrics and actual substance though, regardless of what the substance may be (just assuming it's a track battle and not a diss battle).
I don't think it's a whitewash like everyone else does, but because Punk actually had meaning and direction to his writing, he takes it for me.
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Actually the writing came before the beat choice. I had no idea I’d be rapping at a faster pace. Trust that was not my main focus. Wasn’t a focus at all ha. Thanks for the in-depth feedback.
But for a more fun fact. Someone stole my microphone so I had to record this shit in my car off of my phones voice memos, headphones, and a custom made pop filter. sent it to my email, downloaded it to be converted, then finally dropped in audacity for noise removal. Lool
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