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Unread 08-05-2013, 07:14 PM
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That is why LB is looked down upon everywhere else.

Cause we enjoy gay shit like
This fruit shops at Payless, probably buyin PEARS of shoes!

When Pears of shoes?? does not make sense.

My main thing which you admitted anyways was that it doesn't work both ways. I guess that's just my own opinion on it. If the wordplay doesn't make sense when its read the other way around, I'd take points off for that.

He'll be glad he ate her when I call or see em
^ and that is what I meant by bad wording.. Call Ah See Em/Call or see em

The overall punch was worded bad..
you basically made a statement saying that you showed him the tricks cause he was looked for a girl and whenever you called or saw em he was glad that he ate her. If it was worded in a way to make fun and diss him okay. But your line was basically a statement in that way, not a punch. and you only wrote it the way you did to use the forced wordplay

Hell I'm sure I have plenty of fucked up lines of my own too. But whatever.

Last edited by The Law; 08-05-2013 at 07:16 PM.
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Unread 08-05-2013, 07:14 PM   #11
 
The Law
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That is why LB is looked down upon everywhere else.

Cause we enjoy gay shit like
This fruit shops at Payless, probably buyin PEARS of shoes!

When Pears of shoes?? does not make sense.

My main thing which you admitted anyways was that it doesn't work both ways. I guess that's just my own opinion on it. If the wordplay doesn't make sense when its read the other way around, I'd take points off for that.

He'll be glad he ate her when I call or see em
^ and that is what I meant by bad wording.. Call Ah See Em/Call or see em

The overall punch was worded bad..
you basically made a statement saying that you showed him the tricks cause he was looked for a girl and whenever you called or saw em he was glad that he ate her. If it was worded in a way to make fun and diss him okay. But your line was basically a statement in that way, not a punch. and you only wrote it the way you did to use the forced wordplay

Hell I'm sure I have plenty of fucked up lines of my own too. But whatever.

Last edited by The Law; 08-05-2013 at 07:16 PM.
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