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so like ...whats it about ?
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02-15-2020, 06:33 PM
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so like ...whats it about ?
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02-15-2020, 06:54 PM
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I didn't read ANY of it.
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Then don't be so quick to assume shit.
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02-15-2020, 06:54 PM
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I didn't read ANY of it.
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Then don't be so quick to assume shit.
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02-15-2020, 07:17 PM
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I’m not a cypher guy although I have some dope ones on my page I wrote as a teen lol but in all honestly I thought this was nice. The rhyming was on point. Story telling is precise. There’s always room to grow but I enjoyed it. Keep it up
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02-15-2020, 07:17 PM
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I’m not a cypher guy although I have some dope ones on my page I wrote as a teen lol but in all honestly I thought this was nice. The rhyming was on point. Story telling is precise. There’s always room to grow but I enjoyed it. Keep it up
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02-16-2020, 12:52 AM
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I’m not a cypher guy although I have some dope ones on my page I wrote as a teen lol but in all honestly I thought this was nice. The rhyming was on point. Story telling is precise. There’s always room to grow but I enjoyed it. Keep it up
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Thanks for taking the time to read it.
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02-16-2020, 12:52 AM
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I’m not a cypher guy although I have some dope ones on my page I wrote as a teen lol but in all honestly I thought this was nice. The rhyming was on point. Story telling is precise. There’s always room to grow but I enjoyed it. Keep it up
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Thanks for taking the time to read it.
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02-16-2020, 02:21 AM
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I just realised I forgot to give any actual feedback on the verse itself lol. EtH has a point about how it’s a wall-of-text, but nonetheless it was a really enjoyable read that left me very curious to see where it’s going next. It feels like a TV episode how it finished just as your curiosity and investment in what happened next reached its peak lmao. Nice rhyming, interesting story, obviously since it hasn’t reached its conclusion the twists and turns and meta stuff hasn’t happened yet but thus far it’s definitely dope, please finish it and don’t leave us hanging
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02-16-2020, 02:21 AM
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I just realised I forgot to give any actual feedback on the verse itself lol. EtH has a point about how it’s a wall-of-text, but nonetheless it was a really enjoyable read that left me very curious to see where it’s going next. It feels like a TV episode how it finished just as your curiosity and investment in what happened next reached its peak lmao. Nice rhyming, interesting story, obviously since it hasn’t reached its conclusion the twists and turns and meta stuff hasn’t happened yet but thus far it’s definitely dope, please finish it and don’t leave us hanging
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02-16-2020, 09:34 AM
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Then don't be so quick to assume shit.
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I didn't assume anything. It is, objectively, over the line limit. Lol.
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Then don't be so quick to assume shit.
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I didn't assume anything. It is, objectively, over the line limit. Lol.
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02-16-2020, 09:46 AM
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I seriously think something is wrong with whoever's behind EtH's account. Real life, dude needs help. His level of pessimism about everything is cause for concern.
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I seriously think something is wrong with whoever's behind EtH's account. Real life, dude needs help. His level of pessimism about everything is cause for concern.
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I didn't assume anything. It is, objectively, over the line limit. Lol.
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If you read the part before the verse, you wouldn't sound dumb as fuck right now.
The moment the event was cancelled is the moment the limit no longer mattered.
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I didn't assume anything. It is, objectively, over the line limit. Lol.
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If you read the part before the verse, you wouldn't sound dumb as fuck right now.
The moment the event was cancelled is the moment the limit no longer mattered.
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If you read the part before the verse, you wouldn't sound dumb as fuck right now.
The moment the event was cancelled is the moment the limit no longer mattered.
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So, let's say I did read the small segment before this verse, in which you say the piece, despite being well over the line limit, still isn't finished.
You were going to submit an unfinished piece for the battle, but were still hyping yourself up like you couldn't lose?
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If you read the part before the verse, you wouldn't sound dumb as fuck right now.
The moment the event was cancelled is the moment the limit no longer mattered.
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So, let's say I did read the small segment before this verse, in which you say the piece, despite being well over the line limit, still isn't finished.
You were going to submit an unfinished piece for the battle, but were still hyping yourself up like you couldn't lose?
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Originally Posted by REZN
So, let's say I did read the small segment before this verse, in which you say the piece, despite being well over the line limit, still isn't finished.
You were going to submit an unfinished piece for the battle, but were still hyping yourself up like you couldn't lose?
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You're an idiot who likes to assume shit.
If the event wasn't cancelled I would have finished it, within the line limit and you along w the others would have not wrote something better. Call it ego if you want, I don't give a fuck. I doubt any of you would have taken it serious enough to stand a chance.
Did I write that basic enough for you to understand?
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So, let's say I did read the small segment before this verse, in which you say the piece, despite being well over the line limit, still isn't finished.
You were going to submit an unfinished piece for the battle, but were still hyping yourself up like you couldn't lose?
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You're an idiot who likes to assume shit.
If the event wasn't cancelled I would have finished it, within the line limit and you along w the others would have not wrote something better. Call it ego if you want, I don't give a fuck. I doubt any of you would have taken it serious enough to stand a chance.
Did I write that basic enough for you to understand?
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